Hello DPP Workshop! I am new to writing prompts for DPP and was looking for some advice on my writing.

A little about my history of writing: I've been writing stories on and off over the course of the past five years, but never really took it too seriously. I just viewed it as a way to have a positive place to express my thoughts and a way to channel my own sexual ideas. Upon finding DPP, I saw it as a sign that I should see what others think of my writing. So although I am new to writing prompts, I'm not new to writing in general. Therefore, I like to be not just a story teller but one who wants to listen to what the partner wants.

So far, I feel like my prompts have fallen short. Hardly anybody seems interested and I'm not sure if it is because of the way I write or if it's some other reason. Regardless, I would like to better my writing to not only help me but to help any partner I might talk to on DPP.

My style of writing: I like to keep a sense of realism with my prompts, but also enough flexibility to be able to do what both of us enjoy. Some of my prompts I write are based on "spiced up" real life experiences, whereas other ones are focused more on fantasy. This is why some of my prompts seem to have a different style of writing and it's also why some of them might seem awkward to read. However I'm honestly not sure how they read so I'm definitely looking for feedback if anyone happens to look at them.

These two prompts I've chosen for the workshop are ones that I feel have a good base and have potential. What I tried to do was write a little description to describe the prompt while also throwing in some dialogue that I thought of for that prompt. Hopefully, this gives off a mix of authenticity and a taste of what the actual prompt has in store.

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[M4F] Your New Girlfriend Finds Your Old Fleshlight

This prompt revolves heavily around edging, teasing and denial. Even some light bondage or BDSM would work well. Also creativity is key. This is one of those prompts with many different options for not only the setup, but the prompt as a whole.

This one discusses the role of two college students who just started dating. He hasn't had a girlfriend in a very long time, but she thinks that is kinda cute about him. One day, he tells her he has to clean out his apartment during the day. She comes over halfway through the day to say hi and she starts to help out. As she grabs some boxes out of the back closet, a thought crosses his mind upping his heartrate quick.

"Oh fuck! My fleshlight is in the closet!" races through his mind as he sits on the other side of the room. How something like this slipped past his mind astounds him. He only bought it to work on his sexual stamina while he was single and not seeing anyone. It always stayed in the back of the closet to hide it from anyone who might come over. As this thought panics him, he looks up and over to see her opening a box. She pulls out what she believes to be a black tube. "What the fuck is this?" She pulls off the cap and sees the opening to the Fleshlight.

"That's it. I'm fucked. It's over." is the only thing he can think of as he walks over to where she is. So much is racing through his mind he can't even open his mouth to describe what it is. "It's a Fleshlight." he admits after taking a deep breath. Expecting her to laugh or be degrading about it, she seems more curious than anything. "What is it for?" she asks curiously as she plays with the opening with her fingers and examines the device. "It's to work on stamina. I bought it when I was single so I wouldn't be this two pump chump when I finally found someone." he confesses as he starts to notice her playing with it. "I know what you're thinking, it's embarrassing." he says as he wonders what she is thinking.

Suddenly, she places the Fleshlight down and walks over to the door. He thinks she is about to leave, not just his apartment but leave him too. But instead, she goes over to close the bedroom door. She locks it and turns around. "Well let's see if it helped. Get naked and lay on the bed."

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[M4F] She's addicted to you in bed and told her best friend about it. Now she wants to try.

This one revolves around two horny college students who have been best friends for years named Ashley and Kelly. The themes of this one mainly involves cheating, sneaking around and creativity. There are definitely different options for this one too. Maybe some blackmail would be an interesting route to go down. Definitely open to some suggestions.

These two girls have a bit of a high sex drive and are very flirtacious. They are very open with each other and they tell each other everything. Kelly started dating a new guy a couple of weeks ago, someone who happened to be friends with both of them. Ashley used to have a thing for Kelly's new boyfriend, but it eventually faded and she never really pursued it.

Kelly and her new boyfriend just recently had sex for the first time. Kelly wanted it badly from the start, but wanted to take things a little slower because of some bad experiences with guys recently. The sex was absolutely amazing as she clawed into his back and gripped the sheets for an hour of passion. Not only did she need it badly, but it possibly could've been the best sex she's ever had. What blew her mind even more however was how she found out that he was a virgin. It was his first time and he gave her the best experience in bed she's ever had. With Ashley and kelly always telling each other everything, Kelly of course goes running to Ashley the next day with all of the juicy details.

"No fucking way he lasted an hour his first time in bed!" Ashley proclaims shocked after hearing the entire evening's events. "I wouldn't lie to you Ashley, and I don't think he would lie to me. He just doesn't seem like the type of person to do that." Kelly explains. "That just blows my mind. Like wow." Ashley says as she sits there a little surprised at the story of a hot evening she was just told. Inside, she is a little bit disappointed with herself and jealous of Kelly's new man. She has known this guy for years and had a thing for him at one point, and suddenly she feels like she wasted an opportunity she should've taken.

Days later, Ashley and Kelly are hanging out at Ashley's house when Kelly asks if it it's okay if her boyfriend stops by. This being the first time she could see him since Ashley heard about their night, Ashley says "Of course!" as she begins to scheme in her head. To make things worse for Ashley, she was feeling extra horny today for some strange reason. "How am I gonna sit here and watch those two play with each other in front of me after knowing about how he fucks her?!" Ashley thinks furiously as she tries to stay calm and think about what she is going to do. Ashley begins to think of some creative ideas in her head to get him alone throughout the day, and tells Kelly she's going to the bathroom.

Ashley walks upstairs to her bedroom to find something sexy to wear underneath her clothes and pretty herself up. As she finishes up, she hears the doorbell ring. She adjusts her bra, pulls her dress up a tiny bit and takes one last look in the mirror admiring how her body looks. She winks in the mirror feeling confident, and walks out of her bedroom. She walks into the living room seeing Kelly and her boyfriend smiling slighly flirtaciously, but with a plan in mind on how to make him want her.

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I understand these aren't the most complex or intimate prompts, but they are prompts that I've been very interested in and would like some feedback on how to better the writing or how to make the post stand out better. I'm also looking for feedback on the titles too because I know that finding the right title to catch interest is very important. Please keep in mind that I am not the most experienced writer, therefore there might be some things that aren't worded the best way or there might be some mistakes. However, I am interested in learning from mistakes and trying to become a better writer.

If you have some feedback that you do not want to post publicly, feel free to message me. If you only want to focus on one of the prompts instead of both of them, that's fine too. I just wanted to give the reader a choice to choose from. Thank you so much and hope to hear from some of you soon!