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• Story Blurb: A traumatized woman with disabilities goes missing after an incident in a hospital only to be safely guarded by the Winx and discovering her own magical abilities in a fantastic world of magic, technology, and more. Her closes friends are worried sick about her and team members are missing. What will happen to the remaining team members, will our protagonist ever get back to a normal life? Who knows?
  
• Feedback Type Requested: Spelling, Grammar, Story Flow, better ways to describe people, places, etc., Suggestions on where to take the story from it's present form and move the plot forward, and any other relevant feedback that is needed to improve the story
• Critique Swap Availability: I am not available for Critique Swap due to medical issues
• Content Warning Tags: This story comes from my own very real experiences in the medical setting and contains fictionalized representations of horrible healthcare delivery and abuse/violence against patients with disabilities.
• Content Notification: This story uses terms and slang used throughout my volunteer job and the first time these terms come up they are mentioned.
• Additional Information: This story was originally published on WattPad in its current form given that one of my associates needed a better way to interact with it because of their use of a screen reader and conflicts with G-Drive. I received approval to post the beta request here yesterday (2023.11.24).

All feedback where given will be taken very seriously and will be implemented where possible.

I look forward to any sort of feedback I can get and appreciate any help that can be given.