Hello great DPP writers!

I'd love your feedback on this prompt. It's not perfect, I know, but I can't quite figure out what would make it better. Rip it apart. Tell me it's terrible, tell me it's the worst thing you've ever read. And then give me one tiny piece of advice to make it better. I'll take it.

Title : 40 M4F : Escaping the shallow end of the gene pool : Breeding with swingers

"Honey, Michael, can you get that? That should be them!"

Sarah excitedly calls out from the bedroom as she puts the finishing touches on her makeup. My wife always likes to look perfect for any new play friends.

We've been in the lifestyle for a few years, and it has been a blast, we'd had a lot of fun with new couples and even a few unicorns. But when we hit our late thirties, the baby fever hit us both hard and we wanted to settle down a bit. When the doctor told us about the rare recessive gene that we both carried, it was devastating. We were resigned to IVF and almost considered surrogacy, but it felt too... clinical.

Then we discovered the breeding tag on swingerlifestyles.com and we were hooked.

Weeks spent poring over different couple profiles until we found another couple with exactly the same issue and we began exchanging messages. It escalated quickly, and after a few weeks we were both tracking when our wives were ovulating, getting the genetic testing done, and finally after months of this, we got an envelope in the mail with the results. We were a perfect match with them.

"Sarah, I'll get it, take your time!"

I look over at the guest bedroom we set up for them, and it's perfect. They'll be right at home here for the summer, and three months later, both our wives will hopefully be pregnant with each other's babies.

"Welcome folks, so excited to see you both!"

I say as I smile broadly, taking in the curvy woman and handsome man in his late thirties in front of me. My eyes drop to the woman's belly, flat and perfect, knowing that I'll soon be knocking her up. As my wife appears behind me, I notice the husband's gaze shift, and he licks his lips.

We're thinking the same thing. This is going to be fun.

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Hi there! I'm Michael, and I'd love to find someone who could write the female parts of this, either one or both. If you'd like to play both the husband & wife of the opposite couple, even better!

The premise : Two couples that realize they have a rare genetic defect that means that they have to breed with another couple. It's an all summer long breeding project, and by the end of the summer, both wives are pregnant. This is meant to be fun, happy and joyful!

The twist : The couples are each from different races (I'm open to any race combination). The tension and exploration is about discovering how the race and physical differences change the sex they experience.

How to play : Chat/DM/Discord is fine, and would love a long term RP. Hit me up here. See you soon :)

Kinks : breeding, interracial, swinging, foursomes, pregnancy, slow/steamy and more (full list). Did I mention breeding? Oh right, I did. Breeding.

Limits : scat/snuff.