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Context: You're on your first date with a cute boy. He seems to be running late and you were starting to worry you've been stood up, but, don't worry! Your...boyfriend(?) arrived to take you on a truly magical first date. So magical, in fact, that you had a boyfriend by the end of that date. How will he treat you now that you've won his cold, dead little heart? Well, like you're the ONLY one in his dead little heart, it seems. But is it too good to be true?
Setting: Your home/prom
Tags: [MM4A][Strangers to Lovers][Goth Delinquent Speaker][Popular Boy Speaker][Humble Listener][Fake Relationship][Or Is It?][Spicy][Kisses][Prom][Dancing][VERY Possessive][VERY Protective][Betrayal][Insecure?][Hurt][Heartbreak][CW: Betrayal]
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All unmarked text is Lucas
[A] = Angel, surprisingly chill???
Note: Do not mess with Big Stevie. Big Stevie will fucking kill you. (If you get this reference, you're a real one)
[Scene opens in front of your home]
[SFX: A limo rolling up]
[As you wait outside, all dolled up, a limo rolls up and Lucas hops out]
āProm time! A fine evening toā¦ you, myā¦ā
[He gawps at you for a moment]
āWowā¦ Youāreā¦ stunning.ā
[Pause]
[His cocky grin returns]
āHell yeah, I look handsome! Clean up real nice, donāt I? Heh. I think I look extra Goth next to you. Like a vampire coming home to devour a sweet little treat.ā
[SFX: The limo door being opened]
[Lucas opens the door for you with a bow]
āMay I escort my beautiful Dork to prom in this bitchinā limousine?ā
[Pause]
[He grins at you and helps you inside]
[SFX: Some light, romantic music]
āMmhā¦ Look at you, look at youā¦ I was drooling watching you try all this stuff on at the mall, but godamnā¦ Iām almost tempted to bribe the driver to ignore any hanky panky, buuuut Big Stevie has informed me many times before that he will āfold me like a metal chair at a wrestling eventā if I ever dare stain the upholstery. Aināt that right, Stevie?ā
[The improbably large man behind the wheel shoots him a look. Itās enough that youāre convinced he could make good on his word]
[Pause]
[Stevie smiles a little at your thanks]
āAww! They smile and thank you once and youāre smiling, Stevie?ā
[Pause]
āOK, OK, I know Iām an insufferable dick, granted. To the prom, good sir!ā
[Stevie rolls his eyes but dutifully heads towards your school while Lucas pulls you close]
āMmhā¦ You really do look gorgeous. Oh, and look at how cute you are squirming and bouncing in excitement. Hmhm. Iāve never cared about any kind of school function, butā¦ you make it hard not to care.ā
[He gives you a sort of sarcastic smirk]
āYouāre ruining my whole āmoody gothā aesthetic, you know. Which is really, really rude.ā
[Pause]
[His eyes light up]
āOoh, I do, in fact, take kisses as a tribute to keep me from being a moody brat. Come hereā¦ā
[He kisses you with a happy sigh, shivering as you wrap your arms around him]
āMmhā¦ Oh, my sweet little Dorkā¦ Oh, calm down with the death glare, Stevie! The hands arenāt straying below the neckline!ā
[SFX: The limo continuing on its merry way]
[Eventually, you two roll up to prom]
[SFX: The limo parking and you both getting out]
āAh, here we are! Prom! Stomping grounds for the pretentious and the hopeful, where dreams come true or die in the bathroom! A momentous occasion, truly. Heh, look at how everyone is staring at us. Eyeing you upā¦ā
[His smile twists into a scowl]
ā...OK, they can stop staring at you, now.ā
[Pause]
āMmh, fine. No starting fistfights at prom. Just for my sweet little Dork. Cāmon, letās head inside.ā
[He escorts you inside the gymnasium with his usual chaotic energy]
[SFX: Prom-appropriate music and chatter]
āWowā¦ That is something.ā
[Pause?]
āWhat do I mean? Oh, just how absolutely garbage everyone looks compared to you, is all. Oof, look at Cindy in her fifty-dollar dress! She is staring daggers and I am absolutely fucking here for it. Why do the popular girls always have to be psychos, you know? Cāmon, what do you want to do first?ā
[Pause!]
āPictures? Heh, that makes sense. After all, we want to look pristine in them and I plan on having you absolutely breathless out on that dance floor.ā
[You two go and pose for pictures. You donāt think the cameraman appreciates Lucasās attempts at being as obnoxious as possible]
[SFX: Judgmental camera noises]
āNice! Memories to last foreverā¦ Or, as long as we do, I guessā¦ A-Ahem. Cāmon, letās get out there and dance.ā
[...]
āAh ah, Dork. You donāt get to be all shy after I learned to dance for you.ā
[He takes your hand and leads you out to the dance floor, smile warm]
āThere we areā¦ One hand on my arm, one on my waist. There you goā¦ Iām here, cutie. Iām all yoursā¦ā
[Pause]
[He leads you into a dance, eyes sparkling]
āYouāre perfect, Dork. You know thatā¦?ā
[<3]
ā...Iām so thankful we met. And, I hope, youāll stick with me for a good, long time, yeah?ā
[<3]
āDorkā¦ Iā¦ I love-ā.
[Everything is beautiful. Wonderful. And thenā¦]
[SFX: An alarm blaring and the sprinklers going off. General chaos]
[...]
āNo! No, it wasnāt meant toā¦! It should have been disarmed! I KNOW I disarmed it!ā
[Lucas appears to be in a panic, chest rising and falling rapidly as his eyes nervously dart around. Until, at last, they fall on you]
[...]
āN-No, Iā¦ I set it up before we met, I swearā¦ Pleaseā¦ Please donātā¦ D-Donāt look at me like that. P-Pleaseā¦?ā
[...]
[Youāre not sure how youāre ālooking at himā but you know youāre hurt]
āN-No, pleaseā¦ I-I swear. I disassembled it! I swear I did! I know this night meant everything to you, and I wanted it to be perfect, Iā¦ I didā¦ Iā¦ā
[...]
[He deflates, staring at you in abject terror]
āP-Pleaseā¦ Please donāt leaveā¦ Please, Iā¦ I thinkā¦ I-I think I loveā¦?ā
[Pause?]
[He goes ghost-white]
āWouldā¦ I still have done it if you hadnāt loved me unconditionallyā¦?ā
[...]
[His silence says everything]
[SFX: Wet footsteps hurrying up to you]
[You feel a hand on your shoulder and turn to see Angel, looking concerned]
[A] āCāmonā¦ Youāre getting soaked and itās cold as balls outside. Lucas, you should-ā.
[You both jump as Lucas explodes at Angel]
āGet your FUCKING hands off of them, Angel! You set me up! You fucking set me up, didnāt you?! I worked so fucking hard to fix my mistakes, and you just sweep in and fucking RUIN everything!ā
[Pause!]
[You lose it. You get in his face, absolutely ballistic]
āN-Noā¦ No, Sugarcakes, please-!ā
[Pause]
[Angel guides you behind him, voice gentle]
[A] āLucas, you know that I could barely pass math and that I have an injured leg from football. How would I have been able to do anything?ā
[...]
[Lucas just stares at the two of you, frozen]
[A] ā...Cāmon. Youāre shaking, andā¦ and I think youāre close to a panic attack, Dork. Lucasā¦ you probably should run. Cops are, no doubt, being called.ā
[Lucas remains frozen, staring at nothing]
[A] ā...Cāmon.ā
[SFX: Wet footsteps among muted chaos]
[A] āItās going to be OKā¦ Letās get you dry and home. And, umā¦ if you want to talk, Iāll listen. Iām not good with this stuff and, erm, creepy as this sounds, I swear this isnāt me trying to swoop in and steal you. I justā¦ I figured something like this would happen and thatā¦ youād need a friend when it did.ā
[He tenses as you start to cry and sort of awkwardly pats your shoulder]
[A] āItās gonna be OK. I promise. Cāmon, letās get you into some dry clothes and somewhere you feel safe.ā
[Angel leads you out. You take one last look at Lucas and heās still just stood there, staring after you in bleak, crushed silence]
[To be continued]
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