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[MM4A] First Date Pt. 5 [Strangers to Lovers][Goth Delinquent Speaker][Popular Boy Speaker][Humble Listener][Fake Relationship][Or Is It?][Spicy][Kisses][Prom][Dancing][VERY Possessive][VERY Protective][Betrayal][Insecure?][Hurt][Heartbreak][CW: Betrayal]
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ItsEsmeJones is a male/male couple, or multiple men looking for anyone in Heartbreak
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Context: You're on your first date with a cute boy. He seems to be running late and you were starting to worry you've been stood up, but, don't worry! Your...boyfriend(?) arrived to take you on a truly magical first date. So magical, in fact, that you had a boyfriend by the end of that date. How will he treat you now that you've won his cold, dead little heart? Well, like you're the ONLY one in his dead little heart, it seems. But is it too good to be true?

Setting: Your home/prom

Tags: [MM4A][Strangers to Lovers][Goth Delinquent Speaker][Popular Boy Speaker][Humble Listener][Fake Relationship][Or Is It?][Spicy][Kisses][Prom][Dancing][VERY Possessive][VERY Protective][Betrayal][Insecure?][Hurt][Heartbreak][CW: Betrayal]

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All unmarked text is Lucas

[A] = Angel, surprisingly chill???

Note: Do not mess with Big Stevie. Big Stevie will fucking kill you. (If you get this reference, you're a real one)


[Scene opens in front of your home]

[SFX: A limo rolling up]

[As you wait outside, all dolled up, a limo rolls up and Lucas hops out]

ā€œProm time! A fine evening toā€¦ you, myā€¦ā€

[He gawps at you for a moment]

ā€œWowā€¦ Youā€™reā€¦ stunning.ā€

[Pause]

[His cocky grin returns]

ā€œHell yeah, I look handsome! Clean up real nice, donā€™t I? Heh. I think I look extra Goth next to you. Like a vampire coming home to devour a sweet little treat.ā€

[SFX: The limo door being opened]

[Lucas opens the door for you with a bow]

ā€œMay I escort my beautiful Dork to prom in this bitchinā€™ limousine?ā€

[Pause]

[He grins at you and helps you inside]

[SFX: Some light, romantic music]

ā€œMmhā€¦ Look at you, look at youā€¦ I was drooling watching you try all this stuff on at the mall, but godamnā€¦ Iā€™m almost tempted to bribe the driver to ignore any hanky panky, buuuut Big Stevie has informed me many times before that he will ā€˜fold me like a metal chair at a wrestling eventā€™ if I ever dare stain the upholstery. Ainā€™t that right, Stevie?ā€

[The improbably large man behind the wheel shoots him a look. Itā€™s enough that youā€™re convinced he could make good on his word]

[Pause]

[Stevie smiles a little at your thanks]

ā€œAww! They smile and thank you once and youā€™re smiling, Stevie?ā€

[Pause]

ā€œOK, OK, I know Iā€™m an insufferable dick, granted. To the prom, good sir!ā€

[Stevie rolls his eyes but dutifully heads towards your school while Lucas pulls you close]

ā€œMmhā€¦ You really do look gorgeous. Oh, and look at how cute you are squirming and bouncing in excitement. Hmhm. Iā€™ve never cared about any kind of school function, butā€¦ you make it hard not to care.ā€

[He gives you a sort of sarcastic smirk]

ā€œYouā€™re ruining my whole ā€˜moody gothā€™ aesthetic, you know. Which is really, really rude.ā€

[Pause]

[His eyes light up]

ā€œOoh, I do, in fact, take kisses as a tribute to keep me from being a moody brat. Come hereā€¦ā€

[He kisses you with a happy sigh, shivering as you wrap your arms around him]

ā€œMmhā€¦ Oh, my sweet little Dorkā€¦ Oh, calm down with the death glare, Stevie! The hands arenā€™t straying below the neckline!ā€

[SFX: The limo continuing on its merry way]

[Eventually, you two roll up to prom]

[SFX: The limo parking and you both getting out]

ā€œAh, here we are! Prom! Stomping grounds for the pretentious and the hopeful, where dreams come true or die in the bathroom! A momentous occasion, truly. Heh, look at how everyone is staring at us. Eyeing you upā€¦ā€

[His smile twists into a scowl]

ā€œ...OK, they can stop staring at you, now.ā€

[Pause]

ā€œMmh, fine. No starting fistfights at prom. Just for my sweet little Dork. Cā€™mon, letā€™s head inside.ā€

[He escorts you inside the gymnasium with his usual chaotic energy]

[SFX: Prom-appropriate music and chatter]

ā€œWowā€¦ That is something.ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œWhat do I mean? Oh, just how absolutely garbage everyone looks compared to you, is all. Oof, look at Cindy in her fifty-dollar dress! She is staring daggers and I am absolutely fucking here for it. Why do the popular girls always have to be psychos, you know? Cā€™mon, what do you want to do first?ā€

[Pause!]

ā€œPictures? Heh, that makes sense. After all, we want to look pristine in them and I plan on having you absolutely breathless out on that dance floor.ā€

[You two go and pose for pictures. You donā€™t think the cameraman appreciates Lucasā€™s attempts at being as obnoxious as possible]

[SFX: Judgmental camera noises]

ā€œNice! Memories to last foreverā€¦ Or, as long as we do, I guessā€¦ A-Ahem. Cā€™mon, letā€™s get out there and dance.ā€

[...]

ā€œAh ah, Dork. You donā€™t get to be all shy after I learned to dance for you.ā€

[He takes your hand and leads you out to the dance floor, smile warm]

ā€œThere we areā€¦ One hand on my arm, one on my waist. There you goā€¦ Iā€™m here, cutie. Iā€™m all yoursā€¦ā€

[Pause]

[He leads you into a dance, eyes sparkling]

ā€œYouā€™re perfect, Dork. You know thatā€¦?ā€

[<3]

ā€œ...Iā€™m so thankful we met. And, I hope, youā€™ll stick with me for a good, long time, yeah?ā€

[<3]

ā€œDorkā€¦ Iā€¦ I love-ā€.

[Everything is beautiful. Wonderful. And thenā€¦]

[SFX: An alarm blaring and the sprinklers going off. General chaos]

[...]

ā€œNo! No, it wasnā€™t meant toā€¦! It should have been disarmed! I KNOW I disarmed it!ā€

[Lucas appears to be in a panic, chest rising and falling rapidly as his eyes nervously dart around. Until, at last, they fall on you]

[...]

ā€œN-No, Iā€¦ I set it up before we met, I swearā€¦ Pleaseā€¦ Please donā€™tā€¦ D-Donā€™t look at me like that. P-Pleaseā€¦?ā€

[...]

[Youā€™re not sure how youā€™re ā€˜looking at himā€™ but you know youā€™re hurt]

ā€œN-No, pleaseā€¦ I-I swear. I disassembled it! I swear I did! I know this night meant everything to you, and I wanted it to be perfect, Iā€¦ I didā€¦ Iā€¦ā€

[...]

[He deflates, staring at you in abject terror]

ā€œP-Pleaseā€¦ Please donā€™t leaveā€¦ Please, Iā€¦ I thinkā€¦ I-I think I loveā€¦?ā€

[Pause?]

[He goes ghost-white]

ā€œWouldā€¦ I still have done it if you hadnā€™t loved me unconditionallyā€¦?ā€

[...]

[His silence says everything]

[SFX: Wet footsteps hurrying up to you]

[You feel a hand on your shoulder and turn to see Angel, looking concerned]

[A] ā€œCā€™monā€¦ Youā€™re getting soaked and itā€™s cold as balls outside. Lucas, you should-ā€.

[You both jump as Lucas explodes at Angel]

ā€œGet your FUCKING hands off of them, Angel! You set me up! You fucking set me up, didnā€™t you?! I worked so fucking hard to fix my mistakes, and you just sweep in and fucking RUIN everything!ā€

[Pause!]

[You lose it. You get in his face, absolutely ballistic]

ā€œN-Noā€¦ No, Sugarcakes, please-!ā€

[Pause]

[Angel guides you behind him, voice gentle]

[A] ā€œLucas, you know that I could barely pass math and that I have an injured leg from football. How would I have been able to do anything?ā€

[...]

[Lucas just stares at the two of you, frozen]

[A] ā€œ...Cā€™mon. Youā€™re shaking, andā€¦ and I think youā€™re close to a panic attack, Dork. Lucasā€¦ you probably should run. Cops are, no doubt, being called.ā€

[Lucas remains frozen, staring at nothing]

[A] ā€œ...Cā€™mon.ā€

[SFX: Wet footsteps among muted chaos]

[A] ā€œItā€™s going to be OKā€¦ Letā€™s get you dry and home. And, umā€¦ if you want to talk, Iā€™ll listen. Iā€™m not good with this stuff and, erm, creepy as this sounds, I swear this isnā€™t me trying to swoop in and steal you. I justā€¦ I figured something like this would happen and thatā€¦ youā€™d need a friend when it did.ā€

[He tenses as you start to cry and sort of awkwardly pats your shoulder]

[A] ā€œItā€™s gonna be OK. I promise. Cā€™mon, letā€™s get you into some dry clothes and somewhere you feel safe.ā€

[Angel leads you out. You take one last look at Lucas and heā€™s still just stood there, staring after you in bleak, crushed silence]

[To be continued]

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