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My first time posting any of my writings. Trying to make this a full novel. But hitting walls. Written from first person POV all fiction.
After enjoying a night of drinking I say “let's go explore this abandoned building", you agree even though in this state we are in it is not a good idea. But alas we are on our way. I then somehow trick you into a game of hide and seek once we are there. So naturally I get a headstart. You stand on the first floor in one of the rooms waiting. I get running. "And begin!" I scream as I start running. You hear me take off and start the count. You're supposed to count to 30 but like an impatient predator on the hunt you only make it to 10. You are unaware I am on a different floor bouncing around and hiding. So what I hear next sends shivers down my spine and makes me giddy in excitement. Like a wolf who is ravenous and hungry you start raging around. Cussing, screaming, slamming things down, tossing things around. Utterly destroying things around you to find your meal. I try to make no noise as I hop around from floor to floor running through each room. But it doesn't work and you hear me. Just as a hunter locks in on the deer they're hunting you lock in on my sound. I run scrambling to get away but it only gets me so far. I try to run and hide again but you are laser focused. Finally you catch me. You find where I am hiding and tear everything apart to get right to me. Pinning me down you sink your teeth into my neck. I can feel you smile and your body tense as you relish in the meal you are about to feast in. With me still pinned down and your teeth still sunk in me you begin ripping off my clothes and not nicely either. I try to fight, try to wiggle away. With frustration you release your teeth from my skin and brandish a knife. Holding the cold blade to the skin of my neck you lean in and whisper in my ear letting me know in very certain words that if I don't fucking stop and let you feed then there would be hell to pay for me. I already made you run. Already made you fight. Already made you tear the building down to the fucking foundations just to have a meal. So I am going to lie there like a good little girl and let you eat. With me still pinned down and your teeth still sunk in me you begin ripping off my clothes and not nicely either. Upon seeing my naked body you rise up a little and begin inspecting my body. Looking me up and down with a tad bit of drool forming in your mouth. Your left hand travels and your right hand stays right where it is with the blade pressed firmly into my neck. I feel your hand rub my cheek, it traces a path down my neck, groping my breast, lightly ever so lightly down my stomach, making its way past my wet opening and to my thigh. You continue teasing me. Watching me arch and writhe with a devious look on my face. "It's only fair after making me chase you down all this time." You say. I whine and it only fuels your deviousness more. I can feel the wetness slipping down from my opening all the way down to my thighs. Your fingers are covered. But that doesn't stop you. Before I know it you're whispering let me get a taste and your face is shoved between my legs. You’re down there for what seems like eternity. It could have been hours, you there eating like I am the last meal on earth. I wiggle and writhe underneath you. Squirming while letting the most deepest moans leave from depth within me and escape out of my mouth. All while the heat flows through my veins. Your tongue sends electricity through my body. Finally you come up for air, sitting back on your knees you just begin staring at me. As you do my body falls flat, a deep breath coming within my lungs. After a few moments I just hear the words “Oh you think I am done with you?” escape your lips. I brace myself, my facial expression probably looking like a deer caught in the headlights. You press down into me, sinking the length of your cock into my warm wetness. Fuck. You’re more than my tiny little body can handle. As if you were reading my mind you lean down further until you are parallel to my ear. “I’ll be gentle with you…for now” you growl. Your thrusts pick up, so does your breath. Your breath is ever so warm on my neck. You listen for the hitch in my voice. Once you find it, that only fuels you more. Harder you go slamming into like my cunt has angered you. Your hand comes up and wrap around my neck slowly gripping tighter as you slam into me harder. I begin getting lightheaded as my breath slip from me and instead my body slips into ecstasy. My time is coming I can feel it. Seeing the change in my face that's just the ammunition you need. Faster you go, I feel the orgasm build deep within me. Slowly ever so slowly as it rises through my body. You don't stop just keep going like you're trying to dig it out of me. Finally it reaches my blossoming flower with that I arch my back and my eyes roll while you continue pumping into me. "That's it babygirl let it go." That's just what I needed. Warm, sticky wetness comes shooting out of me like a volcano. Soaking your member and dripping all the way down to your balls. It's everywhere. All over you. All down my thighs.
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