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This story will not be for everyone. It is truly an act of submission. For readers who are not submissive or do not wish to immerse themselves in this, you may not enjoy it. If you are submissive, especially if you have a need without anyone to submit to, you may quite enjoy this. As always, I appreciate votes, comments, feedback, etc.
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Hello little one.
Congratulations on taking the first step in your journey. āYour journeyā - those words describe a situation that is of your choice, your own volition. But that is neither the case, nor what you want. Consent is important, and you may choose to stop reading at any time, but you wonāt because you are a good girl. A good girl who longs to be controlled. Say it for me nowā¦
Iām a good girl.
Very good. That is truly your first step, words escaping from your mouth that you were told to say. But did those words actually get said or did you simply read them. Perhaps you thought about saying them aloud but you hesitated or you thought it was silly.
Either way, if they werenāt said, you may have failed to feel the rush of pleasure from the act of submission. As simple as it is, speaking the words given to you by a dominant man is an act of submission. And you want to submit, you want to be a good girl.
I want to be a good girl.
Ahh yes, I can practically hear the words through my laptop. If you hadnāt said them the first time, you did this time. There is something missing in your life, something for which you want. You desperately feel the need to be dominated. This need has been building, whether for weeks, months, maybe years.
It doesnāt matter how long it has been buried inside of you, what matters is the desire to release it. You want an outlet, a way to meet this growing urge. It is strong, much stronger than a want. It is akin to the need for air. You need to be controlled.
I need to be controlled.
One sentence. Feel what that does for you, to your body. The rushā¦ goosebumps from saying the words, your heart beating faster as you read the next line, wonder what comes next. Donāt get ahead of yourself, savor each word. Breathe. The excitement of the situation may have you jumping ahead, wanting to see where this goes, but an important part of submission is obedience. As noted above, your will is not your own. Every step in this journey is important and not of your control. Each line, each word as written is just as meaningful as the words that you say aloud.
I will obey.
Good girl. Obedience deserves praise. You have made it this far, you most certainly are deserving of praise. As you continue to read, continue to submit, you will receive more praise. For some submissives, praise is like a drug that fuels their desires. They need to please, they need to submit, and they need reassurance that they are doing well. I am pleased you have read this far. I am pleased that you continue to say the words I want coming out of your mouth. I am quite pleased that you have chosen this act of submission.
I will submit for you.
Good girl. Another step in your journey. No longer are your words generic, out there to anyone. No, now you have said that you will submit to me. You will submit to me. Despite being a random stranger on the internet, you are entranced by my writing. It has started to unlock the desires you feel deep inside you. If you close your eyes, you may even start to hear a voice inside your head. A voice that speaks of your submission. A voice that tells you to let go of control.
Please control me.
Words. With simply the words on the page I have created this journey for you. Your fantasies are deeper than these words. Your fantasies involve a voice, his breath against your skin, his hands on your flesh, the bite of the rope digging into your wrists. Your fantasies are of what you donāt have, possibly what you canāt have. But this is real, the words you read are real, the author of these words is real and is controlling you. And you are speaking your first act of submission. Speak your words, tell me what you desire.
I need to be dominated by a strong man.
Good girl. However, there is one word that is incorrect in that sentenceā¦ āneedā. For a submissive, her needs are the needs of her Dom. She needs to please him and in turn she will be rewarded, through praise and through her own pleasure. You want to be dominated, you want to submit. In turn, you need to please him.
Iām sure by now, you have noticed your pleasure rising. In reading, in being instructed, in the words that you have said. I can imagine you are wet, it is possible that right now you are even touching yourself. You have felt your desire build on this journey. You wish to feel the pleasure of an orgasm that comes with your submission.
I want to cum while submitting.
Just remember, this may be your journey, but you are not in control. To give up control means that your desires may not be priority.
Donāt touch yourself. Feel your urges build as you continue to read. You may wish to get more comfortable, remove your clothing. You may wish to feel more submissive, kneeling on the floor with your legs spread as you read. You should.
Give in to this act of submission. Think about your fantasies. Think less about the control you give up and instead about how you obey. Picture yourself, close your eyes, see the woman you wish to be submitting fully to your Dom, then open your eyes and be that woman.
I am completely yours Sir.
Yet another wonderful step in your submission. Good girl. I praise you for the respect you show to me and for giving yourself to me entirely. Relinquishing your mind - as evidenced by the fact that only these words have led you here. Relinquishing your body - as evidenced by your wetness, which you are still not giving into. Relinquishing your soul - I havenāt yet taken control of that yet. It will comeā¦ with time.
Allow yourself to imagine the future, your submission is complete. You are on your knees for me, I step behind you holding the collar you have wanted around your neck. You lick your lips in anticipation. Not only of being collared, but of what will surely follow. Your heartbeat quickens, not in anxiety over what may come, noā¦ only in yearning for you to prove you are worthy. Worthy of pleasure.
Please may I touch myself.
You may. This is your journey and if you have submitted, then it will end with your pleasure. Again, there is no Dom physically in the room with you now, there is no one at your door waiting to collar you, yet this is still real. As real as you wish to make it. My words are real, your words and your desire are real. Your lack of control over your body, your urges, your desire, your ability to touch yourself are real. This is your journey, your fantasy, your act of submission.
Thank you for allowing me to submit to you.
Good girl. So obedient. So respectful. I can only imagine how you have longed to submit. I can also only imagine how terrific you feel touching yourself now. Sex and cumming is enjoyable for you but when combined with the act of submission, it heightens the pleasure. You did well denying yourself the pleasure of being touched. It was because it was my desire to have you wait. Because you obeyed me, because you were a good girl, you may now ask for what you really want.
Please may I cum Sir.
In a moment, you will close your eyes, picture how you want this journey to continue, how you want it to end. Picture how you will obey and what you will say next, or if you will speak at all. Close your eyes, imagine being the submissive woman you are, and cum for now. Enjoy your orgasm.
ā¦ Thank you for letting me cum Sir.
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