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[M4F/MM4F/MF4F] Find The Killer: Part 4 [Detective x Listener] [Murder Mystery] [Plot Heavy] [Script Offer]
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Summary: You and your team are trying your best to solve this murder mystery. Meanwhile another body have been discovered, making it the third girl that has been murdered by this mystery killer. After a conversation with Noah you find out something that makes you feel like your boyfriend, Andrew is hiding something from you. But that's not it. Someone from your own department dies and you cannot think of any motive.

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(police siren in the background)

Noah : Hey you're here.

Andrew : Oh god this is bad... (sighs)

Noah : Yeah it is pretty bad.

But we found a few hair that do not belong to her the colour or length doesn't match. But the catch is, it's a woman's hair. So maybe we're not scoping it out.

Andrew : What do you mean?

Noah : I mean, it's time we extend our suspect profile. It can be a woman. It's not like a woman can't use enough force or commit a sexually motivated crime. Maybe all this time we were running behind the wrong things. Anyway, I've already sent people to check the database for all the women who committed sexual crimes in this area in the past and is now free.

Andrew : (sighs) So now what?

Noah : Now we send her body and wait for the reports.

Yes ofcourse we are going to test the hair too, against every women on the database.

No it's fine you don't have to do that. I will do this part. You should go with Andrew and figure out the details as soon as possible.

Hey I'll look after this. Don't worry. Go.

By the way, did you call Charlotte? Anything about the creepy bar guy?

Andrew : Actually i did but nothing came up. He or apparently she was wearing a hoodie and mask and she couldn't get a look at the face. But i did find out something interesting.

Noah : What's that?

Andrew : The person never came inside the bar. They gave that letter to Charlotte a few metres away from the bar i guess to avoid CCTV. And surprisingly they knew what kind of dress she was going to wear. They described the dress and told her to say the same to the waiter. Played smart but now we know that person is someone we know. It has to be. Or else how would they what she was going to wear.

Noah : Someone from our own department? Why? What's the motive? Do you have any problem with anyone?

Alright listen we'll talk about this later i need to take care of this. And keep an eye on everyone.

(a little pause)

Andrew : Hey is something wrong?

You sure?

Okay let's leave then. yeah..

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

Noah : No we didn't find a match yet. but don't worry we have dna now. if we wish we can extend the area.

No that's fine im gonna take care of this part.

Yeah I'm sure. You tell me...how are you..?

Yeah ofcourse, we can have lunch together. You wait here and i'll bring you something but...what do you wanna eat?

Wow..anything? That's weird. You always pick something in...okay okay you're hungry...alright i'll be right back..

(office door opens and shuts)

(listener rattling through drawers for a few seconds)

(sits back down)

(office door opens and closes)

I hope i didn't take long... (giggles)

Ofcourse i know which one is your favourite... we've been friends for years.

You look worried...are you okay? Hey come here..

Listen to me. You are safe. I was really worried but you since the night it started but maybe Andrew was right. The killer had no intentions of hurting you or else he would've attacked again but he didn't...or...she...which is a good sign by the way.

Anddd... you're eating...

(giggles) Good..

(office phone rings)

Hello this is the local PD how can I help you?

Oh hello Mrs Parker! How are you doing?

Claire?

Actually she told us she was taking a leave to visit you since you were sick.

So she never visited you? (sighs)

You don't worry i'll find something out as soon as possible.

(call declines)

Hey come on. We need to check up on Claire.

Yeah her mom called, she never made it to her.

Yeah to her apartment. Get inside the care.

(car door opens and shuts)

(car starts)

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(knocks on the door)

Claire!? Are you in there? Claire! It's Noah. If you're in there please answer the door.

What do you think? Should we break the door and enter?

No you are right. We should give it sometime before doing that.

Listen keep an eye, all around the house and call any of us in case something happens. Be alert.

Come on let's go back to the station.

(car door opens and shuts)

(car starts)

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(office door opens and closes)

No don't worry. They will fill us in.

(car door opens and closes)

Where's Andrew? Have you talked to him?

Right he was supposed to investigate the locals. did he find anything?

It's almost been a month and we have nothing on this person (sighs) I'm really glad you're okay...

I was worried about you...a lot..(slow kisses)

...uh no...yeah...fuck... you're right..this is...i shouldn't have done this.. you're in a relationship..i'm sorry..i don't know what i was thinking... please just...i'm so sorry..

No i shouldn't have! i shouldn't have....

I'm just gonna leave..uhm...i'll drop you home since Andrew's not here yet. Is that fine with you?

Okay great...let me get my car keys.

(drawer sounds)

What the fuck.... (surprisingly)

It's gone...

The hair... it's gone!! Someone stole it!

Someone stole the fucking evidence!!

We have to check the footage. Maybe someone entered the station while we were gone. There has to be something.

Yeah click on that.

(a little pause)

God! Nothing! Again nothing!

(office door opens and closes)

Andrew : What's wrong i heard you screaming

Noah : No dammit. The hair that we found with the body is gone. The only fucking DNA we had. And now we are back to square one. There's nothing on the cctv and no sign of break in. Which leaves only one theory on the plate. How about Claire? She is missing for a week someone just stole the evidence from my office and there is no sign of forced entry, no CCTV footage, nothing, just gone into thin air. Maybe that call from her mom was just to distract us so she could get what she wanted. Since there is no sign of break in or forced entry and no footage this can only mean one thing, that somebody had entered from the back door and the only people who have the keys to the back door are the officers and Claire looks the most suspicious right now. We already knew this could be one of our own right?

It is not about what we think she is capable of. Sometimes we might not have any idea about what a person is behind the person they pretend to be. I'm not saying she did it but at this point I am ready to take any possible theory and crosscheck it because we never know. I don't want to obstruct this investigation and stand between the victims and justice because of our personal opinion on who she could be. If she is innocent she will be able to prove it and if she is not she gets what she deserves.

(phone rings)

Andrew : I've got to take this

Oh no it's a friend of mine. I'll be right back.

(footsteps)

Why are you calling me? Why now? (lower voice)

Look I can't do that. No I can't come see you okay? (lower voice)

Because..! Because I'm with someone else. I'm sorry I can't... (lower voice)

(call declines)

Holy shit! You scared me!

It was no one. Nothing to worry about.

Babe... i'm telling you.. it's nothing

Just quit it okay? I'm already so fucking tired. Do you wanna go home or not because I'm leaving right now.

(footsteps approaching)

Noah : Don't worry I'll drop her home. You go. I do need her help for some work anyway.

Andrew : Whatever. Good night.

(footsteps fading away)

Noah : Hey. Are you okay?

No don't cry... it's okay.. I'm so sorry (hugs)

He's just frustrated. I know that doesn't justify the way he talked to you but this is eating up his head. Hey, everything is going to be fine okay? Look at me. Do you trust me? I'm going to make everything just fine i promise. This will be over soon. I'll make it stop no matter what it takes. (sighs)

(phone rings)

Hello! Whattt?! Yeah we'll be there.

Call Andrew and tell him to meet us at Claire's.

No. She didn't come home. She was at home. Her dead body was.

We need to go.

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(police siren in the background)

Andrew : It's the same person. But why Claire? We were thinking it's her who stole the evidence...

Noah : But whoever did this was close to her. Close enough to know she was taking a leave.

(phone rings)

Andrew : ...I uh... I'm gonna take this one..

Noah : What the fuck is up with you? Where the fuck is your mind? Is the call important than this? The last time i remember, you answered a call and snapped at her.

Andrew : Why don't you mind your own fucking business?

Noah : I am. But maybe I'll mind yours too, because you're clearly not fit enough for that.

Andrew : You stop talking or I will..

Noah : You will what Andrew?

No. I won't let it go. You don't understand....

Fine. I'll go inside and see what's going on. You're coming?

Alright.

Andrew : Look... I'm sorry I snapped at you earlier. I shouldn't have. I was just so frustrated with everything that's going on but i forgot that you're going through the same thing as me but you never let it affect us. I love you okay? and I'm so sorry. I'm gonna be honest. I'm so fucking scared right now. I know I always tell you not to be but now that someone from our own department is...this is getting out of hand and I...I can't lose you. I can't imagine my life without... I'm not even gonna say it.

(giggles) So this time you're the one comforting me huh? Well i don't know what's comfort anymore because someone i know just died, again. And we couldn't figure out a single thing about this person.

Noah : (shouts from distance) Come on we need more hands.

Andrew : (sighs) Let's go inside. We can talk about this later.

(scene fades away)

(part 4 ends here)

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