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Summary: For a long time you were having doubts about your boyfriend Andrew being involved in the murders due to all the circumstantial evidence but now the tables have turned. You're the one in the spotlight. Andrew thinks you did it and now he is going to tell Noah about this. Atleast that's what he thought was going to happen.
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Oh boy this look me hours. Grab your popcorn because this one is kinda longer than the other ones. But this is it. This series is finally over and fuck it was so much fun.
NOTE: (these brackets) are used for actions and as effects. You can make slight changes here and there and suit yourself. also i wrote this in a hurry and didn't get any time to revise so if there's any kind of spelling or grammatical errors i apologize for that.
Monetization is fine be it on youtube or anywhere else just credit me and i'd love to listen to the audio
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(driving a car)
Andrew : What?
Uh..yeah everything is fine..
No I'm not being weird..you are.
I'm just thinking about the case. It's crazy how someone could carry out such a heinous crime for such a long time and the we couldn't catch a hint about this person. Might be laughing at us from somewhere.
What's wrong with you? You look distracted.
Yeah? You're thinking about that too? hm..
Maya? No i didn't talk to her since she came down to the station.. Why...
Yeah i did tell her to let me know if she found something weird around her house. Maybe she didn't but isn't that a good thing?
Yeah right...you didn't say it wasn't..
I'm sorry I'm just stressed out i guess.
Yeah I'm sure.. everything's okay..
(scene fades away)
(next scene)
Noah : Hey get inside. We need to talk.
Andrew called last night after you left, all panicked and shocked. He says he knows who's the killer.
I don't know who he's talking about. He didn't give me a name yet but tonight he will. After work. Don't tell him i told you or he's not going to say anything. Okay?
Good.
Yeah okay but you'll have to go with me. He's going to leave after us and we both have to reach before he leaves. he will ask you if you reached home just say yes and he'll be out.
Hey listen to me. I'm right here and everything is going to be just fine. You trust me don't you?
Thank you. Just like i said i won't let anything harm you.
(scene fades away)
(next scene)
(number dialing)
(call sfx)
(nobody picks up)
(you've reached maya please leave a voicemail)
(dialing again)
(call sfx again)
(you've reached maya please leave a voicemail)
Andrew : Dammit!
Oh hey...
No..uhm... nothing's wrong..
No really.. What's up
Did you need something? No? Okay um..i have a lot work to finish so..maybe we could talk later?
Yeah? Alright.
Hey listen..
You can leave after you're done. I'll be late.
I'll see you at home.
I love you too..
(sighs)
(scene fades away)
(next scene)
(car door opens)
(receives a text)
Why is she texting me she never does that
What is this... "Wanna see Maya for the very last time? Come to our old house"
No she can't be doing that...what why...fuck
Hurry Andrew!
(car door closes)
(car starts and leaves)
(scene fades away)
(next scene)
Babe are you here...look please don't do anything stupid okay? We can talk about this. we'll find a solution alright? trust me. please i love you so much you know that. please don't hurt maya or anybody else. please if you love me then don't do it. (scared)
Baby..can you hear me?
Are you there... (lower voice)
(slow footsteps down the basement stairs)
(sighs)
Turn around.
Put your hands up.
Where's Maya?
What am I talking about? Stop this drama. Why are even....You wanted this to happen.
Where is Maya...and...
What is all this? These pictures of the girls...their information..every article...oh my god..this is your lair. You're crazy..
I'm going to ask for the last time Where is Maya
What do you mean you don't know
You were the one who sent me that text and now you don't know where she is. Is this some kind of a sick joke?
It's time to pay for what you have done..
I loved you i still do but...i can't let you go.. i'm sorry
Tell me where you hid Maya...or did you...did you kill her too?
Speak or i shoot.
What are you talking about?
(scoffs) Yeah? it was me huh?
Yeah i knew every one of them so what? What the hell does that prove? That i killed them? Can you prove it? No. Poor thing. You can't because i didn't do it. You did it. And now you're going to feel exactly how they felt.
(pulling the trigger)
(scene fades away)
(next scene)
So..this is how it's gonna go..
(gunshot)
Does it hurt too bad?
(giggles) Liar..
(Noah comes in running)
What the fuck are you doing here?
Noah : Oh my god no...hey are you okay? (panicked)
What did you do to her! (angry)
We have to call the ambulance. Right now!
Andrew : Noah calm down. We're gonna do that. I'm not going to let this bitch die but we're calling the cops. She's the one. She did it. She killed all those girls because i was friends with them. Oh god i can't believe this. How psycho of a girlfriend you have to be to do something like this. Fuckk... (frustrated)
Noah : No this is not how it was supposed to go...hey don't close your eyes okay? please don't...
I've to call the...
Andrew : You can't. There's no service.
Noah : No..not now...i can't lose you.. please stay with me.. please..
Not after everything i've done for you...not after doing all of this just to be with you...don't leave me
You basturd. You were supposed to end up like this. I did everything... everything i could. It was perfect. I made her believe it was you..you were about to die tonight not her...
I'm gonna fucking kill you (angry)
Andrew : Not really.
Game over brother..
(gunshot)
(falls to the ground but not dead)
Noah : Fuck...
Andrew : Did we do good?
Come on Noah. You didn't think you were the only one good at pretending. Did you?
Noah : You...did this.. (struggling to speak)
Andrew : Oh quit it. Don't even try to manipulate her. She's the one who told me the truth. I was going to shoot her thinking she...but then...
(flashback from the previous scene)
(maybe with a little echo)
What are you talking about?
(scoffs) Yeah? it was me huh?
Yeah i knew every one of them so what? What the hell does that prove? That i killed them? Can you prove it? No. Poor thing. You can't because i didn't do it. You did it. And now you feel how they felt.
(pulling the trigger)
(flashback scene continues)
Yes i will pull the trigger if you don't tell me where she is.
What do you mean you didn't send the text?
You what..
You were at Noah's..?
But what's that gotta do with this?
So you are saying this text was sent to me when you were at Noah's and you had no idea.. you mean you did not send this Noah did..
Okay so let's say he did send that text but he obviously would have deleted it so how did you know that he sent it to me?
Right...the app that stores all your messages..
Does that mean he put all of that in your bag to make me think that you did it..?
The hair and the photo..
A torn photo of me and maya..it was just my part and when i called maya she told me her part of the picture was all messed up on purpose...and it happened when someone broke into her house.
And the hair...the stolen hair...oh my god...
But why would he do that...
Why would he make me believe that you did that...
Wait...How do i know you're not lying to get out of this.
What plan...
(a little pause for the listener)
Alright..
So..this is how it's gonna go..
(gunshot)
Does it hurt too bad?
(giggles) Liar..
(Noah comes in running)
What the fuck are you doing here?
Noah : Oh my god no...hey are you okay? (panicked)
(flashback stops)
(present time)
Noah : You tricked..me...i did it for you..
Andrew : What did you expect? You're a fucking psychopath...i can't believe i called you my bestfriend...how could you...
Where's Maya..
Noah : Up there...and if...things would've gone..as planned... you'd be with her too... (scoffs)
Andrew : You killed my friends...and you say you love her..?
Noah : I do. I love her. You don't even deserve her. She deserves to be with someone like me who would do anything for her. I would do this all over again...a hundred times..just for her.. (giggles)
But..you...how did you know...i was playing it..so fucking perfect...how did you figure it out..
(flashback)
(echo maybe)
(door opens and closes)
Noah : Did he text you? Okay tell him you're at home.
(door closes)
So let's talk about it.
But before starting to talk about all of this mess. Would you like some coffee?
Yeah ofcourse you can use the washroom.
(sending text)
(a little pause)
So my study is your washroom huh?
(giggles) no that's fine... here's your coffee.. with three cubes of sugar.. just the way you like it.
Yeah i like to be pretty organised. Just keeping up with all the victims and evidences. I know there's a huge board in the office but i feel like my brain works better when i'm alone.
Now...if you're over with your admiration, would you like to drink your coffee?
And then we can have a talk on what to do about Andrew..
(drinks coffee)
You what..? You wanna confront him?
But...you know what.. you're right i think that's the best idea.. I'm gonna come with you
What do you mean no! I can't let you alone with that monster.
What...i don't get it..
You want a gun? You wanna...
Are you sure about this? We could just hand him over to the police..
No you're right..after everything he did to those girls...he deserves this.
Fine... I'll stay right outside. You confront him and then shoot him when you get the chance. As soon as you do that I'll rush inside and take care of the body. Got it?
Are you sure you can do this?
Okay... I'll be with you.. through every step okay?
(flashback stops)
(present time)
So what exactly caught your eye? That I was organised.
No....fuck no...shit... (frustrated)
My dumbass put Maya's pictures on the board before the news came out....fuckkk meee.. (frustrated)
Ofcourse...you found those ciggerates in my house. How did i mess this up..i was doing so good....
Andrew : By the way i lied. We do have signal here and now I'm calling the cops. And sorry man for making you go all crazy. It was just food colouring on her dress.
Noah : Fuck you! (angry)
(number dialing)
Andrew : Liam. My old house. Now, with the team. I'll explain later.
(call declines)
So...until they reach and get your butt behind the bars why don't you give us a little story time on a few things.
Let's play a game. I ask the questions and you answer and if you don't, she shoots.
Question number 1. How did manage to kill Chloe?
Noah : It was easy. When you left to talk with Loui and she was sitting there alone, I went out got dressed broke the window while your friend Chloe was getting ready thinking she was going to enjoy the party after her shift (laughs) Poor girl. I would've gone out but she...she came in..i didn't wanna hurt her
Hey...listen...i didn't wanna hurt you at all..but i had to..i had get out of there.. I'm so sorry..
Andrew : Enough. Question number 2. How did you make her believe it was me.
Noah : Oh boy... that was the fun part. Remember the cigarettes? I put it in your pocket and...and i'm your bestfriend...i stayed with you long enough to know which pocket you don't use or check and i took advantage of it. she found it and i lit the fire. i told her where those were from and boom! (laughs) and on top of that you knew all of them. i attacked the people you knew so she would think it's you dummy.
Andrew : Next. Why did you put that hair and the picture in her bag and why did you send that text?
Noah : So I could lure in your here all alone. So that you wouldn't say her a word thinking of her as the killer. So that you wouldn't sort it out on our own.
Andrew : Guess what. We did.
And the last question. Why did you break into this house?
Noah : Where the hell was i supposed to keep Maya?
(police siren approaching)
Times up brother.
Let's get you to the car and save them a walk. Shall we?
Noah : Let me..go... (struggling)
Andrew : Get him to the station and put him in a cell. I'll be behind you guys. I'll explain when we reach there.
Hey...are you okay? God come here.. (sighs)
It's over... I'm so sorry i thought it was you..
Yeah i know you did too...it wasn't our fault. It was him..all along...
I'm just glad that you're safe...
I love you so much.. *(kisses)
Don't worry. He is going to rott in jail.
Come on let's go. We have a whole lot of explaining to do.
(scene fades away)
(next scene)
(footsteps along with some people talking lightly in the background)
A random prison staff : Hello Detective. How can i help you?
Alright. Sit right here (door opens)
I'll bring him.
(a little pause)
(door closes)
Noah : It's been a long time (giggles)
How are you?
Hm. Good. How's Andrew?
Wow...looks like someone got married.
I heard you wanted to see me sooner but Andrew wasn't letting you.
I get the news (giggles)
It means a lot you know..it really does..
No.. ofcourse...you know how much i love you...
You knew it from the start and that's why you came to talk to me that night and we know what really happened..
(flashback to the night listener went to Noah's before all of that confrontation)
(echo maybe)
(door opens and closes)
Noah : Did he text you? Okay tell him you're at home.
(door closes)
So let's talk about it.
But before starting to talk about all of this mess. Would you like some coffee?
Yeah ofcourse you can tell me anything.
You what..! No.. stop..This is not funny
What do you mean this is not a joke?! Are you hearing yourself?
You're the telling me that you're the one who killed all those girls?
This is not...no...tell me you're messing with me..
Oh my god... you're telling the truth..
But why...why did you do that...
Are you fucking serious? You killed them because they were trying to steal Andrew from you? You should have spoke to Andrew about this...what have you done..
Wait does that mean you killed Maya too?
No no no...you fucked up..this can't be happening..you can't do this to yourself.
You're gonna go to jail. You're gonna go to jail... (sighs)
What do you mean...me? How would i be a help to you?
You want me to confess and cover for you don't you...
I'll do it. I love you and I'll do anything and everything i can to protect you but you have to promise me one thing. you'll sort this out with him and never get into any kind of trouble because no one's gonna do this after me. Do you understand?
(sighs)
Okay...what now?
So you're going to send him that text?
What part do you want me to play?
(flashback stops)
(back to present)
You always knew I'd do anything for you. that is why you chose me to cover up for you and i don't regret any of it i promise. The only thing i regret is not being able to look at you everyday.
Can i ask you a few things?
If you were going to make me the villain then why did you come and talk to me about how you thought Andrew was the one?
(giggles) Smart move. I guess that did help me answer his questions as to how i made you believe it was him.
You know...i like this about you. how you keep everything perfect.. i always appreciated that.
I get why you broke into Maya's house but why yours?
Right...because he was getting suspicious about the basement aka your lair. I have to say you're a genius.
You didn't really get caught did you? By Andrew? You deliberately put the hair and the picture in your bag so he could find it easily. You wanted to put an end to it. You wanted to give him a close call. (giggles)
Perfect.
Who's hair was it anyway?
(scoffs) ofcourse it was fake..you stole it before we could test it..
Starting from that note in the bar and the attack on you that never really happened, you made sure to make yourself look like the victim.
The masterplan by the mastermind...
(a bell or something rings)
Visiting hours are over but i just wanna ask one thing from you.
Would you mind visiting me a little more. I really miss you in here. Please?
Thank you so much...i love you and i'll always keep loving you..bye..
(door opens)
(footsteps and people talking lightly)
*(gate opens)
Andrew : Hey..how was it?
Okay..how is he doing?
Hm..good...
If you wanna visit him more...that's okay.
I understand why you blame yourself for all of this. You think he did it for you but it's not your fault...you know that right?
But you can visit him if that makes you feel better. I won't stop you anymore.
Okay. (a kiss)
Do you wanna grab something on the way? Yeah alright... let's go...
(both car door opens and closes)
(car starts and leaves)
(scene fades away)
(final part ends here)
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