This post has been de-listed
It is no longer included in search results and normal feeds (front page, hot posts, subreddit posts, etc). It remains visible only via the author's post history.
1
Anyone willing to critique my Cyberpunk short-story?
Post Body
Hello, I am a relatively new creative writer and a novice Redditor looking for some general critique/analysis feedback on this Cyberpunk story I've written (3300 words). Feel free to be as honest and specific as possible. My goal is to improve as a writer. Also, I would like some suggestions on a title as the current one is something of a placeholder still. Thanks!
*I submitted the story to the "Writers and illustrates of the future" contest. As such, I have temporarily withdrawn the story.
Author
Account Strength
100%
Account Age
4 years
Verified Email
Yes
Verified Flair
No
Total Karma
22,173
Link Karma
293
Comment Karma
20,956
Profile updated: 1 day ago
Posts updated: 3 months ago
Subreddit
Post Details
We try to extract some basic information from the post title. This is not
always successful or accurate, please use your best judgement and compare
these values to the post title and body for confirmation.
- Posted
- 4 years ago
- Reddit URL
- View post on reddit.com
- External URL
- reddit.com/r/Cyberpunk/c...