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[M4F/MM4F/MF4F] Find The Killer: Part 5 [Detective x Listener] [Murder Mystery] [Plot Heavy] [Script Offer]
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Summary: You find out a new girl had been murdered but the catch is that this girl is from your own department and that's the same girl you were having doubts about being involved in all of this mess but guess not..

Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 6

We're almost towards the end of this series and it's been really fun writing this so far.

NOTE: (these brackets) are used for actions and as effects. You can make slight changes here and there and suit yourself. also i wrote this in a hurry and didn't get any time to revise so if there's any kind of spelling or grammatical errors i apologize for that.

Monetization is fine be it on youtube or anywhere else just credit me and i'd love to listen to the audio

New character: Maya (Andrew's ex girlfriend)

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(police siren in the background)

(car door opens and closes)

Andrew : It just doesn't end. Does it?

Yeah? when? when will it end?

I feel fucking useless. i can't protect my own friends. god i can't believe this is happening (frustrated tone)

I'm scared...i don't think...i don't think i'm good enough for protecting you anymore...i never was..

I never was... (kisses)

What...what are you talking about?

You... you're kidding right...? (surprised tone)

Oh... you're not... (sighs)

You...you really wanna...get married? to me?

(laughs) right...to me...who else would it be...

I love you too (kisses)

(keeps kissing)

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(both car door opens and shuts)

Even though it was a fucked up day..you did make it better for me. Thank you for handling me back there i...i was just...thank you.

Well yes...you can make it a lot better once we get inside.

Mhm that's right (giggles)

You got the key? I think i forgot mine..

(key entering a lock)

Wait... it's unlocked...

Did you forget to unlock the door? No? Then why is it...

Holy fuck... someone's been here..but why...

What is it? It's a clock. And it's broken just like the other things. What's so special about it?

The time...the time it got broken...

It's exactly when we left for work this morning..

Do we really think that this is same person? the killer? but why would the killer break into our house? is anything stolen?

No.. nothing is stolen. no one's hurt. then why!

(sighs)

Look whatever it is, this place is not safe anymore. I...i can't keep you here. No. It will be a dumb decision to stay here after this. Maybe it's a warning. That he's onto us. Or..she...or whoever the fuck it is...I can't risk your life.. We'll shift. We'll shift to my other apartment. It's a few miles from here. Okay? Please..

Thank you...

I'll call Noah and he's going to help us out with everything.

Hey... I'm sorry for all of this...I didn't want this life for us..

Alright.. go and pack the things you need for tonight we'll do the rest tomorrow.

(number dialing)

(calling sfx)

Hey I need your help. Do you think you can swing by? It's important.

Thank you so much..I know i can always count you.

Alright.

(call declines)

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(door bell or knock)

It must be Noah

(door opens)

Noah : Hey what's going on?

...what the...

Oh my god...is it..

Andrew : Yes it is.

Noah : Are you guys fine?

Andrew : Yeah we're fine.

Noah : Hey... (lower voice)

Are you okay? (hugs)

It's okay...yeah..i know...

Don't worry. Andrew will take care of you. And so will I. Okay? Okay.

Take her and move it. I'll take a tour and see if i can find anything. And I'll put a few cops on duty tonight so that nothing gets stolen atleast. Go!

Andrew : Thanks man.

Noah : Ofcourse.

Andrew : Come on.

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

Maya : Excuse me.

May i please speak to Detective Coleman?

Thank you.

Yeah sure I'll have a seat.

(a little pause)

Andrew : Hello! How may i....uhm...how may i help you?

Maya : I'm here to file a break in that occurred at my place yesterday.

Andrew : Sure would you like to come to my office.

Maya : Ofcourse i would...i would love to..(whispers)

Andrew : Hey can you talk to Noah about the tour he took last night?

Alright thank you...i'll see you at lunch..yeah..

And you...come inside.

(office door opens and closes)

Maya : Soo...how are you doing?

Andrew : Why are you here Maya?

Maya : I told you Andrew. I'm here to report a break in.

Someone broke into my house and left me a note.

Andrew : What note?

Maya : I don't know what it means but it says "you're a special one"

(scene fades away)

(a different scene)

Noah : Hey...is everything okay?

What girl?

You think Andrew knows the girl and he's sketchy about it?

Wait lemme....oh shit that's...

Yeah...i know her..

Her name is Maya. She's Andrew's ex. What is she doing here?

A break in?

Hm...

Yeah they used to date 3 years back. The perfect couple. So in love with each other. But Maya's parents they took her somewhere else for her studies. He was fucked up for a long time but you made it easier for him.

No i don't think he's in love with her. I know he's in love with you but...

But i can't tell about her..

You don't have to be insecure. Even if you feel that way just talk it out with him okay?

Maybe he never told you about her because it never stood as a concern to him. but i'm sure if he knows it's bothering you he'll make everything clear. he loves you. just talk to him that you get insecured if he gets close to someone else. will you?

Good.

Yeah ofcourse. What is it?

Yeah what about the ciggerates?

Okay so you found them in Andrew's pocket. It's not surprising that he still smokes them (giggles) but what's so odd about it?

Why would he lie to you about such a stupid thing?

Wait a second you what?! You found them in his pocket on the night of Sarah's murder...and Sarah was found dead near the...fuck..

Do you think... Andrew has something to do with these murders?

No this can't be...i..not andrew...

What are you talking...what basement what key...

Maybe he actually doesn't remember anything about the keys.. people often forget where they put their keys. always happens with me..

You have a doubt on him because he woke up in the middle of the night to drink water and couldn't find the key to the basement? really?

No that's not true. He only knew Chloe and Claire and i knew them too.

What do you mean..wait you...you saw Sarah on his facebook list?

No...i...

Just shut up please (angry)

Fuck.. I'm... I'm sorry..i just can't believe that he could...

Okay fine...meet me at my place after work. Don't tell him about anything. Okay?

Alright. Now forget about this and act like nothing happened. If it's true then he shouldn't know that we know about any of this.

Hey listen.. nothing will happen to you...i won't let anything harm you i promise..

Go..

(scene fades away)

(back to andrew and maya's scene)

Andrew : So this is break in? A note saying that you are special?

Hey...hi..

I'm not brushing it off i just..

Maya : Thank you for the concern. I'm sure he won't take the threat lightly. but how do you know it's a threat?

Andrew : She got a similar note months ago and the murders began right after.

Maya : Okay but what's the connection between these two notes?

Andrew : She's my... girlfriend and you're a.. friend and two of those victims were my friends so i don't know what else to think at this point..

Someone broke into our place too.. yesterday..

They didn't leave a note or...anything at all.

Do you have the note with you?

Maya : Yes i do. Do you need it? Take it.

Andrew : Give me a minute.

Maya : What are you searching for?

Andrew : Here it is. The note she recieved and this is yours...and it's the same writing...

You were right. It's the same person.

(a little pause)

Alright you can go now. Let me now if you find something weird. And don't worry we will catch this person. Do you want a cop protection outside your house?

Maya : No I'll be fine.

Andrew : Let me know if you do.

Maya : Sure i will. Bye. It was nice meeting you after such a long time. I've missed you a lot. Maybe we'll meet again since we're in the same town now.

And...nice to meet you too... Andrew's new girlfriend (giggles)

Oh I'm sure you'll see me around.

Andrew : That was an awkward goodbye (giggles)

What?

What are you talking about?

You asked Noah about her? Are you serious?

Why would you do that?

No that's not true. I don't hide anything from you.

No i don't.

Just stop it okay. Stop being so annoying. I don't owe you an explanation.

Please leave me alone. I said leave me alone.

(office door closes)

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(door bell or knock)

(door opens)

I thought it was you. Come in

(door closes)

So let's talk about it.

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(door opens and closes)

Hey...

Where were you? I called you while coming home but you didn't answer...

Are you mad at me? You should be..

Today at work... I'm sorry for all that..I shouldn't have talked to you like that..

And yes you were right. I was hiding something from you.

It was about Maya. She started calling me a few days ago since she came back to town.

Wait what...you knew?...

How..?

Oh you got a feeling that i was talking to my ex (giggles) girlfriend's intuition i guess

I never told you about her because we never had that ex conversation and i thought if i tell you about the calls you'd freak out. but i promise i right away told her i was with you. she never saw you so she couldn't tell you were my girlfriend earlier today. I didn't wanna create problems between us. I don't love her anymore. I love you and it's always going to be you. Even about this break in i would've assigned her someone else but i can't do that. it's the same person it's our case. I can't let it slide away knowing how dangerous it could be. You understand right?

Thank you so much (kisses)

Yeah i would love that.. I'm really hungry

You can get our dinner ready and i can take a shower and then we can eat together

Sounds good? okay.

(door opens)

Heyy! where are the new towels?

The closet? okay.

(locked closet door sounds)

It's locked..the keys must be inside her bag..

(bag zipper)

Where is it (talks to himself)

God there's so much stuff in here..let me just turn it over and...(stuff falling from the bag)

What the fuck....is that...noo...it can't be..

It's the hair that was stolen from...does that mean she stole this...

Is that my photo....my photo with....fuckkkk..fuck fuck fuck...

(number dialing)

(calling sfx)

Hey maya it's me andrew.

No I've called you for something important.

Do you still have the picture of ours that we took when we went on that last summer camp trip?

Maya : Yes i do but why.. (her voice in phone call sfx)

You do? Are you sure? Can you find it right now?

Maya : But why?

Andrew : Just do it. Quick.

Maya : Alright wait a second.

Andrew : Yeah okay..

Maya : Andrew...

Andrew : Yeah did you find it?

Maya : Yes i did but...

Andrew : But what

Maya : Your part of the photo is gone...and my face is all scribbled...

Andrew : I've to go... I'll call you later.

(call declines)

(number dialing again)

(call sfx)

Noah. I need to talk to you. I think i know who did it. But you can't tell anyone about. Not a single person. Can you do that?

Noah : Ofcourse i can. Who is it?

Andrew : Look i can't tell you now. But I can go to your place tomorrow after work. I'll tell her I'll be staying late for work but I'll leave for your place once she leaves for home. Okay? But do not tell anyone about this.

Noah : Got it.

Andrew : Alright i gotta go now. bye.

(call declines)

Yeah..i found the towels.. (loud)

Fuck... (sighs)

(part 5 ends here)

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