Coming soon - Get a detailed view of why an account is flagged as spam!
view details

This post has been de-listed

It is no longer included in search results and normal feeds (front page, hot posts, subreddit posts, etc). It remains visible only via the author's post history.

9
Your Guardian Angel Visits you do discuss something important [F4M] [Part 1 of 3] [Wholesome] [Comfort] [Hugging]
Author Summary
Still_Needleworker11 is a female looking for a male in Hugging
Post Body

Context: You had a massive falling out with your family and you are currently living alone thanks to a friend who offered a spare room in a condo until you can find yourself something more stable. By yourself in this condo (though not the greatest of condo's but better than nothing), you are greeted by a woman, wearing a warriors outfit. This woman also claiming to be your Guardian Angel discussing future plans.

Tags: [F4M] [Part 1 of 3] [Wholesome] [Comfort] [Hugging]

Usage: You may tweak or record this script.

Monetization: All forms of monetization are OK with me! YouTube, Patreon, etc. I would appreciate being able to listen to the recording, if possible. Let me know if you have any questions. Thank you!

Note: I realized that I put F4M, but for all intensive purposes if you want to gender swap or put it in a neutral formant (ex. M4F, F4A, M4A, etc.) that is perfectly fine. I just wanted to try doing a specific format to test my abilities, so don't feel like it has to be concrete on your end. This is just for my own personal improvement. That is all.

***

[Scene opens in a old rundown condo and you just sat down to let off some steam when you suddenly heard a knocking on the door]

[SFX: Repeating knocking followed by talking on the other side]

"Hello, Hello. Are you in there? I really need to talk to you, could you let me in"

[You see through the peep hole in the door and see a young looking woman through it, you open the door slightly]

"Oh, there you are. I was hoping I would find you here."

[You respond with a gesture to the sum of "what do you want?"]

"Well aren't we rude today? I came to see you silly."

[Not recognizing her you continue to press and ask her who she is?]

"Oh, sorry for the lack of Introductions. My name is Dara and I...well can I explain inside?"

[Still needing info, you press harder and ask her why]

"For starters, you wouldn't believe me if I told you."

[You motion as if to say "try me"]

"Alright, if you insist. I'm an angel."

[You immediately shut the door on her face]

"Hey! Wait! At least give me a chance to explain, All I need is 10, no 5 minutes at max! Please, I can't leave you like this! With so much hate and anguish! You need me as much as I need you!"

[You hear the gentle sounds of sobbing on the other side of the door as you continue to listen]

"Please, just give me a chance."

[You open the door to see her eyes red from crying. You wonder how can she get her eyes that bloodshot so quickly?]

[After a quick pause and looking at her, you decide to let her in]

"Oh, Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I promise to not take too much-"

[she notices you looking at your watch as if to say "Your time starts now" as you shut the door behind you]

"Oh, uh, already on the clock I see. Well I'll try to keep it brief"

[She sits down on the couch in the middle of the room]

"So as mentioned earlier, I'm an angel. But more specifically, I'm your angel."

[You look at her then back at the watch not acknowledging her by what she just said]

"Umm... yeah, so I'm your Angel, Your guardian angel?"

[Still not buying it she continues]

"Ok, look I know this might be a bit of a stretch. So here me out. To prove it, ask me any question you want. I'll answer truthfully."

[You mention how angels don't normally look like her]

"What you were expecting; Halo's, Harps, Wings, and white robes? *Chuckles* you humans have a funny concept of us you know that?"

[You make reference to the angels that are flaming topaz rings with eyeballs]

"Oh, those angels. Well...I'm not saying they don't exist, Just that, they are too powerful to be here."

[raised eyebrow]

"Okay, how about a military analogy for you; A general would not be working in the mail room of a boot camp would they?"

[you gesture as to agree with her]

"And besides, if your going to be Inconspicuous, would you really send down arguably one of the strongest and most sore thumbs angles to help out humans?"

[you gesture as to agree with her]

"Exactly, you would send one of the more Lower angels."

[you look at your watch and see that she has 2 minutes]

"Okay, got to make this quick. So I know that you had a massive falling out with your family and that's why I'm here to help. To patch things up. Maybe even help out your current situation."

[you look at her as if to say what situation]

"Come on man! Your by yourself in a run down condo, with no family, no friends and the only one who is willing to help you is me. So what have you got to lose?"

[You look at your watch and walk to the door and open up]

"Okay, okay. A deal a deal. But just know this, even if everyone else has given up on you; I haven't. Not now, not ever."

[She walks to the door only to be stopped by you again]

"Hey, what are you-"

[you hug her and gently start to sob in her shoulders]

"Oh um. okay then."

[She rubs your back and gently shushes you]

"It's ok, It's okay. I'm here now"

[She shuts the door behind her and comforts you in the hall of your condo]

"I know, I know. It's a rough time to be in this predicament right now. But trust me, you are going to be ok."

[Still rubbing your back she tries humming in your ears for a moment]

"There now, all better?"

[You nod your head]

"Good. Now, just to find a way to fix up the relationship with your family. I mean, that cute girl at the end of the hallway could-"

[You hold her again asking for her help]

"Wait what? You still want me to help?"

[You nod in her shoulder and pull her aside giving her an ultimatum]

"So let me get this right, You won't go back to your family, especially your father and try to make amends unless I agree to help you out. Am I understanding that correctly?"

[You nod]

"Alright then"

[pause as if to doubt what she said]

"I said alright then, You won't make amends with the people who care about you without some "Heavenly intervention" then so be it."

[You wonder if there are any rules that she's breaking because of this]

"I mean, yeah there are some rules...*Mumbles* just being here is going to cost me an earful form the higher ups, but I guess it would all be worth it in the end. So how about you rest up and well discuss this tomorrow, Ok?"

[You nod and sit on the couch as she sits next to you]

"good."

[She hums you to sleep as it appears to drift into darkness...until]

"Hello, Michael"

"Hello Dara."

"I guess I'm getting that earful now huh?"

"Not quite, there's something I must say."

[Michael walks closer to you as you are still asleep listening to the mumbles of their conversation]

"Something much more grave is at steak Dara."

"You don't mean-"

"Can't say for certain but for everyone's sake, let's hope I'm wrong."

[To be continued . . .]

Side note: there may be some tags I might of forgotten, in the chance that I have, I'll be sure to edit them.

Author
Account Strength
100%
Account Age
5 years
Verified Email
Yes
Verified Flair
No
Total Karma
2,946
Link Karma
676
Comment Karma
2,255
Profile updated: 1 week ago
Posts updated: 10 months ago
Writer

Subreddit

Post Details

Location
They Are
a female
Looking For
a male
We try to extract some basic information from the post title. This is not always successful or accurate, please use your best judgement and compare these values to the post title and body for confirmation.
Posted
2 years ago