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Don’t leave me baby! A4A, A4F, A4M Finding you hurt, crying, break in
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Coming home from work you find a broken window, your partner unconscious and hurt badly. Are they even breathing? How did this happen? Don’t leave me baby.

Free to use as long as you credit me (Teri asmr) as the creator, link to the script and send me a link to the video so I can watch it.

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A4F document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LXto7tCGer4_ZHaG17nrvmyO6JwjVF4_LsOoISMOO8Y/edit?usp=sharing

A4M document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12bAHLfUWPvCdtIPfhvNQlqod9uL5fJfLr8kvgKCA89M/edit?usp=sharing

A4A document:

A4A version: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14dhyPGMKZ6PabsLO2uX5NYiFjkvBiZ_QdTaKTQAsIss/edit?usp=sharing

Honey I’m home!

(laughter) Why didn’t you tell me what had happened to the window? Must have been the Andresson’s kids. I’ve seen them play baseball in the front yard so many times. I’m surprised they haven’t hit our window earlier. 

Honey?

(inner monologue) Strange… they aren’t answering… The door was locked so maybe they’re at the Andersson’s? 

Honey?

(inner monologue) Gosh, the house is a mess! What have they been doing today? I should call them.

#calling and call not being picked up

(inner monologue) Hmm… Maybe I should call John?

#calling

(relieved) Hey, John! It’s name. Hey, is my partner over there? I saw the kids had crashed the window playing baseball and I couldn't find them around the house so I thought maybe they were with you talking to the kids?

(shocked/worried) They’re not?

It’s probably nothing. I’ve got to go. Say hi to Andrea for me will you? Bye. 

#call ending

Honey? Where are you? 

You’re starting to scare me a little bit. 

Honey?

Stop with this nonsense. It quit being funny ages ago.

pause

BABY! No! 

No, no, no, no, no! What happened to you!? Honey please wake up! 

Oh gosh, you’re bleeding… a lot. What should I do? What should I do?

Right! I need to call someone!

#calling

#911 emergency response

Hello!? I-... I just got home, my… my partner… they’re hurt, really bad. Please, I don’t know what to do!

No they’re not awake.

I don’t know what happened! I just came home and they weren’t responding to my calls. I thought… I thought maybe they were at my neighbors house because the window was broken and the kids like playing baseball, but the kids were away and then I found them. On the floor. They’re bleeding really bad. You have to help them!

Right, right. We live at 525 Winchester Boulevard. 

(panicking even more) Are they… I don’t know. They’re not moving. They’re so still! I can’t. No. No! I can’t! What if they aren’t breathing. If I don’t check, then at least I can convince myself they’re alright. I can’t! What if they’re dead!? Okay. I’ll check.

pause

Oh thank god! They’re alive! You’ll be okay. Can you hear me, baby? I won’t let you go. “Until death do us part” No fucking way. There’s no way you’re going before me. You call me crazy all the time for the stuff I do. Like when I went skydiving. You were more scared than me! And You were standing safely on the ground and not about to throw yourself out of a plane. You can’t die before me. I have something I need to tell you but I can’t unless you’re awake and alive! So you can’t leave me. Or you will never hear it. 

But you’re bleeding so bad! You’re so pale. (crying) I need to do something. Bleeding… I need to stop the bleeding. Bandages! You need a bandage! Uhm… Right! You gave me that first aid kit before I went mountain climbing. Where did I put it? Uhm… I hid it away under the bed. 

#walking/running

Okay honey. You’re gonna be alright. Do you hear me? You’re gonna be just fine. I’m not gonna let you die. The ambulance should be here soon. I’m gonna start with this cut in your abdomen. (deep breath)

pause

There all better! And then one here…

pause

And one here.

pause

Fuck baby, what happened to you? How did this happen? Why was the house trashed? Why had you locked the door when you were already inside?

Someone did this to you, didn’t they!?

#sirens from the distance

Oh, can you hear that? That’s the ambulance. You’ll be okay. It’s all going to be okay. Honey? Honey!? No, no, no, no, no! Baby no! Come on, you have to stay with me! You can’t die! Not yet! No, no, no! You have to breathe! Come on baby. (start fading out) You’re strong. You’re stronger than anyone I know. You can’t just give up! You’re not leaving me. No not yet please. Please don’t leave me like this. I can’t go on without you. Please baby!

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