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Context: You had a massive falling out with your family and you are currently living alone thanks to a friend who offered a spare room in a condo until you can find yourself something more stable. By yourself in this condo (though not the greatest of condo's but better than nothing), you are greeted by a woman, wearing a warriors outfit. This woman also claiming to be your Guardian Angel discussing future plans.
Tags: [F4M] [Part 1 of 3] [Wholesome] [Comfort] [Hugging]
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Note: I realized that I put F4M, but for all intensive purposes if you want to gender swap or put it in a neutral formant (ex. M4F, F4A, M4A, etc.) that is perfectly fine. I just wanted to try doing a specific format to test my abilities, so don't feel like it has to be concrete on your end. This is just for my own personal improvement. That is all.
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[Scene opens in a old rundown condo and you just sat down to let off some steam when you suddenly heard a knocking on the door]
[SFX: Repeating knocking followed by talking on the other side]
"Hello, Hello. Are you in there? I really need to talk to you, could you let me in"
[You see through the peep hole in the door and see a young looking woman through it, you open the door slightly]
"Oh, there you are. I was hoping I would find you here."
[You respond with a gesture to the sum of "what do you want?"]
"Well aren't we rude today? I came to see you silly."
[Not recognizing her you continue to press and ask her who she is?]
"Oh, sorry for the lack of Introductions. My name is Dara and I...well can I explain inside?"
[Still needing info, you press harder and ask her why]
"For starters, you wouldn't believe me if I told you."
[You motion as if to say "try me"]
"Alright, if you insist. I'm an angel."
[You immediately shut the door on her face]
"Hey! Wait! At least give me a chance to explain, All I need is 10, no 5 minutes at max! Please, I can't leave you like this! With so much hate and anguish! You need me as much as I need you!"
[You hear the gentle sounds of sobbing on the other side of the door as you continue to listen]
"Please, just give me a chance."
[You open the door to see her eyes red from crying. You wonder how can she get her eyes that bloodshot so quickly?]
[After a quick pause and looking at her, you decide to let her in]
"Oh, Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I promise to not take too much-"
[she notices you looking at your watch as if to say "Your time starts now" as you shut the door behind you]
"Oh, uh, already on the clock I see. Well I'll try to keep it brief"
[She sits down on the couch in the middle of the room]
"So as mentioned earlier, I'm an angel. But more specifically, I'm your angel."
[You look at her then back at the watch not acknowledging her by what she just said]
"Umm... yeah, so I'm your Angel, Your guardian angel?"
[Still not buying it she continues]
"Ok, look I know this might be a bit of a stretch. So here me out. To prove it, ask me any question you want. I'll answer truthfully."
[You mention how angels don't normally look like her]
"What you were expecting; Halo's, Harps, Wings, and white robes? *Chuckles* you humans have a funny concept of us you know that?"
[You make reference to the angels that are flaming topaz rings with eyeballs]
"Oh, those angels. Well...I'm not saying they don't exist, Just that, they are too powerful to be here."
[raised eyebrow]
"Okay, how about a military analogy for you; A general would not be working in the mail room of a boot camp would they?"
[you gesture as to agree with her]
"And besides, if your going to be Inconspicuous, would you really send down arguably one of the strongest and most sore thumbs angles to help out humans?"
[you gesture as to agree with her]
"Exactly, you would send one of the more Lower angels."
[you look at your watch and see that she has 2 minutes]
"Okay, got to make this quick. So I know that you had a massive falling out with your family and that's why I'm here to help. To patch things up. Maybe even help out your current situation."
[you look at her as if to say what situation]
"Come on man! Your by yourself in a run down condo, with no family, no friends and the only one who is willing to help you is me. So what have you got to lose?"
[You look at your watch and walk to the door and open up]
"Okay, okay. A deal a deal. But just know this, even if everyone else has given up on you; I haven't. Not now, not ever."
[She walks to the door only to be stopped by you again]
"Hey, what are you-"
[you hug her and gently start to sob in her shoulders]
"Oh um. okay then."
[She rubs your back and gently shushes you]
"It's ok, It's okay. I'm here now"
[She shuts the door behind her and comforts you in the hall of your condo]
"I know, I know. It's a rough time to be in this predicament right now. But trust me, you are going to be ok."
[Still rubbing your back she tries humming in your ears for a moment]
"There now, all better?"
[You nod your head]
"Good. Now, just to find a way to fix up the relationship with your family. I mean, that cute girl at the end of the hallway could-"
[You hold her again asking for her help]
"Wait what? You still want me to help?"
[You nod in her shoulder and pull her aside giving her an ultimatum]
"So let me get this right, You won't go back to your family, especially your father and try to make amends unless I agree to help you out. Am I understanding that correctly?"
[You nod]
"Alright then"
[pause as if to doubt what she said]
"I said alright then, You won't make amends with the people who care about you without some "Heavenly intervention" then so be it."
[You wonder if there are any rules that she's breaking because of this]
"I mean, yeah there are some rules...*Mumbles* just being here is going to cost me an earful form the higher ups, but I guess it would all be worth it in the end. So how about you rest up and well discuss this tomorrow, Ok?"
[You nod and sit on the couch as she sits next to you]
"good."
[She hums you to sleep as it appears to drift into darkness...until]
"Hello, Michael"
"Hello Dara."
"I guess I'm getting that earful now huh?"
"Not quite, there's something I must say."
[Michael walks closer to you as you are still asleep listening to the mumbles of their conversation]
"Something much more grave is at steak Dara."
"You don't mean-"
"Can't say for certain but for everyone's sake, let's hope I'm wrong."
[To be continued . . .]
Side note: there may be some tags I might of forgotten, in the chance that I have, I'll be sure to edit them.
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