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[M4F/MM4F/MF4F] Find The Killer: Part 3 [Detective x Listener] [Murder Mystery] [Plot Heavy] [Script Offer]
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Summary: So far there's no progress made on who the killer is but Andrew is determined in finding his friend Chloe's killer. Meanwhile another girl was murder and assualted in the same way as Chloe. This proves that the killer had no personal issues with just Chloe and the motive might be something else.

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Monetization is fine be it in youtube or anywhere else just credit me and i'd love to listen to the audio

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(blanket/sheets noises)

(slow footsteps)

(phone number dialing)

(outgoing ring and incoming ring sounds because she calls andrew and andrew's phone was ringing inside the house)

(phone keeps ringing for a few seconds and slow footsteps)

Andrew : Hey baby. (low voice)

Shit! Did i scare you..i did not mean to I'm so sorry.

Are you okay? Don't be scared I'm right here. Okay? Come here (hugs)

Why are you even walking around in the middle of the night? And why were you calling me? Did you need me for something?

No ofcourse not! Where would i go at this hour! I just went to drink water.

Yes we did have water on the bed table but i didn't remember and i was just thirsty and the first thing i could think about was the kitchen.

Why are you getting so much worried. No one can hurt you. I was right here in our house. You're safe here. You're safe with me.

Do you know you are the first girl that I ever fell in love with? It's not like I have never been with anyone else but most of the time it was just attraction mostly physical but with you for the first time I feel like I am in love. Real love.... I will do anything for you, anything for your happiness and anything that comes between us, I will fight it to death, I can promise you that and trust me I won't break my promise, ever. so you can be certain that I won't let anything bad happened to you, anything that takes you away from me I would never let that happen, maybe for my own selfish reasons but I really love you a lot.

No I'm fine. I am just a little stressed about this whole case. we are not doing enough. we are nowhere close enough to finding the killer. it's not just about Chloe anymore. it's about every other girl that's going to end up dead. we have to protect them. it's our job. but who do we protect them from. we know nothing about the killer. we know nothing about the girls who he is going to target next.

We even tried to match the similarities between the two girls in a hope that we could find his victim type but I don't think he has a type, at least that's what the comparison shows. I think he picks anyone from anywhere whenever he gets the opportunity to do so. and that is the worst case scenario. this means that we have no idea who he is going to attack next and we can do nothing to prevent it and we just have to wait and watch.

I think I'll take a few drinks. Yeah.. (glasses and drinks pouring)

Would you like some? No? Okay. I feel like my head is going to explode.

Come here sit with me. I'm sure we'll figure something out. We always do.

Yeah no I've talked to Noah about that. We're going to find out tomorrow whether that handwriting belongs to anyone from the bar or not.

I feel so tired. Do you wanna just lie down and talk? maybe i'll fall asleep soon.

Okay.. let's get on the bed andddd...Come here let me hold you.. (sighs) This is perfect. The way all of my thoughts just melt away when i have you with me..is just perfect. I've wanted this all my life and i knew that you were the one who could do it..i knew it from the moment i laid my eyes on you. I love you so much (kisses)

Alright now go back to sleep. Every day is a long fucking day. Let's just rest for a while and then we have to get back to work.

Okay good night baby (forehead kiss)

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

Noah : Hey you're here. There's a bad news. The handwriting on the note does not match anyone in the bar. and as far as we know the killer is too smart to just enter the bar with the whole registration process and then escape the place leaving his handwriting behind. and even when people fake their handwriting, the experts can easily figure that out but he did not. he had to have entered through the window. but that doesn't even matter.

The other girl? Yes her name Sarah Jones. She was found dead in a place behind the gas station. her body was found in the exact same condition as Chloe's. But this time there wasn't a note.

What are you thinking?

Wait so you think the creepy guy who sent you that note is the killer? Oh you know it? How?

The handwriting matches. Perfect. Then we can easily find out who it is.

Andrew : No we can't.

Noah : Hey good morning to you too.

Andrew : Morning Noah.

Noah : So why can't we?

Andrew : Because the waiter didn't get that note directly from the guy. it was given to him by a lady who was asked to give that note to the waiter and later be passed on to her.

Noah : So if we wanna know something, we have to find the lady. and once we do that we know who the killer is, hopefully.

Okay Andrew listen. Check the cctv and get the waiter with you. Let him watch it and point out who the lady was and once you know the timings of her entry, we can get her name and the rest of her details on the entry register.

Andrew : Got it.

Hey take care okay? I love you (one kiss)

Noah : Have you eaten anything since morning? I thought so. Would you like to go grab something?

(a little pause or maybe add footsteps)

Since when did you start smoking these cheap stuff. come on I know you. i've always seen you smoke like the good stuff for years. but that's fine don't worry it's just between you and me. sometimes we gotta stick to the gas station ciggerates and there's nothing wrong about that (laughs)

What do I mean? it's fine you don't have to be embarrassed. just because you have a lot of money now that doesn't mean that you can't smoke cheap stuff sometimes. cheap stuff is actually better than the expensive ones at times and let me tell you a secret, Andrew used to smoke these a lot. We would sometimes sneak out in the middle of the night just so he could go to the gas station and smoke these.

Noo that's the cool thing about these. These cigarettes are only found in the gas station. they're are cheap but exclusives.

Are you okay?

No I mean you look a little zoned out what's wrong you can tell me whatever is on your mind

So you're sure everything is fine? Okay I'll take your word for it. What do you wanna order?

Hey...where are going?

What important work... atleast have your lunch..! Heyyy stop... (sighs)

(scenes fades away)

(next scene)

Andrew : Hey sorry I'm a little late tonight. A lot of work, you know that.. Why didn't you let me know when you left from work? You never leave like that.

You didn't wanna disturb me? Baby...you can never disturb me you got that? Good.

Anyway I'm just gonna go and change, maybe take a shower and then we can have dinner.

When did you go to the gas station? You could've told me. I would've gone with you.

Oh i know because of the cigarettes. Those are their exclusives.

Oh no i don't smoke these. I don't like the flavour so..

Yeah i looked into what Noah said. The waiter recognised the lady. Her named is Charlotte. I've got her number and I'll call her tomorrow morning it's too late to make a call now.

Well... I'm tired and I need sleep. Maybe we can talk about this in the morning. Yeah.

Hey...I love you..and I'm telling you this for the 100th time, he's not gonna hurt you i promise (kiss)

Good night sweetie.

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

(slow footsteps)

(door opens and shuts very slowly)

(rattling through the drawers)

(door opens loudly)

What the hell are you doing here in my office?

What file?

At 3 in morning? Are you fucking serious?!

Okay so? can't you wait until morning. You get up in the middle of the night to study a case file!? That's insane. And what's that?

The basement key? Where did you find that?

(scoffs) Strange! I've been looking for that since you asked me to but i just couldn't find it but you somehow did in the middle of night out of nowhere.

Babe...you know what. Just keep the files and the key and come back to sleep okay? Do the rest tomorrow. Come on...

The key won't fly away...just keep it there and come back to bed. Good.

(pause or footsteps)

Come here I'll hold you tight and won't let you go anywhere this time (giggles)

Sleep now cutie.

(scene fades away)

(next scene)

Good morning baby.

So are you back to the basement key duty?

Why are so obsessed with it? What's so important?

We don't even have that much stuff to put in the basement...

What's wrong? It's not opening? Let me have a look..

Oh wait...this is not the correct key. this is the old one. 7 months ago when i renovated this place i changed the basement locks too and i must have lost the new key but don't worry im sure it's laying around somewhere i'll look for it.

What about the file?

Um...the file you were looking for in my office last might. you don't remember? i thought it was important.

If it was that important how did you just forget about it?

Alright alright you did not forget. Got it.

Okay now can your boyfriend get something to eat? (giggles)

Yesss please...i love that one..mhm (giggles)

(phone rings)

Wait i gotta take this, it's noah.

Hey what's up?

Noah : You guys need to come down to 226 Erick Road right now.

Andrew : What's the matter?

Noah : Another girl is dead Andrew, just like those two.

Andrew : Shit! We're on our way.

(call declines)

Hey come on be quick we need to leave.

Another girl's body was discovered. We need to leave, now!

(scene fades away)

(part 3 ends here)

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