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[999] The Goddess Of Spring (Trying to cut it down for a contest)
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Vesurel is age 99
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The Goddess of Spring

This is a piece I've previously submitted to destructive readers and have come back to try and cut it down to fit into a flash fiction contest. All feedback is appreciated but as it's just below the word limit I don't have room for expansion unless you can also suggest what can be cut.

Thanks for reading and here's a link to my critique of a 1020 word piece.

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8lxe9w/1020_the_land_where_demons_tread_revision_2/dzlqmfa/

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