Additional Tags: [Cunnilingus][Namecalling][Being Recorded][Voyeurism] Mentions of [Threesome][Blowjob][Optional SFX]

The Script:

It's the end of your big day, and you've finally tied the knot with your beautiful husband. Months of planning has lead to this perfect moment... but the planning isn't over.

It turns out, you've been hiding a dominant side from your husband ever since you met him, and you weren't quite sure how to show him. But when you heard that the Armory, formerly owned by Kink.com, was turning into a hotel - and that that hotel provided some... interesting benefits - you came up with the perfect plan.

After all, what better way to show him your kinky side than in the honeymoon suite of the kinkiest place on earth. And with a little help from the hotel staff /u/SilkySmoothSmut/ff4m-your-surprise-wedding-night-at-the-armory">you can guarantee that he'll be fully in touch with his submissive side by the end of the night... no matter his protestations.

The cast:

Jane: The beautiful blushing bride... who is also hiding a sadistic streak she can't wait to share with her husband. Alternating between gentle and kind, and stern and cruel, she loves her husband just as much as she loves seeing him squirm and writhe in pain.

Steph: The sweet receptionist at the Armory Hotel... who was also working there as a camerawoman during its golden days. A passive observer who films the scene rather than participates, she's still more than happy to provide some color commentary and teasing advice while Jane plays with the helpless groom.

(Please note that these names are entirely optional - feel free to sub in your own names or pseudonyms if you so desire)

The Commentary:

Hey all you wonderfully devious individuals, have I got a lovely script for you! This wonderful tale, posted on Marriage Monday (to take a page out of u/merry-and-pimpin's wonderful themed releases) is one that comes from a concept that started as a shitpost, but grew into so much more. I was initially hoping to make this a small, 1,500 - 2,000 word scene... but as I started writing it just kept growing and growing until it became my biggest idea yet. That being said, I'm quite proud of it so I hope you enjoy reading or filling it as much as I did writing it.

Of course, I couldn't have written it all on my own. The original concept, and some of the most delightfully devilish aspects of the script come courtesy of u/daliafolia. Additionally, I had some wonderful beta reading advice from some wonderful writers and VAs including the incomparable u/Pirate_Friend_67, so if you see them there be sure to give them some love and look at their work (which far surpasses mine).

If you like the script, please be kind and leave a like and a comment... and if you don't, that's also totally fine. In that case, feel free to keep on scrolling and keep your downvotes to yourself. Finally, please do not tag any VAs in the comments.

^{As always, my script-writing is only half of the story. If this interests you and you would like to fill it, please feel free to change whatever you desire to suit your tastes. No matter how you may interpret the script I am more than happy for you to put your own spin on it and would love to listen when it is done. If you are interested in filling this script for a paid service such as Patreon, please contact me so we can discuss this more in depth. Lastly, this is a fantasy - remember that all kink IRL should be above all, safe, sane and consensual.}