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Context: You're on your first date with a cute boy. He seems to be running late and you were starting to worry you've been stood up, but, don't worry! Your...boyfriend(?) arrived to take you on a truly magical first date. So magical, in fact, that you had a boyfriend by the end of that date. How will he treat you now that you've won his cold, dead little heart? Well, like you're the ONLY one in his dead little heart, it seems. But is it too good to be true?
Setting: Your home/the mall
Tags:[MM4A][Strangers to Lovers][Goth Delinquent Speaker][Popular Boy Speaker][Humble Listener][Fake Relationship][Or Is It?][Comfort][Reverse Comfort][Good Friend][VERY Possessive][VERY Protective][Betrayal][Insecure?][Hurt][Heartbreak][CW: Implied Gaslighting]
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[L] = Lucas, heartbroken renegade
[A] = Angel, surprisingly chill???
[Scene opens in your home]
[SFX: Wet clothes being discarded and the Listener joining Angel in some comfy clothes]
[Angel sits on your couch, lost in thought. He smiles as you join him but itās rather sad]
[A] āAy, there you go. No more wet clothes and I see weāre rocking a hoodie and some sweats, classic, very chic.ā
[Pause]
[A] āWell, that was a smile, at leastā¦ Listen, Iām really, really sorry that your night got ruined. I remembered you said ages ago that you really wanted to go. Are you holding up OK?ā
[Pause]
[A] āHas heā¦ always been like this? Ahā¦ I mean, yeah. Sorry, Iām a really bad liar so I usually donāt bother. As long as Iāve known him, Lucas has always been both incredibly unpredictable and super predictable. I wasnāt trying to start beef in the hallway, I just wanted you to know that he has someā¦ issues, I guess is the nicest way to put itā¦ā
[...]
[A] āIt sucks, yeahā¦ Heās genuinely funny and a blast to hang out with, but he does thisā¦ thing. This thing where he pushes his boundaries until someone gets upset, then he shrugs and goes, āWhat did you expect from me?ā to avoid the hurt of being called out. I dunno, Iām a himbo, haha. Just something I observed, but itās not right. Your choosing to give him a chance shouldnāt be something he can scold you over. Itāsā¦ gaslighting, I think itās called? He doesnāt mean to, butā¦ you know.ā
[Pauseā¦]
[Angel sits by you awkwardly for a few minutes before he says something that takes you aback:]
[A] ā... I donāt think Lucas meant to hurt you. Honestly. Iāve seen how he looks at you, how you make him smile and laugh. Heās a bastard, but he holds people he really loves closer than his own wellbeingā¦ā
[Pause?]
[A, with a sigh] āNo, no one set him up, I think. If they had, thereās no way the gossip wouldnāt have spread. Iām sure it would have made for great ārevengeā or something if I had done it, but, legit, Iām kind of dumb and I canāt climb at present.ā
[Pause?]
[A] āNo, thatās one of the bad things about Lucas. When he really cares about someone, he gets sloppy. Overexcited, I guess. Believe it or not, we used to be good friends.ā
[Pause]
[A] āHeh, I know, right? Youād never be able to guessā¦ but I was his first friend when he moved out here. I know him, and I know him well enough to know that youāre the one person heād never hurt deliberately.ā
[...]
[A] āIf I had to guess, he really did set it up before you two met, fell so in love that he completely forgot, and then butchered trying to take his own trap apart at the last secondā¦ā
[...]
[You both sit in quiet for a moment before Angel stands]
[A] āYou want to go get him too, right?ā
[Pause]
[Angel helps you stand with a grunt]
[A] āCāmon. Heās an asshole but he shouldnāt be alone after all of that and, knowing him, heās probably fled to where he feels safe.ā
[Pause]
[A] āEyup. Somewhere illegal to be after dark. If I had to guessā¦ā
[Pause]
[A] āYep, mall after hours. Cāmon, letās go get him so we can talk this out.ā
[Pause?]
[Angel laughs and runs a hand through his hair]
[A] āNah, I promise I donāt have plans to steal you. Lucas is a dick, but he was still my friend at one point or another. You make him happier than Iāve ever seen him. Heās made changes for you and, not gonna lie, thatās terrifying. Cāmon, letās get heading!ā
[Pause!]
[SFX: Angel and the Listener getting in his car and heading off]
[Scene transitions to the mall after hours]
[SFX: Angel and the Listener wedging their way through a door and into the mall]
[A] āGuhh! This hngh, tight doorway is NOT himbo friendly!ā
[Pause!]
[A] āBorf! There we go. OK, you hit up the food quart, Iāll check out that goth story he loves to sneer at!ā
[You both part ways and you hurry to the food quart. You hear an unusual hiss as you approach]
[SFX: A deep fat fryer hissing and Lucas humming miserably to himself]
[L] āDeep fried fries on a deep fried burger with deep fried picklesā¦ Wheeee, heart attack city. Nomphā¦ Mmh. Not bad. Now to get a drink.ā
[SFX: The soda dispenser hissing and Lucas gagging down soda at an unhealthy angle and amount]
[L] āPfah! Mmhā¦ hm. Maybe if I choke all of this down Iāll have a heart attack and fucking dieā¦ Thatād be greatā¦ Can we make that happen, body? Fucking sick of being aliveā¦ Fucking everything up, I was SURE Iād disarmed it, I-Iā¦ I donātā¦ā
[His voice cracks quietly]
[L] ā...Why canāt I just be healthy for someoneā¦ Iām more toxic than everything in the Amazon combined! Yeah, GREAT job, Lucas! Someone FINALLY loves you for you, and you fuck it up! Iā¦ Oh, my poor babydollā¦ All they wanted was one night, one FUCKING night to feel gorgeous and fancy andā¦ like I wanted to make them smile every day for the rest of myā¦ of ourā¦ā
[SFX: The Listener walking out into the open]
[Pause]
[L] āOh SHIT-! U-Uh, I mean, eheā¦ H-Heya, Dork. Come to dunk my head in the deep fat fryer? Let me at least whip you up a burger or something first, huh?ā
[Pause]
[His smirk trembles]
[L] āCame to make sure Iām OK, huh? H-Heh, donātā¦ donāt be ridiculous. Iām fine. Why are you bothering, huh? Angel not able to save your dream night after I fucked it up?ā
[...]
[L] āHeā¦ said he thought it was an accident and brought you to help look?ā
[His smirk is gone and you see him shake. You hope itās from tears and not the heart attack he just ate]
[L] āN-No, heā¦ He wouldnāt do that, not after what I did! Neither of you should be here!ā
[Pause!]
[Lucas stares at you, seemingly unaware that heās crying]
[L] āYou donāt justā¦ give up on someone you love from one mistakeā¦?ā
[...]
[SFX: The Listener approaching Lucas and him pulling them into an embrace]
[L] āI-I canāt-! Mmh! Please, let me hold you! Please, Iā¦ Donāt leave me alone, againā¦ Please!ā
[Pause]
[You hold him as he seems to collapse against you, sobbing and shaking]
[L] āOh, babydollā¦ I-Iām so sorry, I swear I never meant to mess things up! If Iād taken the whole thing apart, it would have ruined it, and I didnāt know what to do! Iād just hoped itād be enough, but I canāt even get THAT right, and I donātā¦ I donāt deserve you, I-Iā¦ā
[Pause]
[Lucas exhales shakily]
[L] āI love you, too, Dorkā¦ it scares meā¦ā
[SFX: Muffled police sirens]
[You both jump as you hear blaring sirens approaching from outside]
[L] āOh, titsā¦ Guess it wouldnāt be a date with me without the cops, would it, Sugarcakes?ā
[Pause]
[He gives you that wild laugh, a little sniffly still]
[L] āNew mission: lose the heat, reunite with the himbo, andā¦ SURVIVE.ā
[To be continued]
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