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[MMM4F] A Bloodstained Rose Pt. 2 [Vampire Lord Speaker][Nephew Speaker][Sadistic Torturer Speaker][Brainwashed Listener][Angst][Revenge][Brainwashing][Adoration][Best Husband][Hypnosis][Missing Listener][Conspiracy][L-Bombs][Comfort][CW: Brainwashing/Violence]
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Part 1


Context: They say a powerful vampire lord grew bitter and retreated from his own kind. He built a castle in the forest's heart and tried to be content with his own company. Alas, he found himself lonely. He'd spent much of his time cultivating a garden and the rose bushes were in blood. He plucked one and wished for one thing. "I wish to meet the love of my life, please". He thought it was just a silly fancy but, right before his eyes, the rose turned into a beautiful woman. She smiled at him and simply said "I wanted to see what you were like after you asked for me so sweetly". Their love became one of legends, a good way to scold lazy husbands who forget to show their love. Of course, it's just a silly story. After all, even the most beautiful roses wilt. Hm? Oh, I didn't mean anything by that at all. Not at all.

Setting: Seth Autumnspire's castle

Tags:[MMM4F][Vampire Lord Speaker][Nephew Speaker][Sadistic Torturer Speaker][Brainwashed Listener][Angst][Revenge][Brainwashing][Adoration][Best Husband][Hypnosis][Missing Listener][Conspiracy][L-Bombs][Comfort][CW: Brainwashing/Violence]

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[S] = Seth, the Vampire Lord

[R] = Rin, Seth's nephew

[L] = Lucien, a mysterious malefactor


[Scene opens back in the mysterious castle]

[SFX: Muffled talking and faint owl chatter]

[You lie bound to the bed, unable to move, only able to listen to the two men outside your room]

[R] ā€œWeā€™re just not sure what to do, Uncleā€¦ Our Crows have found no whispers, the guards' pockets have been well-lined to assure silence, and even Thok hasnā€™t been able to loosen anyoneā€™s lips, no matter how hard he punches them. Whoever did thisā€¦ Theyā€™re powerful and very well-connected.ā€

[The other man, the handsome man that talks to you so sweetly, sighs]

[S] ā€œI seeā€¦ Rose has never harmed a single soul, not even a bug if she could help it! No, this was for me. Someone wanted to hurt me as much as they humanly could. Though who, Iā€¦ I do not know.ā€

[Pause]

[R] ā€œYouā€™ve been alive thousands of years, Uncleā€¦ Surely youā€™ve done some wrong?ā€

[A new voice whispers in your ear, sickly sweet and like hearing raw bliss]

[L] Oh heā€™s done plenty wrongā€¦ Such a bad man, isnā€™t he, little Rose? Listen to how he speaks so gently, so quietlyā€¦ Do not believe any of his lies. No, noā€¦ Itā€™s me you love, remember?

[Pause?]

[L] Oh, you may have loved him onceā€¦ But he hurt you, remember? So badlyā€¦ He threw you away and now he wants you back, now that Iā€™ve fixed youā€¦ He has to payā€¦

[Pause]

[S] ā€œAhā€¦ In my younger years, I did fight in the Crusades, among other warsā€¦ I wasā€¦ feral.ā€

[R, taken aback] ā€œYou were a feral vampire, Uncle?ā€

[S, with a sigh] ā€œI wasā€¦ I served under the banner of Lord Vaughn, a man known for his power and cruelty. He ā€˜encouragedā€™ his soldiers to ā€˜enjoyā€™ our conquest over the humans. I do not know what happened to him, though there were some rumors he fell madly in love with a Nun, heh. Can you imagine? He always did seem to love picking the most difficult challenges presented to him.ā€

[Pause]

[L] You seeā€¦? He admits to it. He admits to being a monster!

[R] ā€œI seeā€¦ Well, no matter your past, I believe youā€™ve redeemed yourself, Uncle.ā€

[Pause]

[S] ā€œI was lost for ages, running on instinct alone, taking more blood than I could ever needā€¦ I was a monster, literally and figurativelyā€¦ It was exhilarating and agonizing. I feel the closest comparison I can make is when a human becomes addicted to hard drugs. They feel as though they are unstoppable when all outside of them can see they are justā€¦ dyingā€¦ā€

[Pause]

[L] Shhā€¦ Not now. Youā€™ll get a chance to strike his heart later. Just pretend you still love him. Be his sweet little Rose, for now. Once heā€™s dead, I swear Iā€™ll come and bring you home, mi Ombra. Iā€™ll make you feel so good, youā€™ll forget all of thisā€¦

[Pause?]

[L] ā€¦ I did say still love him, yes. A slip of the tongue, I assure you. Now, focus. He approaches.

[SFX: The Listener struggling against their bonds and approaching footsteps]

[S] ā€œOh, my Roseā€¦ā€

[His voice cracks and he quickly looks away]

[R] ā€œUncle, if this is too muchā€¦ā€

[S] ā€œNo, Rin. She is the love of my life, in sickness and in health! I will go to any lengths to help her heal, even if seeing her like this isā€¦ agony. Oh, darlingā€¦ Pleaseā€¦ I swear to you that I will not give up on you, no matter what.ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[S] ā€œIā€™m just glad youā€™ve eaten and rested a touch.ā€

[L] So you could gather the strength to kill himā€¦ Donā€™t forget.

[S] ā€œIā€™m going to sit here, darling. Alright? I just want to hold your hand.ā€

[SFX: A bit of a struggle]

[He takes your hand and gently squeezes it]

[S] ā€œP-Please, my angel. Please, I want to help you, more than anything, but I need you to talk to me. Let me inā€¦ Even if itā€™s just for a momentā€¦ā€

[...Fightā€¦]

[L] Yes, my love, fight itā€¦ Fight him

[S] ā€œD-Darling? You said something, but I couldnā€™t hearā€¦ā€

[Pause!]

[L] ā€¦do not fight meā€¦ you know what I can do to you if you fight meā€¦

[S] ā€œ...Twoā€¦bricksā€¦ spiralā€¦ mistā€¦ well?ā€

[Pause!]

[S] ā€œDarling, Iā€¦ I donā€™t understand. Rin?ā€

[The boys looks just as perplexed]

[R] ā€œI donā€™tā€¦ Two bricksā€¦ spiral mistā€¦well? I donā€™t know of any wells nearby, and brick is rareā€¦ā€

[Pause!!!]

[L] One last chance, darlingā€¦ Donā€™t make me hurt you again, you know I hate it. It makes me weep to see you crumpled on the ground, tears in those beautiful eyes while you pleadā€¦ ā€œOh, Lucien, please donā€™t-!ā€

[Got him]

[Pause!!!]

[S] ā€œLucienā€¦?ā€

[R] ā€œ... I have heard of a Lucien in the nearby city, but only in passing. I will send our Crows out to listen, and I will investigate myself. Please, give me a week and-ā€.

[SFX: Electricity violently crackling]

[A surge of agonizing electricity whips through your veins. Your body convulses, and all you can do is scream and writhe]

[S] ā€œROSE! Hold on!ā€

[The man, your enemy, embraces you and the electricity surges through him as well as he groans and howls in pain]

[L] Rrrgh, that meddlingā€¦! FINE! Fineā€¦ Rest for now. It doesnā€™t matter. Iā€™ll come to collect you shortly, alrightā€¦? Try and get something for those burns, hm? I love the marks Iā€™ve left on you, but burns will make it harder for you to fulfill your purpose.

[...]

[S, coughing] ā€œR-Rose, itā€™sā€¦ Rin, the healer! Please!ā€

[R] ā€œY-Yes, Uncle!ā€

[SFX: Rin hurrying off]

[The strange man lays atop you now, panting in pain]

[...]

[S] ā€œDonā€™t be sorryā€¦ This isnā€™t your fault. I know you, Rose, I know you well enough to know that youā€™d never harm a living creature unless necessary. I will NOT give up on you, no matter what. Do you hear me?ā€

[You nod. Itā€™s about all you can do]

[S] ā€œEhehā€¦ Do youā€¦ remember when we made up our silly little language that only we know? We talked in it for months until Rin called us both posteriors and stormed out because he thought we were talking about him, hehe. W-We wereā€¦ we were technically talking about himā€¦ b-but more so what to get him for the holidaysā€¦ You were so sad that he was sad so you gave him his gift early and then rushed out to get anotherā€¦ā€

[His quiet chuckle turns into a bit of a pained whine]

[S] ā€œ...If you can remember our little languageā€¦ maybeā€¦ maybe you can speak freely without whatever is hurting youā€¦ā€

[Pause]

[S] ā€œNo no, youā€™re rightā€¦ Just rest, for now. Feel my forehead on yours and restā€¦ I will be here when you wake, no matter what happens. I promise.ā€

[The shock is wearing off and you can hear the Healer rushing in but all you can do now is pass out and pray for the pain to end soon]

[To be continued]

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