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Hey friends, the "BB Cheerleading Sisters" Saga has spanned over 11 Parts/Chapters (sorry, I like long form stories with plenty of build up, and truthfully I write mostly for my own amusement)...however I am starting to work on the next series of chapters and would love some more feedback.
If you haven't already checked out all the parts please click my bio (or I'll paste them below) and work your way through (sorry if my writing isn't fantastic). The story ranged from the sisters first sack tapping their neighbour, and evolved into more sexual teasing, and eventually climaxing when their sadistic Momma (Ms. Taylor) joined in the fun. After that the sisters attended a Self Defence class where we met some new characters including other cheerleaders from their squad and the Amazon Goddess self defence instructor Naomi who eventually destroyed the male instructor (whoops, spoiler alert).
From here I have a few ideas and thoughts I wanted feed back on:
- Alexia and Naomi become girlfriends. I thought this dynamic could be hot, but perhaps it's just my warped mind? I don't like to go "hardcore" with the sexual elements, but a pair of hot lesbians, making out and busting balls with no empathy might be fun to explore?
- McKayla and Scotty (boy next door) become a couple. Again, maybe McKayla could become even more sexual with Scotty, but of course she might still invite her sister/gf to join in the bb games?
- Lastly, (and most controversially) how sexual can the sisters be around one another? Can they take turns using the boy next door sexually? Or is that too much? I've always felt like a story is the safest/best place to let this fantasy play out, and if the sex is not happening with each other I feel like it's safe? Maybe?
- Do you like, or not like having a visual or video components embedded into stories? I wasn't able to figure out how to attach jpegs into my stories, but internally I did find some awesome AI images that helped bring the fantasy to life (or include links to videos where I drew inspiration from). However the potential negative is perhaps my fantasy image differs from yours, and perhaps letting one's imagination "paint the picture" is more beneficial?
Thanks is advance!
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