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I call it... happy hell
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Ok so it's kinda like my hero academia as in some people have super powers and some people don't. The main character jack dripeir lacks super powers but he is stupid intelligent when it comes to technology. And the show starts with him getting kicked out of college for excessive spending of the college's money on his idea to make an alternative kind of energy called pulse energy, pulse energy is short bursts of very fast electricity instead of a steady current that takes way more electricity to use but is ten fold powerfull. the college doesn't know he made pulse energy already very early in his research. He kept it a secret so he could use the money to make weaponry and other gadgets to kill superhero's. Oh yeah I probably should mention that jack is a serial killer that kills super heros, he spites super heros because they feel like they deserve more than normal people. Anyways back to the story, the first shot of the show is jack getting out of his car and going to his motel room while carrying his stuff. He opens the door, puts his stuff on the bed, and turns on the tv. A news channel starts playing talking about a super hero convention going on in two days. It reminds him to chack for his "stuff" and he realizes he left it at the college dorm. He falls onto his bed, grabs a pillow, and screams into it. When he lifts his face and grabs a pube off his tongue. He then proceeds to scream even louder.

The next shot is jack driving on the highway while a conversation starts playing out between jack and the college dean. The basic jist of it is that he has been flunking all his classes, refuses to cooperate with fellow researchers on this "pulse energy" and is being very rude to everyone at the school. He is given three options. One: he apologizes and starts cooperating with his partners and school staff, two: he gives up his partnership at the school and does janitor work until he can pay off the debt on campus, or three: he leaves the school entirely and finds some other way to make back the money that he has effectively stolen from the school. Jack cusses out the dean and tells him he is picking three. He then proceeds to leave. Wich leads to the first shot of the show. The dean says " never come back as long as you live" and the conversation ends as jack parks the car in the college parking lot. He walks to the dorm he used to be in and finds it locked. He knocks on the door. After a couple of loud foot steps and a few clicking noises a big man opens the door. In a deep voice he asks "what" jack replies " hey I left my stuff In here and I got kicked out like today so..." The man cuts him off " well you should have thought about it better before you got kicked out, you can find your shit outside next week on the curb" the man then slams the door in Jack's face. Jack sighs and steps back, he kicks the door open with max force. The man, sitting at the computer with porn playing on it pulls up his underwear with his pants still around his knees. "Yaknow if you would have just let me in, I would be doing this... Dick" jack remarks. The man gets up from the chair " I'm gonna fucking kill you" he then charges at jack. Jack dodges and the man slams into the wall, causing the drywall to crumble and the room to shake. "No normal person has that kind of strength, let me guess... Not normal are ya?" Jack says, the man looks at him with a death stare and goes in for a punch but jack uses his weight and causes him to slam into the computer. Jack grabs a lamp from the corner of the room "see you haven't rearranged yet" he slams the lamp across his back causing him to collapse. Jack steps over the man into the bedroom, opening the closet he picks up a cardboard box full of metal and shit. "You know if my finger prints weren't already on this room, you would be dead, here's a hundred for the damage" jack says as he steps over the man. He gets In his car and leaves as the shot still focuses on the door to the apartment. It cuts back to the motel as jack drops the box on the table in the room. He opens it up and pulls out a computer. After some clicking he opens a tab and it reveals a dark web gun trading service. He is selling guns to millions of people around the world, army's, Militia's, cartels, just everyone. He gets a message from a undisclosed individual, he opens it and it reveals its the us military. They want to buy a shipment of his pulse rifles. "You've gotta be fuckin kidding me" jack Snickers under his breath. He replies with "on it" and closes the laptop. He falls back onto the bed "yaknow maybe this isn't so bad after all". The background comes into focus to show in the closet, his diamond pulse armor suit. It slowly pans closer and stops when it reaches the helmet, credits roll.

Holy shit I don't think you understand how long I've wanted to show people this shit. This is just episode one btw.this is like 30 episodes long with way more crazy shit. And if you don't like the humor a assure you it's not all low brow potty humor. In fact it's a very serious show about mental illness and loosing your identity. If this get 100 upvotes I'll post episode two. and if you have any animation skills or just want to help I am more than ecstatic to have help on this project. Anyways I hope this gets big, Its like my baby.

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