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Summary: A body was found inside the washroom of a bar and you were attacked by the murderer. You later spoke with Andrew and rest of your team and andrew recognises the girl. This is now a murder case and you all are assigned to solve this mystery.
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Andrew : No no no fuck no...
Chloe? Chloe can you hear me? Hey...shit...
Noah! Noah come here! QUICK!
Noah : What is i....Chloe? What the fuck..Okay okay...calm down...Did you check her pulse? anything?
Andrew : She's gone Noah...Chloe is dead.
I don't know...Did you hear something? anything? God no!!...she was good friend...fuck..Look at her body! They did just kill her but... (angry) (sighs)
Whoever did this to her will have to pay for it.
Noah : Why would someone wanna kill a simple bartender like her? She didn't even have a dirty business..
Andrew : Maybe it's not just someone. maybe she knew that person. there could be a whole story behind this.
Did you find something?
A note? Show me..
"Catch me losers"
Seems confident.
Noah : Overconfident. And that is exactly what's gonna get the killer caught.
(Noah walks over to the listener)
(some unclear background talking going on and camera flashes)
Hey listen. Do you remember anything about that person? Maybe identify if he was a man or a woman?
No? It's okay you don't have to pressure yourself. You are a detective. You know that every little detail counts. So, whenever you remember anything no matter how small it is, just let me know okay? Or we wait till the autopsy. That can say a lot of the killer.
You know we can find that out pretty easily.
You're right we could call in a profiler too I mean it's not necessarily true all the time but atleast we will have something to look at. And if we can narrow it down to someone Chloe knew we'll find our suspect. Don't worry we got this. We've done this for years and even though i wasn't as close to Chloe as Andrew was, she was still a friend and she was nice girl. She deserves justice and she will get it. Okay? Okay.
No you catch a breath. Me, Andrew and the others will take care of this.
Yes...I know it's your job but you were attacked by this murderer. Do you know what that means? You could have ended up there and I'm not willing to take that risk.
How can andrew be so sure that the killer didn't wanna hurt you? They did hurt you.
Look I get it you're...
I'm glad to know that you trust me and andrew with your life...but how can we protect you from the killer if we don't even know who it is...
I just want you to be safe.
You promise?
Okay fine..you can join us.
(listener and noah going back to the crime scene)
(light people talking and camera flashes sounds)
Andrew : We are sending the body for an autopsy. It's in horrendous condition. But before that we need to inform Mr and Mrs Carman about this. Noah, call them and let them come down to the station.
Just in case it's not someone who knew her or didn't have any personal grudge against her, it's a psychopath who rapes and kills people and leaves their body in a degrading manner. And we need to catch that bustard soon because we don't know if this was their first kill and if it was, who's gonna be the next victim.
You think it was a man? I thought you didn't see the face...
You could tell by the force of attack and the built?
Could you maybe... remember how tall he was...
Around 6..?I mean...it is something but most men are around 6.
Yeah you're right we should wait for the results to come back. I'm sure we'll find something in that report.
I have informed her family. They will go straight down to identify her.
[PAUSE]
[NEXT SCENE]
Yeah goodnight buddy.
Hey...would you mind staying with me for tonight..?
After what happened i don't wanna leave you alone
Yeah ofcourse you can..
It's just my heart.. it's not letting me leave you alone for the night atleast..
Please?
Thank you.
Come on get inside the car.
(both car door opens and shuts)
(car starts)
(scene fades away)
[NEXT SCENE]
Are you cozy? Do you need another blanket?
Oh yeah? I'm warm enough? (giggles) okay. (kisses)
Hey. You don't have to be scared alright?
I'll protect you. Nothing is gonna happen to you.
I know you're more worried about catching the killer but i'm care about you. Someone has to do the job for you right?
Chloe? Yeah she was good friend yeah...she was nice (giggles) I think I'm going to miss her.
Yeah maybe you're right. I maybe I didn't don't know her enough. Maybe she was involved in something crazy but that doesn't change how i feel about this. A murder is a murder and whoever did this is going to pay for every fucking thing he did to her. And that person was gonna hurt you too. God I...i can't even imagine what I'd do if something happened to you. I don't even wanna think about it. (sighs)
Are you sure you're fine? We're gonna catch him. Got that? Good. (forehead kiss)
Okay now close your eyes and go to sleep.
No. No more talking. Shh.
Close your eyes...good girl
I'm right here okay..go to sleep now.. (whispers)
[scene fades away]
[A WEEK LATER]
Noah : Hey look! we got the results back and..you were right. The autopsy says that it's likely a male in his 20s judging by the force used on Chloe.
Surprisingly the girl wasn't raped. BUT, she was sexually assaulted, in a brutal way.
Here's all the things you need to know about her assault in details.
Andrew : Someone who's capable of doing such heinous things...why would he just assault her this bad but not even care to touch her.
Noah : She's right. There could be two possible reasons. No1. He wanted sexual gratification but was too smart to leave his DNA behind. or No2. This was something personal. Maybe he didn't even wanna rape or assault her at all. He just did it because he wanted to degrade her body after killing her or to trick the police so we could never figure out the motive and if the motive isn't clear enough it's difficult to narrow down a suspect list.
Andrew : Well whatever it is, all we have about the killer is, he's a man, he's around 6 and he's in his 20s. That would be like a million men. What are we supposed to do with this much information?
We don't even have a footage of this man entering the washroom.
It's already been a week and we having NOTHING (hits his hand on the wall due to frustration)
No I'm fine.
Noah : Exactly! How could we miss this! You are absolutely right. We have the note. If we call the people that were present in the bar that night we can atleast find something. We can find out if anyone from that place wrote the note by testing out their handwriting.
Andrew : Sweetie you're really into this huh?
Noah : Sweetie?? Wait what the hell is going on?
Andrew : We uh....
Noah : No you're not!!
Andrew : Yes... maybe we...we are together
Noah : I mean i saw it coming i just did not expect it to be this fast
Andrew : (giggles) Me neither.
Noah : Congratulations to you both (giggles)
Andrew : Thank you brother (giggles)
(scene fades away)
[NEXT SCENE]
(door opens and shuts)
Uh no...you have your dinner I'll just go to bed
No I'm not the mood. Really.
No it's just that I'm so fucking frustrated with this case because we have nothing to work with.
I get that we have the note but let's say he wasn't in the bar that night. Then what? We're back to square one.
You said the window was already broken when you found that body with the killer still inside the washroom which means he must have either come in through the window to avoid the cctv or he wasn't in the bar at all. he just happened to know this place and that she worked here and grabbed the opportunity. Maybe he was hiding in there knowing she'll come in at some point and...
I know I'm overthinking at this point but I just...
No you're right this is home. This is not where i should discuss work.
Do you wanna a movie?
Yeah? Okay you can pick (giggles)
Actually do we have something to drink or eat? If we're doing a movie date it has to be a proper one.
No no you don't have to get up and make anything. I'll go pick something up for us. okay?
Okay you take rest (a cute forehead kiss)
I won't take long babe...
(door opens and shuts, andrew leaves)
[NEXT SCENE]
(door opens and shuts, andrew comes back)
I knowww I'm sorry I suddenly found an old friend of mine and we started talking and i lost track of time
Is my baby hungry? I'm so sorry..
Come on let's eat.. I'm starving
The tv? Okay what are we watching?
"Another girl was found murdered after being sexually assaulted near the gas station. Her body was positioned in a degrading manner similar to the girl murdered in the bar" (the dialogue in tv sfx)
What the fuck...!
Hey it's okay.. I'm right here don't be scared..
You're okay..
No hey listen...he won't dare to hurt you. He knows the risk. He could have that night, if he wanted to. But he didn't. He just made sure to hurt you enough so he could escape.
He's not going to hurt you. Don't worry baby.. you are safe.
(scene fades away)
[NEXT SCENE]
[A FEW DAYS LATER]
(listener footsteps)
(silence for a few seconds)
Hey what are you doing?
You have stuff to put in the basement?
I don't even remember where the key is... I'll give it to you once i find it okay?
Now let's go and have dinner alright?
(footsteps fade away)
(part 2 ends here)
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