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Anyone willing to critique my Cyberpunk short-story?
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Hello, I am a creative writer looking for some general critique/analysis feedback on this Cyberpunk story I've written (4450 words). Feel free to be as honest and specific as possible. My goal here is to improve as a writer. Thanks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qaSLITwu7JTC4EF5DphWxUmrv1ZU49zD/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=109883171471163892523&rtpof=true&sd=true

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