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Context: Your best friend has been suffering from a disease he refuses to tell you about for months now, and it only seems to be getting worse. Even stranger, he often hides himself away during these coughing fits. What could be the cause of his disease?
Words: 1091
Monetization: Itās perfectly ok to monetize and record any of my scripts, you can change pronouns and stuff around too! Just please remember to credit me!
Warnings: speaker is suffering, coughing, blood, HIGH DIFFICULTY SCRIPT!
Notes: āYou seem to be a little too gleeful about causing pain to charactersā¦ā ā a friend
āFlower petals, blood, needless suffering, and a f*ck ton of angstā ā ColeyDoesThings
A/N: Artists and writers do awful things to characters and I am no exception :P (I mean I wrote When It Rains It Pours for goodnessās sake). To be honest this script could probably work as A4Aā¦
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[the two of you are walking home from school]
āToday was really rough, huh? Our teachers seem more demanding than ever these days.ā
[pause]
āYeah. Mr. Thane seemed especially angry todayā¦ he looked furious when I ran out of class without askingā¦ā
[pause]
āHm? Am I okay now? Yeah, Iām fine. Th-Thanks for checking on meā¦ and taking me to the nurse. Y-You didnāt get in trouble with Mr. Thane, right?ā
[pause]
āThank goodnessā¦ Iād hate it if you got told off because of my problemsā¦ā
[pause]
ā... What? What are you saying?ā
[pause]
āNo! Th-There wasnātā you must have been seeing things! Iā I didnāt cough up any blood! IāI meanā that bathroom always has graffiti in it soā maybe you were seeing someā some red marker!ā
[pause]
āYes, Iām fine, I promise. I justā¦ *cough* I need some rest.ā
[pause]
āIā you want to do homework together? I-In my apartment?ā
āButā I meanā!ā
[pause]
ā... I would like that, butā¦ I justā¦ I prefer to work aloneā no, thatās not rightāā
[pause]
āIām not making excuses! Iām justā youāve never really been in my place before, weāve always gone to yours! A-And itāsā I havenāt had time to clean up, soā!ā
ā... I donātā¦ want you to think Iām a slobā¦ā
[pause]
ā... Hahaā¦ I know you donāt think badly about me, butā¦ I canāt help but worry.ā
[pause]
āWhaā i-itās okay! You canā you can come over if you want to! You didnāt make me uncomfortable by asking, really!ā
āYou just caught me off guard, thatās all.ā
[pause]
ā... Yeah. Iād like it if you could come over.ā
[timeskip]
[the sound of keys turning in the lock]
āA-Alright, here we are.ā
āIām sorry about the mess againā¦ā
[pause]
āIt doesnāt look very messy to you?ā
āOhā¦ thank goodness.ā
[pause]
āAh, right. I should go grab us some snacks.ā
āYou can set up here in the living room. Iāll be right back!ā
[you can add various rustling noises to fill in the log pause]
āHey! Iām back!ā
āI got us some juice and chips! I went shopping the other day, so I have snacks to spare.ā
[pause]
āOf course I remembered your favorite kind of chips! Y-Youāre my best friend, after all.ā
[pause]
āYeahā¦ Iāmā¦ glad that weāre friends too.ā
āUmā how about we start on our work? We have a lot of stuff to get through.ā
[fill in the long pauses with pencil noises]
āHm? Yeah, Ms. Curie gave us a huge assignmentā¦ itās not too bad. I-I can work through it.ā
[long pause]
ā... Uhā¦ do you know how this would work?ā
[pause]
āThanks.ā
[he coughs slightly]
ā... Iām fine. We should focus on homework.ā
āIs this too boring for you? Weā we can play videogames after weāre doneā¦?ā
[pause]
ā... You just enjoy being around me?ā
āAhā¦ *cough* thank you.ā
[long pause]
āHm? Oh, that variable goes over there.ā
āThere you are, youāve got it!ā
[long pause]
[pencil scratches stop]
āUmā¦ I justā Iām curiousā¦ are you doing anything this weekend?ā
[pause]
ā... Huh?ā
[pause]
āReallyā¦? Thatā that transfer student asked you to go somewhere with him?ā
āOhā¦ where?ā
[pause]
āAh, you got paired together for a class project? Iā¦ I see.ā
[pause]
ā... What do you think of him?ā
[pause]
āYeah, Iā I think heās nice too.ā
[pause]
āI justā well Iā I want to be friends with him! B-Because he looks pretty coolā¦ doesnāt heā¦?ā
[he coughs]
āNo, Iā Iām okay. Iā!ā
[violent coughing]
āDonātā! *cough* Donāt c-come closeā ugh!ā
[he stands up]
āIāllā! Iāll be *cough* Iāll be backā!ā
[he runs into the bathroom and slams the door]
[you can still hear him coughing painfully]
[you bang on the door]
(muffled) āPleaseā! Stay backā! *violent coughing* Iā I canātā!ā
[more coughing]
[you break the door open]
āWaitā! *coughing* Pleaseā! *choke* Donātā!ā
[pause, while he continues to choke on flowers]
ā... Hā Hold meā¦ pleaseā *sob* J-Just holdā¦ meā!ā
[he continues a cough for a while until it slowly subsides]
ā*cough*... Iā¦ didnāt want you to see meā¦ *shuddering breath* like thisā¦ā
[labored breathing]
ā... Y-youāre seeing all this rightā¦ theyāreā¦ rose petalsā¦ā
āIt wasā¦ *cough*, j-just petals at firstā¦ butā¦ l-last week it became a full flowerā¦ and thenā¦ *cough* t-todayā¦ today it was a stemā¦ā
āI guess you can seeā¦ s-since the bathroom is coveredā *cough* covered in petalsā¦ thisā this has been happeningā¦ for a while.ā
[pause]
āI went to a doctor!ā
āButā¦ but theyā¦ Iāā
[sigh]
ā... Itāsā¦ called h-hanahaki disease.ā
[pause]
ā... Mhm. Yeah. Iā I thought it was legend too. Butā¦ I guess itās true.ā
[long pause]
ā... Who is itā¦?ā
āIā I canātā *cough* I canāt tell you.ā
[pause]
āBecause sheā she would never love me back! And Iā Iāve known her for so longā it wouldnāt be right!ā
āSheās beautiful and funny andā and so, so kindā¦ā
[he starts crying]
āBut I donātā I donāt want to get it removed eitherā! Becauseā because this feelingā¦ itās so painful but so warmā¦ I donāt want it to go awayā¦ā
[pause]
ā... I donāt know what to doā¦!ā
āI justā¦ I donāt want to ruin what we have! I donāt want to lose youā!ā
[he stops short]
āIā I meanā!!ā
ā*cough* I didnātā! I just misspoke! IāI donātā! I actuallyā!ā
[he takes a shuddering breath]
ā... Okayā¦ Okay, Iāll take deep breaths.ā
[he takes a few deep breaths]
ā... Yesā¦ Iā Itās you. Youāreā¦ the one that I like.ā
ā... Iām sorryā¦ā
āThisā¦ all this is why I didnāt tell youā¦ I didnātā want youā¦ to see me in such a pathetic state.ā
[pause]
ā... Youāre right. Itā it started when that transfer student entered our school.ā
ā... Youā¦ you like him, donāt youā¦? ā¦ I should justā¦ give upā¦ and have the surgeryā¦ so that these feelings donāt get in the wayā¦ā
[pause]
ā... Huh?ā
[pause]
āH-How could I not think that? I sawā¦ I saw you two in the hallwayā¦ā
[pause]
āIā¦ I see. Iā¦ā
[he covers his face]
ā... Iām such an idiotā¦ā
[pause]
ā... You justā¦ said that, right? I-Iām not dreamingā¦?ā
[pause]
āAhā¦ hahahaā¦ā
āSo it can develop psychologically tooā¦ā
[pause]
āYouā¦ really like me backā¦? Youā you promiseā¦?ā
[pause]
ā... *sniff*... No take backs?ā
[pause]
āHahaā¦ Iā¦ā
ā... Iām so happyā¦ā
[pause]
ā... Iāll be fine. My throatā¦ feels okay now. Iāll be fine after I rest.ā
[pause]
ā... You want to take care of me?ā
ā... I would love that.ā
[pause]
āOkay. Iāll go see the doctor again tomorrow.ā
[pause]
āAlright, Iā Iām sorry for worrying you so muchā¦ā
ā... And thank youā¦ for always being here for me. As long as I can stay right by your sideā¦ Iām happy.ā
~END~
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