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In the darkness of the night, he stands, and stares. He waits, slowly letting sleep descend over the two of them; one that he is here to kill, and the other, who was always meant to be his.
There was something about seeing her in the arms of another, that made his heart thud low against his ribcage. He held onto her tightly, like he feared she would run away. She slept on, uncaring of the world, of the monsters and the wolves that preyed at night, of how they snatched and sold.
His brother’s tortured howls resonated in his mind as he darkly stared at the couple, one whose hands had been stained red, painted by the pain and loss of his brother. And the other, in whose delicate palms he had once laid his heart, only for her to shatter it when she walked away. That ended tonight, all of the longing glances, the chest aches that seemed to burn through his being. He was here to put an end to it all, murder one of them, and take back what was his. Reclaim her, lock and cage her, keep her as his own.
I’m looking for a character who’s either a superhero/ supervillain, as opposed to the cliched mafia setting, but I wouldn’t reject that either. He’s supposed to be this slightly unhinged, possessive, angry man who has been wronged by his love, left alone and betrayed (reasons we can discuss later). He choses to sit back and let things be, but then the man she had left him for gets involved in his brother’s assassination, and thats where all hell breaks loose. He snaps, gets the gun and the chains, and goes to reclaim whats his. Only this time, he wont be a lover.
Please be 18 and literate. I require someone who does paragraphing, and has basic grammar knowledge. I can write from 2-3 paragraphs to novella length, and when I am free I can be very active, but I would ensure I reply at least once/twice a day, and more if it's not a busy day. I prefer discord over reddit, so if our discussion goes well I would love to move there.
Lastly, put some effort in your reply. A single liner message will get you ignored. Tell me a little about yourself, a genre you would like to explore and your kinks.
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