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A mate bond between a human and werewolf is rare, making Diego Ramirez's bond to Alpha Liz Vandalia a damn miracle, one neither wishes to lose. Even as teenagers, the others were a new start, to Diego she was his home, and to Liz, he was her hope. Unfortunately, in fear for Diego's safety, Liz was forced to let him go.
Ten years later, Diego is ready to confront the source of that fear, the Virus. A disease that forces wolves to become feral, and it had forced Liz to hurt him, leaving him scarred. So, he studied, went to college and became a Biochemist. He returned to Liz's pack, the Silver Fangs, to develop the drug that would slay her fear. Diego bore confidence Liz would not turn him away, there was no way she could do so to her people's hope.
In ten years, Liz had become a beloved leader of her pack, yet always felt incomplete without her mate. However, she would weather such pain for his safety. Upon his return and declaration of his intentions, Liz Vandalia had seen no way of denying him, perhaps she didn't want to. Her whole life, Liz was never confident in her abilities, she feared the Virus and that she could not safeguard Diego. Especially after scaring him. Now, she swears to protect him, even if she must stay away.
Together, they will face enemies who oppose their mission. But even if they overcome these foes, can they enjoy the bond that drives them both?
Greetings people, I am nearly done with my novelet here and I would like some beta readers check it out before I end things off.
Anyone will do but I do specifically need the advise of women here, I don't want my main male protagonist to be seen as a forcing towards my MFC. I think I took every precaution under the sun with that but there is this voice in the back of my head doubting me. So I need the ladies perspective here.
Other things I'm looking for include:
Plot rating Pace rating Character rating
Thanks in advance to anyone who wants to give me a chance!
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