Hey people! I’m really here to get some opinions on my book as it currently stands, some opinions on possible changes are welcome.

Link here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ALnu-IExBnQdWoh3bGgXKGHH0Il-aVtYsqAenchyIm8/edit

Diego Ramirez is a man who lost his best life ten years ago as a werewolf’s mate and family who cared for him. A decade later, Diego seeks to reclaim it all. To accomplish this, he will remedy the scourge of the werewolves that had his mate, Alpha Liz Vandalia, fearing for his safety, the Lycanthro-Phage Virus. It was the reason Liz banished him, as she hurt him under his unhinging influence. Now a biochemist, Diego works to heal this affliction, and for his mate, he will brave any danger the task entails.

Liz Vandalia always isolated herself. She believed any relationship with Alphas, the most dangerous werewolves, was a risk to those she cared for. Diego changed all that, she even connected with her family. When he entered her life, she obtained a near-perfect peace, but in madness only the LPV could bring, she hurt him and scarred herself. After banishing him, few things allowed her broken heart solace. So, she devoted herself to being her pack’s leader. When Diego returns with an irrefutable offer, she must put her pack above her fear and risk getting her heart back.

The two will unite to ensure a vaccine is made. They will face terrorist wolves who believe humanity to be gods, try to keep it together with each other, and hopefully find their way back together. Hopefully.