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[M4F] Love Me Not [Shy Speaker] [Hanahaki] [Angst] [TW: Coughing] [TW: Blood] [Reverse Comfort] [Accidental Confession] [Happy Ending]
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NyanToDaMax145 is a male looking for a female in Happy Ending
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Context: Your best friend has been suffering from a disease he refuses to tell you about for months now, and it only seems to be getting worse. Even stranger, he often hides himself away during these coughing fits. What could be the cause of his disease?

Words: 1091

Monetization: Itā€™s perfectly ok to monetize and record any of my scripts, you can change pronouns and stuff around too! Just please remember to credit me!

Warnings: speaker is suffering, coughing, blood, HIGH DIFFICULTY SCRIPT!

Notes: ā€œYou seem to be a little too gleeful about causing pain to charactersā€¦ā€ ā€“ a friend
ā€œFlower petals, blood, needless suffering, and a f*ck ton of angstā€ ā€” ColeyDoesThings

A/N: Artists and writers do awful things to characters and I am no exception :P (I mean I wrote When It Rains It Pours for goodnessā€™s sake). To be honest this script could probably work as A4Aā€¦

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[the two of you are walking home from school]

ā€œToday was really rough, huh? Our teachers seem more demanding than ever these days.ā€

[pause]

ā€œYeah. Mr. Thane seemed especially angry todayā€¦ he looked furious when I ran out of class without askingā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œHm? Am I okay now? Yeah, Iā€™m fine. Th-Thanks for checking on meā€¦ and taking me to the nurse. Y-You didnā€™t get in trouble with Mr. Thane, right?ā€

[pause]

ā€œThank goodnessā€¦ Iā€™d hate it if you got told off because of my problemsā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... What? What are you saying?ā€

[pause]

ā€œNo! Th-There wasnā€™tā€“ you must have been seeing things! Iā€“ I didnā€™t cough up any blood! Iā€“I meanā€“ that bathroom always has graffiti in it soā€“ maybe you were seeing someā€“ some red marker!ā€

[pause]

ā€œYes, Iā€™m fine, I promise. I justā€¦ *cough* I need some rest.ā€

[pause]

ā€œIā€“ you want to do homework together? I-In my apartment?ā€

ā€œButā€“ I meanā€“!ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... I would like that, butā€¦ I justā€¦ I prefer to work aloneā€“ no, thatā€™s not rightā€“ā€

[pause]

ā€œIā€™m not making excuses! Iā€™m justā€“ youā€™ve never really been in my place before, weā€™ve always gone to yours! A-And itā€™sā€“ I havenā€™t had time to clean up, soā€“!ā€

ā€œ... I donā€™tā€¦ want you to think Iā€™m a slobā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... Hahaā€¦ I know you donā€™t think badly about me, butā€¦ I canā€™t help but worry.ā€

[pause]

ā€œWhaā€“ i-itā€™s okay! You canā€“ you can come over if you want to! You didnā€™t make me uncomfortable by asking, really!ā€

ā€œYou just caught me off guard, thatā€™s all.ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... Yeah. Iā€™d like it if you could come over.ā€

[timeskip]

[the sound of keys turning in the lock]

ā€œA-Alright, here we are.ā€

ā€œIā€™m sorry about the mess againā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œIt doesnā€™t look very messy to you?ā€

ā€œOhā€¦ thank goodness.ā€

[pause]

ā€œAh, right. I should go grab us some snacks.ā€

ā€œYou can set up here in the living room. Iā€™ll be right back!ā€

[you can add various rustling noises to fill in the log pause]

ā€œHey! Iā€™m back!ā€

ā€œI got us some juice and chips! I went shopping the other day, so I have snacks to spare.ā€

[pause]

ā€œOf course I remembered your favorite kind of chips! Y-Youā€™re my best friend, after all.ā€

[pause]

ā€œYeahā€¦ Iā€™mā€¦ glad that weā€™re friends too.ā€

ā€œUmā€“ how about we start on our work? We have a lot of stuff to get through.ā€

[fill in the long pauses with pencil noises]

ā€œHm? Yeah, Ms. Curie gave us a huge assignmentā€¦ itā€™s not too bad. I-I can work through it.ā€

[long pause]

ā€œ... Uhā€¦ do you know how this would work?ā€

[pause]

ā€œThanks.ā€

[he coughs slightly]

ā€œ... Iā€™m fine. We should focus on homework.ā€

ā€œIs this too boring for you? Weā€“ we can play videogames after weā€™re doneā€¦?ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... You just enjoy being around me?ā€

ā€œAhā€¦ *cough* thank you.ā€

[long pause]

ā€œHm? Oh, that variable goes over there.ā€

ā€œThere you are, youā€™ve got it!ā€

[long pause]

[pencil scratches stop]

ā€œUmā€¦ I justā€“ Iā€™m curiousā€¦ are you doing anything this weekend?ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... Huh?ā€

[pause]

ā€œReallyā€¦? Thatā€“ that transfer student asked you to go somewhere with him?ā€

ā€œOhā€¦ where?ā€

[pause]

ā€œAh, you got paired together for a class project? Iā€¦ I see.ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... What do you think of him?ā€

[pause]

ā€œYeah, Iā€“ I think heā€™s nice too.ā€

[pause]

ā€œI justā€“ well Iā€“ I want to be friends with him! B-Because he looks pretty coolā€¦ doesnā€™t heā€¦?ā€

[he coughs]

ā€œNo, Iā€“ Iā€™m okay. Iā€“!ā€

[violent coughing]

ā€œDonā€™tā€“! *cough* Donā€™t c-come closeā€“ ugh!ā€

[he stands up]

ā€œIā€™llā€“! Iā€™ll be *cough* Iā€™ll be backā€“!ā€

[he runs into the bathroom and slams the door]

[you can still hear him coughing painfully]

[you bang on the door]

(muffled) ā€œPleaseā€“! Stay backā€“! *violent coughing* Iā€“ I canā€™tā€“!ā€

[more coughing]

[you break the door open]

ā€œWaitā€“! *coughing* Pleaseā€“! *choke* Donā€™tā€“!ā€

[pause, while he continues to choke on flowers]

ā€œ... Hā€“ Hold meā€¦ pleaseā€“ *sob* J-Just holdā€¦ meā€“!ā€

[he continues a cough for a while until it slowly subsides]

ā€œ*cough*... Iā€¦ didnā€™t want you to see meā€¦ *shuddering breath* like thisā€¦ā€

[labored breathing]

ā€œ... Y-youā€™re seeing all this rightā€¦ theyā€™reā€¦ rose petalsā€¦ā€

ā€œIt wasā€¦ *cough*, j-just petals at firstā€¦ butā€¦ l-last week it became a full flowerā€¦ and thenā€¦ *cough* t-todayā€¦ today it was a stemā€¦ā€

ā€œI guess you can seeā€¦ s-since the bathroom is coveredā€“ *cough* covered in petalsā€¦ thisā€“ this has been happeningā€¦ for a while.ā€

[pause]

ā€œI went to a doctor!ā€

ā€œButā€¦ but theyā€¦ Iā€“ā€

[sigh]

ā€œ... Itā€™sā€¦ called h-hanahaki disease.ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... Mhm. Yeah. Iā€“ I thought it was legend too. Butā€¦ I guess itā€™s true.ā€

[long pause]

ā€œ... Who is itā€¦?ā€

ā€œIā€“ I canā€™tā€“ *cough* I canā€™t tell you.ā€

[pause]

ā€œBecause sheā€“ she would never love me back! And Iā€“ Iā€™ve known her for so longā€“ it wouldnā€™t be right!ā€

ā€œSheā€™s beautiful and funny andā€“ and so, so kindā€¦ā€

[he starts crying]

ā€œBut I donā€™tā€“ I donā€™t want to get it removed eitherā€“! Becauseā€“ because this feelingā€¦ itā€™s so painful but so warmā€¦ I donā€™t want it to go awayā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... I donā€™t know what to doā€¦!ā€

ā€œI justā€¦ I donā€™t want to ruin what we have! I donā€™t want to lose youā€“!ā€

[he stops short]

ā€œIā€“ I meanā€“!!ā€

ā€œ*cough* I didnā€™tā€“! I just misspoke! Iā€“I donā€™tā€“! I actuallyā€“!ā€

[he takes a shuddering breath]

ā€œ... Okayā€¦ Okay, Iā€™ll take deep breaths.ā€

[he takes a few deep breaths]

ā€œ... Yesā€¦ Iā€“ Itā€™s you. Youā€™reā€¦ the one that I like.ā€

ā€œ... Iā€™m sorryā€¦ā€

ā€œThisā€¦ all this is why I didnā€™t tell youā€¦ I didnā€™tā€“ want youā€¦ to see me in such a pathetic state.ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... Youā€™re right. Itā€“ it started when that transfer student entered our school.ā€

ā€œ... Youā€¦ you like him, donā€™t youā€¦? ā€¦ I should justā€¦ give upā€¦ and have the surgeryā€¦ so that these feelings donā€™t get in the wayā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... Huh?ā€

[pause]

ā€œH-How could I not think that? I sawā€¦ I saw you two in the hallwayā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œIā€¦ I see. Iā€¦ā€

[he covers his face]

ā€œ... Iā€™m such an idiotā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... You justā€¦ said that, right? I-Iā€™m not dreamingā€¦?ā€

[pause]

ā€œAhā€¦ hahahaā€¦ā€

ā€œSo it can develop psychologically tooā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œYouā€¦ really like me backā€¦? Youā€“ you promiseā€¦?ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... *sniff*... No take backs?ā€

[pause]

ā€œHahaā€¦ Iā€¦ā€

ā€œ... Iā€™m so happyā€¦ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... Iā€™ll be fine. My throatā€¦ feels okay now. Iā€™ll be fine after I rest.ā€

[pause]

ā€œ... You want to take care of me?ā€

ā€œ... I would love that.ā€

[pause]

ā€œOkay. Iā€™ll go see the doctor again tomorrow.ā€

[pause]

ā€œAlright, Iā€“ Iā€™m sorry for worrying you so muchā€¦ā€

ā€œ... And thank youā€¦ for always being here for me. As long as I can stay right by your sideā€¦ Iā€™m happy.ā€

~END~

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