Hey y'all this is my first attempt writing a prompt, or any kinda erotica for that matter. I'm looking for advice on how to build more narrative tension, cuz I've found that that's one of the main things that draws me in with erotica. The payoff rarely is as hot as the buildup, but outside of this community I see NO ONE putting in the effort for it so I haven't been able to practice.

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I haven't told anyone this before, but sometimes if I wake up in the morning feeling too horny, I'll slip the laciest lingerie I own on underneath my scrubs to go to work. All day long, while I'm feeding patients, while I'm changing their clothes, while my body is pressed up against theirs as I turn them over, I feel the tightness of the fabric barely covering my ass, the lace of my bra brushing against my nipples.

Sometimes, with particularly hot patients, or ones that can barely get out of bed, I imagine myself climbing onto their bed, straddling them, seeing if they can still get hard enough to fuck me. Other times I imagine them not being able to and me comforting them, taking their soft dick in my mouth, and gently pleasing them as they lay back. I think it comes from seeing so many people so sad, so cooped up, needing some release and excitement in their lives.

I've never taken it farther than my imaginings, stroking myself in the hot shower back at home or riding a dildo with my eyes closed, envisioning whoever caught my fancy that day and how happy I was making them.

Then I walked into your room.

You seemed particularly desperate. I couldn't tell if you were used to getting fucked a lot and being stuck in here was catching up to you or if you hadn't been fucked in waaaay too long and were already pent up. When I came in to get report from the nurse who'd been there that day though, I immediately saw how you were eyeing her ass when she turned around, how your eyes would flick away when she walked back. I saw you shifting under the covers, one of your legs slightly raised like you had something to hide. I saw your gaze slip down towards my chest as I introduced myself, and the slight flush of your cheeks. I was suddenly more aware than ever of the feel of the white lace under my scrubs, mind flush with ideas of what we could do to each other. After a report I barely heard, I stepped out of the room and took a deep breath to steady myself.

Everyone says fucking patients is wrong, but it's a nurse's job to make people feel good. Right?

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Who are you? Why are you in the hospital? Are you actually wanting to fuck me, or has my horniness finally gotten the better of me and I'm reading the room wrong?

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Kink list: lingerie, service top, D/s, enthusiastic consent, dubcon, exhibitionism, risky sex, anal, happy to discuss more in DMs

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I'm looking for a mid-length roleplay with potential to develop to long-term, starting with a slow burn and lots of tension. I like detailed responses, 3-5 paragraphs most of the time unless quicker banter is happening, and I value quality over speed of response. I get off most on the tension, so a slower pace both narratively and for responses works well for me.

If this sounds fun, let's talk more!