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[Complete] [106k] [YA Fantasy] Heir of the Adversaries
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akutasushi is in YA Fantasy
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Hello! I'm looking for a beta reader/readers who are well versed with this genre, enjoy fantasy novels involving magic and royalty, and are willing to help me get through this within the next few months.

I'm looking for flow/pacing, dialogue, and prose critique. Doesn't matter if you can do all of them or only one of them, your input is very helpful. I am also interested in a swap!

WARNINGS: Depictions of violence, abuse and mentions of abuse, death, and some blood.

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All Juno wanted was a place to call home. When she sees her chance, she grabs a hold of it and takes off, wanting a taste of that life she had only dreamed of. What she didn't expect was to fall headfirst into a war, one that brings her to her greatest conflict. Will she fall into the darkness of her mother's hold, or will she fight her way toward the moonlight?

First Half of Chapter One

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