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Hi there! I've just finished a very short story, clocking in at not even one thousand words and written in one sitting. I wanted to get out of my comfort zone and try something different, so I decided to experiment with a low-concept story and here we are. If you want to go in blind, ignore the spoilers below and thank you very much for your time in advance.
I'd be interested in the usual stuff - is the prose solid, is it a smooth read, does it make you feel something and if so what? What tripped you up, annoyed or bored you?
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