currently untitled, looking for a beta reader not just for this work but for some other works as my current beta reader is indisposed for an indefinite period of time

this is a project for my creative writing class and it's also apparently our final. i'm planning on expanding it past that and i would like it to be minimum 10k words? not sure. i've never written a whole story past 5k, the most i've ever done is 21k and it was an anthology of sorts.

not really looking for grammar help bc i've got that done pretty sure i can figure it out myself but i would like ways to advance the plot and ideas for the future without being unoriginal or a copy.

if there's anything else i should add, let me know, it's my first reddit post :x TW FOR DEATH/VIOLENCE?

the plot is. certainly a plot. i'm making it up as i go along but it's not really easy to explain? i'm terrible at summarizing my works.

here is the google doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DTwTJtP8DQ5utnAnd7qecsE1MKn_ZGv6MEt2DTOKf2o/edit?usp=sharing