Here's a light femdom story prompt that I've put together and I'm looking for feedback on it before it goes live on DPP, any and all critique is welcome! let me know where I went right and where I fucked up!

The Void in our Lives, how you saved me by making me yours and yours alone

You found me at the dance club, half awake and drunk as a skunk. Even after trying to find the rest of my party and failing miserably, you knew that you couldn’t just leave me there to my own devices,you were such a caring soul after all. Who knows what would happen to me? So you took it upon yourself to take care of me, at least until the morning when I awoke upon your couch, probably with a hangover, and maybe a little wiser for it as well.

When I awoke, I couldn’t remember anything, where I lived, what I did, or how I got here. I couldn’t even remember my name. If it wasn’t for the wristband on my arm, then I wouldn’t have even known that I was called Thomas. At least that’s what I thought, having lost my wallet, and my phone, I had no way to confirm who I was, and I was now panicking a little, having woken up in this unknown place with nobody to greet me.

It was a clean and well kept space, unlike myself as I would soon find out as I had managed to find my way to the bathroom, and after taking care of my morning business, I stared at my reflection in the mirror. Unkempt brown hair, no doubt due to bed head, a scruffy beard, clearly in need of a shave, with an average build with average height that would hide my true strength.

That was when I was greeted by you with “Hello, glad to see you’re awake, now about last night.” and that’s when I turned around and saw her, who I assumed, to be the owner of this abode. To me, she was a goddess, and having no idea what I should do or say only thinking ‘Did she save me from myself?’ as I stood there like a slack jawed idiot.

Hello DPP, I am looking to play out a light femdom prompt, where you, out of the kindness of your own heart, have decided to save Thomas from his own self and help rebuild Thomas’s life after having discovered me at the bar drunk as a skunk and passed out with nobody else around.

I’m also open to suggestions and want to hear your ideas as well! When Writing your response, please just dive right in, don’t forget to include your character's description and some info about them. I have a preference for playing on discord but reddit chat and PM are both available as options as well.

Kinks include, but not limited to: Light Femdom, Anal, Blowjobs, Cum, Cumplay, Bondage, Dub/Non-con, Freeuse.

Limits include: Scat, Piss(receiving) Blood, Vomit, Gore, Vore.

If you have questions please feel free to message me before writing your response if you wish. I’m looking forward to hearing from you and reading some Orange Letters in my Inbox soon!