Summary: You and Andrew are detectives well more like work partners and plan to celebrate with the entire team after solving a case. The evening goes well for you two until things take a wild turn for all the bad reasons.

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NOTE: (these brackets) will be used for actions and SFX. [these brackets] are used for dialogues for minot characters. You can make slight changes here and there just suit yourself.

CHARACTERS: 1. Andrew Coleman (the detective/protagonist) 2. The listener (detective/andrew's work partner/his love interest) 3. Noah Davis(detective/andrew's bestfriend) 4. Chloe Carman(the bartender)

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(music playing in a club/bar)

Andrew : Cheers everyone! (glasses sound)

This was a fucking task but we did it.

The clues were right in front of us. This is what happens every fucking time right? (laughs)

What? You want another? Alright I got it brother.

Hey Chloe can i get two 1805?

(chloe puts the glasses with scotch on the counter)

Thank you so much.

(He spots the listener sitting a little away)

Heyyy you miss lonely. What are you doing here all by yourself?

Aren't you happy? We finally solved the case!

Your face tells me otherwise.

You worked so hard for this i thought you would be the happiest one.

...I guess you're right. The victim still won't come back ...but..we can atleast celebrate the justice she got. She deserves that much right?

There's the smile i love!

Would you like to dance with me?

No...?! Pleaseeeee?

Chloe : I can dance with you Mr Coleman. I mean who wouldn't wanna dance with you]

(andrew laughs)

No I'm just messing with her i don't dance anyway.

Hey come on let's go and join the others. They are waiting for us.

(joins the others)

Hey Noah, there you go.

[waiter: ma'am this letter is for you]

[waiter: I don't know ma'am someone just came up to me and said someone told her to give this note to you]

[waiter: Sure ma'am. Thank you so much]

(she opens the letter)

What does it say?

Hey where are you going!

(listener rushes outside, music volume decreases)

What's wrong?

What..! You wanna go home? Why?..Um..

Alright I'm gonna drop you home.

Yes I am going to. I'm not gonna leave you alone at 2 in the morning.

I know you are a capable detective and you can take care of yourself but is it really too much to ask for? I just wanna drop you home by myself.

Good.

(both the car door opens and shuts)

(car engine starts, listener tries to find someone through the window)

Who are you looking for? (low voice)

Hey I'm talking to you. (louder voice)

Who are you looking for?

No one? Okay what is wrong? Tell me.

You can't escape this by saying "nothing" okay?

Since you got that letter....okay show me the letter.

Come on show me! Give it to me..

Please.. (calm voice)

(she hands over the letter and andrew reads it)

"You look really beautiful tonight"

Do you have any idea who this person could be?

No? So this is what you're worried about?

Some creepy guy following you..

Why do you think he was outside? He could be inside?

You got nervous?

I understand.

Hey come here (hugs her for a while)

Do you trust me?...Yeah? Good.

I'm right here and I'm gonna protect you from all the bad things, i promise. Okay?

Why? (giggles) because i...i love you..

(silence)

Fuck..did i mess up? Shit I'm sorry I shouldn't have said that. I'm a fucking... (she shuts his stupid mouth by kissing him)

Wait...what..you..you love me too..? (giggles) ofcourse you do

(kissing sounds)

What..why are you smiling? (giggles)

Hmm? Why are you.... (kisses)

(kisses getting more intense)

Let me just....get the keys off of...mhmm... (breathlessly)

(keys falling noises lmao)

Come here sit on my lap..

(she sits on his lap)

You look very beautiful tonight, creepy man didn't lie there.

Nooo I'm not taking it lightly I'm just trying cheer you up. Look I'm right here and i guarantee you no one will dare to touch you or come near you okay? I will make sure of that. You told me you trust me didn't you? Mhm good. (forehead kiss)

Did Loui talk to you about any new case? No? Nah me neither. I think we're better off with one right now. I mean...we all have been running around this case trying to solve it for 2 whole years. Can you believe it? I definitely need a break. We all do.

Well do you think I could maybe...take you out on a date sometime? I mean it's fine you don't want to. I can still bring you coffee and sandwiches at the cafeteria in our office but i'd really like that you know...I'd really like to see you have something else than just coffee and sandwiches all days of the week. (giggles)

Hey what are you thinking?

About the note?

Don't stress it. Maybe you're just overthinking. Maybe someone found really beautiful but didn't have the courage to just come up to you and say that to your face and so they wrote a note. It could be that simple. I mean it's a harmless it just says you look beautiful. Probably everyone in that party was thinking the same. But still if you're still.. (phone rings)

Who is it?

Noah? Okay.

(phone call sfx with light music because noah is inside the party)

Noah: Hey where are you guys? I've been looking for you two for so long now. I don't hear music...Are you even in the party?

No? Then where are you?

Are you coming inside or not. What are you doing outside anyway?

Going home? What no! Why?

Stop it! Come on it's so much fun. Get inside. Just for a little while then we can all live together.

Hey please? You're not gonna say no to me are you?

Please?

See I knew it! (giggles) Now be quick and come on in.

(call declines)

He wants us to go back inside, doesn't he? Hey if you don't wanna go that's fine too. You know Noah he's just sucker for these things and he never wants to do it alone (scoffs) He needs his whole group. But then again he's Noah. He's going to be infuriated now but he'll be forgetting about this the next morning. So you don't have to be under pressure. You know him since years you know how he is..

You wanna go inside? Are you sure? Okay ma'am whatever you say.

(both car door opens and shuts)

(footsteps)

(muffled music approaching)

(clear music)

Noah : Heyyy! Here!

I cannot believe you guys were missing out on such a good party.

Is everything okay with you?

Did i pressure you?

For sure?...Okay.. I'll take your word for it.

Andrew : I'll go get us some drinks.

You're coming with me? okay.

Hey Noah! What do you want?

Noah : The regular.

Andrew : Got it. Come on let's go.

Hey Chloe! One regular for Noah.

Thank you! Hey wait here I'll go and give this to him real quick okay? I'll be back in a minute.

Chloe : So? Is Andrew your boyfriend?

No? Weird. Sure looks like it. I've been seeing you guys since years and i know how Andrew is with you and I've seen how he went soft with you throughout these years. It wasn't always like this but it did eventually become something for him, something important, something to care for. I've never seen him with another girl since a long time, since the time i've seen him care for you. The way he cares about you, watches you all the time, tries to be protective over you. Feels good doesn't it?

(scoffs) I'm sure it does.

Let me tell you a secret. I had the biggest crush on him.

Now? I won't lie i still do but he's in love with you so it doesn't matter...

(laughs) I'm sorry I'm just saying anything at this point please don't take anything seriously.

Andrew : Ugh sorry the boys started talking about something and i just...anyway now we can have a drink in peace.

Chloe, give me the finest drink for the finest lady.

Yes you are (giggles)

Chloe : And what would you wanna take for the finest man?

Andrew : You tell me. What do you have to offer to him.

Chloe : Well i do have a lot of things to offer if you'd wanna take it...

Andrew : What..oh yeah right. The drink, Chloe.

Chloe : Looks like someone got jealous pretty quickly..(mocks listener)

Andrew : Are you jealous sweetie? You know i love you.

Chloe : I thought you told me you were not together?

Andrew : Oh no we're not. yet. But wait...why did you two have a conversation about this?

Chloe : Girls talk, Andrew.

Andrew : Right...So did i interrupt your girl talk?

I'm glad i didn't. (giggles)

Thanks for the drinks Chloe.

Chloe : My pleasure, Andrew.

Andrew : Hey.. you're good? Are you still thinking about that...no?

Then what is it? You fine... nothing it is.

Chloe : Hey Andrew I'll see you in a minute.

Andrew : Where are you going?

Chloe : My duty is over so im gonna go and get ready for the real party (giggles) Don't worry Rony will be here if you need anything. Catch you both later. You guys are staying right?

Andrew : Yeah we're are. Take your time.

Ooohh slow down you're drinking a lot. Yeah maybe you could have a gap between each shot? Are you okay? I'll protect you.

(phone rings)

Hold on I gotta take this. It's Loui.

Hello!! Hello!? Loui! Can you hear me? Oh god...

Hey wait here... I'll have to go outside and take this call alright. I'll be back in no time. Okay.

Wait a second Loui I'm going outside...

(andrew's lines fade away as he goes outside)

Noah : Hey there. You're alone? Where's Andrew?

(scoffs) Loui just doesn't wanna let us celebrate at all.

Are you okay? You seem a little out. Why did you wanna go home? Are you feeling fine? I mean you did tell me you're fine but i know you and you lie because you don't wanna hurt people.

Okayy okayy i get it ma'am. (giggles)

I think this is the first time i saw you smile in a 50 years. No really you're always so serious. I like that smile. (giggles) it's cute.

Do you wanna dance? No? Expected.

Alright I'll be back in sometime okay? Liam has my phone and he's reckless. It has important things on it. I'll be fired if i lose it. You take care and call me if you need anything? Got it? Good.

(scene fades away)

(listener gets back inside so, music playing)

(listener goes to the washroom, footsteps maybe)

(washroom door opens and shuts)

(muffled music inside the washroom)

(light banging noises coming from behind one of the doors)

(light banging noises once again)

(slow footsteps)

(scene fades out)

(few minutes later)

(listener comes running out of the washroom and looks for andrew)

(music comes back to normal)

(her phone rings)

Andrew :Where are you? I'm waiting infront of the counter. (phone call sfx)

Hey hey slow down! You're where? Outside the washroom? Okay I'll be there. (phone call sfx)

(call declines)

What happe...oh my god you're bleeding!

Are you okay? How did this..

What did you say? There's a.. what?

There's a dead girl in the washroom?

How do you know she's dead?

She looked like she's dead? What are you...

Okay calm down we are gonna figure this out okay..

Did someone attack you?

Yeah? Do you remember their face?

A hoodie and a mask..

I'm sure whoever that person was they didn't mean to hurt you but they did it to escape.

Noah! (shouts)

Can you come here for a minute.

Noah : Yeah what's up?

Wait..! Hey are you okay? What happened?

Andrew : She thinks she saw a dead girl in the washroom and i don't have any more time to explain this to you right now.

Just take everyone else along with you and go and check if the body is still there and don't forget to tape the crime scene. Right now! (commanding voice)

Noah : I got it. Just don't make a scene right now if she's really dead, the killer maybe inside pretending to be a normal person.

Did you see who the girl was?

Turned on their stomach without clothes?..

Hey don't sweat it. It's fine. we'll figure it out.

Andrew : Yeah okay.

Hey look at me. Remember what you said? You're a brave detective. You're gonna be just fine okay? You trust me right? Okay (kisses her forehead)

Let's go to the scene.

(both walk towards the washroom)

(washroom so muffled music)

Did you find the...

Oh shit!

(part 1 ends here)

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