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Context: He said he wanted to marry you, once his career took off. He said he'd spend more time with you, once his career was stable. He said he'd take care of you, once he advanced. He said he'd always be in your corner, but all he's been focused on for over a year is his career. He just needs you to smile at the company party tonight, and pretend to be happy. Shouldn't be a problem. After all, you've been pretending for a long time now.
Setting: A fancy hotel ballroom/Home/The train station
Tags:[MMM4A][Established Relationship][Lovers to Exes][Overworked Boyfriend Speaker][Boss Speaker][Mysterious Stranger Speaker][Unappreciated Listener][Break-Up][Angst][Leaving][Toxic][Apology][Desperate][Don't Leave][Betrayal?][CW: Angst/Break-Up/Neglect]
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Unmarked text is the dumbass BF / Italicized text is the dumbass BF but from the paaaassttt
[B] = Your boyfriend's boss, kind of an idiot
[T] = Tom, mysterious train boss, keeper of secrets
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[Scene opens in a fancy hotel ballroom]
[SFX: A slight echo to denote that this is the Listener remembering former conversations with the Speaker]
Yeah, babe, sorry, I need to get this done. Aw hon, I know Iâve been away or busy for months now, and Iâm sorry. I just want to make sure I can take care of you for the rest of our lives, OK? How am I going to buy you a diamond bigger than the moon if I donât work hard?â
[Pause]
Of course, I want to marry you! Are you serious? Youâre the most beautiful person on the planet! Iâd be nothing without you and all you do for me! I promise, when I make executive, Iâll spend all the time in the world with you, OK? You trust me, right Munchkin?
[Pause]
Babe, câmon. I know I promised weâd do something tonight but work kind of has to come first right now, OK? You want me to be able to spoil you, right? Ugh, I know⌠I know I promised months ago, but Iâm trying to fast-track this as best I can! Please stay patient with me, OK? I love you
[Pause]
Oh, honey⌠Câmon, I do appreciate all you do for me! I love the little lunches you make for me, and the cute little notes you slip inside! Itâs adorable, mwah. Youâre adorable, and I love you, and thatâs why I have to focus on work, OK?
[...]
[SFX: A slow fade-in of party ambiance]
Honey, câmon, going out to drinks with the boys is a company thing, I promise. No, seriously. Oh my fucking god, babe, please! I know, I know⌠I promise Iâll make it up to you at the next company party, OK?
[Pause]
Huh? Oh, no, I donât need my lunchbox today. The guys are trying to get me to eat healthier⌠which I thought I mentioned but you havenât really been listening as much, lately. Huh? Itâs not supposed to mean anything, donât worry about it
[SFX: The party ambiance growing stronger]
Babe, can you please not pull this clingy shit? Things will calm down after the company party tonight and then we can sit down and sort this shit out. Please, just dress up nice and try not to look like youâre eating a lemon sour candy, alright?
[SFX: The party ambiance at full blast]
[You look toward the stage in the fancy hotel ballroom and see your boyfriendâs boss with an arm around your boyfriend]
[B] âAnd letâs hear it for our star executive here!â
[SFX: Applause]
âEheh, câmon Danny! Youâre going to embarrass me in front of everyone!â
[B, with a laugh] âNot quite yet! Company tradition states that you have to get a kiss on the cheek from the prettiest lass in the room!â
[For a moment, your heart lifts. Then sinks immediately as his boss gestures over a woman, who gives him a big smooch on the cheek]
âPfftt, Sandra, câmon!â
[B] âAww, your ball and chain can take a little ribbing! Look at them, merry as can be!â
[SFX: Stomping and a door slamming]
[B] âOrrr⌠theyâre livid and storming out⌠Hmm. Did we push it too far?â
âIâll call them, Iâm so sorry, sir!â
[He hurries off to somewhere private and hurriedly tries to call you]
[SFX: Your phone vibrating and a car driving off]
[Scene opens in your apartment]
[SFX: Your phone vibrating like mad]
[...]
[Maybe]
[You answer the call]
âBabe! What the honest to God Hell was that?!â
[Pause!]
âNo no no, you donât get to flip this around on me, you know the company culture is a bunch of good olâ boys, and youâve just made me look like I canât handle my business on my own time!â
[Pause!!]
âWhat?! No, of course, Iâm not doing anything with Sandra! Baby, I love you, I just really need to focus on my career!â
[Pause???]
âLook, is my career more important than you? Thatâs not fair, and you know that! I love you, and if you love me, youâll stomach this for a little longer so I can give you the fucking life you deserve. Now, will you please stop making this even more painful, come back and pretend to be happy for five fucking minutes?!â
[...]
[Thatâs enough]
[SFX: Footsteps and the Listener packing]
âThatâs my good baby! See? Arenât things easier when we compromise?â
[...]
âBaby?â
[SFX: A door slamming]
â...b-baby?â
[Scene transitions to a train station]
[SFX: Your phone vibrating]
[Pause?]
âBaby! Iâve been calling for hours, where the Hell are you?!â
[Pause]
âNo no no, baby, Iâm so sorry. The more I thought about it, the more I realized that I was being super shitty to you. The pressure is just a lot, but thatâs no excuse for pretending Iâm one of these hot-shot executives with only beer, women, and golf on their mindsâŚâ
[...]
âBabyâŚ? Youâre not talking.â
[Pause]
âOK, good⌠I thought Iâd lost you.â
[Pause]
â...what does that mean? What does âyou already haveâ mean?â
[Pause]
â...Baby, why do I hear trains. Are you at the train station?â
[...]
âAre you going to your parentsâŚ? O-OK, thatâs fine. I understand if you need some space. But the trip is going to take way longer on the train. Why not just take the car?â
[Pause]
â...Munchkin, youâre scaring me. Please talk to me, I get scared when you get all quiet like thatâŚâ
[Pause]
[SFX: The train pulling in]
âH-HoneyâŚ? P-Please talk to me! Iâm really scared, here!â
[Pause!]
âW-What?! No, I donât⌠I donât want this job more than I want you. Youâre the reason I wanted it in the first place! I wanted to take care of YOU!â
[Pause]
â... I was taking care of me, not you? Munchkin, câmon, no⌠Please, can we talk about this? Weâve got a counseling session with Dr. Greta in a week! I wonât cancel it this time, I promise! Iâll take the entire week off! The month!â
[SFX: Train doors hissing open]
âN-NoâŚâ
[Pause]
âNo no no! Jesus Christ, you canât just LEAVE! Please, we can talk about this! I promise you, I will prove that I am on your side! That I want to make this work with you! Munchkin, Iâm sorry-!â
[SFX: The call ending]
[You turn your phone off entirely and board the train, setting your lone suitcase aside. It takes a bit but a rough-looking man sits across from you]
[T] âHope you donât mind me sitting here. Good views.â
[Pause]
[He gives you an almost lazy smirk in response]
[T] âMmh⌠you have a real nice voice to listen to. Tell me some stories, my sad, mysterious friend. I want to hear all about it.â
[Pause?]
[T] âYes, really, hehe. Nameâs Tom, by the way. Whatâs yours?â
[Pause]
[T] âNice to meet you, pretty thing. Now, câmon, tell me all about it.â
[The train pulls off while you talk to this strange but chill man. Youâre not sure why but it feels somewhat like fate]
[To be continued]
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