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[In Progress] [66k] [Science-fantasy] Xenoverse : Haunting Past
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Irene Stevens, born as a mage and a bio-engineered warrior, a mutant and forced to live in disguise, she was already something that was not supposed to exist in the futuristic world. Her creators were disappointed and tried to destroy her but she was saved by a man who would become her father, one who leads the secret magic world, Calan the commander of M.O.D.E.

Inspired by Calan, Irene joined the organization and for years would fight alongside her father to protect the world from those who would use magic for evil. This comes to head when her creators, the WLF create a specialized tracker to search for ancient crystals whose power can unleash a being to help them achieve their goal of destroying the current world order.

Irene discovers she can sense the effect of the tracker on the crystals and so she is dispatched to retrieve them before the WLF, which would be fine if her father had not stuck her with a team. As the mission goes on the team begins to prove they can be trusted that they can be her people but Irene's fear stops her from truly connecting with them and worse the mission continuously hammers home the reasons for her pain and the pain of many before her. Leading Irene to begin questioning, if fighting for a world that would likely destroy her if she was revealed is worth anything.


HI people my book is the beginning of a series I hope to create. Combining elements of sci fi and fantasy to give ya'll a unique setting where I hope to tell a great story.

At this time I cannot do a swap, the book will dome in a week and there after I need to do some serious editing. If you choose to accept simply type yes in the comment section and I'll dm you the link.

By the way I'll let you in on my requests for this ahead of time so, you can decide if it's something you can do.

  1. I've been told my verb tenses are not the best so if you find any of that just put a # there.

  2. I want to hear what you think of the flow, plot, world building and pacing.

  3. I want to know what you think of the characters. Just your general opinion on them is fine.

  4. Lastly I want your overall rating of the book out of ten.

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