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Context: You met your boyfriend a few years back. He was incredibly shy, hesitant to open up, and often shut down when overwhelmed. But you saw the good in him and wound up pregnant with his child, a little girl. It looks like you have a son on the way now and want to make sure your boyfriend is ready.
Setting: Home - The workshop
Tags: [M4F][Established Relationship][Shy Blacksmith Boyfriend Speaker][Pregnant Listener][Cute][Wholesome][Kids][Father][Shy Boi][Proposal][Confession][Pregnancy Comfort][Reverse Comfort][Cuddling][Kisses][CW: Implied Toxic Masculinity/Father Issues]
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[Scene opens in a garage filled with blacksmithing equipment]
[SFX: A hammer pounding against an anvil]
[You poke your head into your boyfriendâs workshop and wave to him]
âWell, hey there, pretty Mama. Come on in, was just testing out this reclaimed anvil.â
[You carefully navigate his equipment until you can safely fall into his arms]
âHmhm. God look at you, just glowing⌠Youâve eaten, right? Drinking plenty of water?â
[Pause]
âGood. Hold still, lemme talk to the the boy for a bit.â
[He wraps his arms around your waist and rests his lips in your hair]
âMmh⌠Lil fella is kicking up a storm tonight. How are you feeling, sweetheart?â
[Pause]
âHehe, yeah, sorry about the noise. Just wanted to make sure the new shop is raring to go. Câmere, sit on my lap for a minute.â
[He sits with a tired grunt and snuggles you close]
â...Made him a rattle.â
[Pause?]
âI mean, it doesnât rattle but itâs still a shiny toy to play with. Ann-Marie loved them when she was little. Sheâs all excited to have a little brotherâŚâ
[Pause]
âYouâre counting the freckles on my arm again, Hon⌠Whatâs on your mind?â
[Pause]
âWorried about me? Ah, Iâll be alright, love. Plenty of work that needs doing and plenty of people willing to pay for it. MmMm, no no, Iâm worried about you. Youâre still insisting on getting our new home setup while I work all day. Youâre pregnant, love, but youâre still cooking and cleaning and letting me sleep in⌠Youâre taking way too damned good care of me.â
[Pause]
[He sighs and nuzzles his lips to your shoulder]
âI know weâre a team, Hon, I know. But Iâm the man of the house, Iâm meant to-â.
[Pause]
[He inhales and exhales slowly]
â...Youâre right. Iâm not my Dad. My self-worth doesnât rest solely on working myself to death in the hopes that my family can do better. Mmh⌠Câmon, now, Iâm an old dog. See this stubble? Mmhm, thatâs the stubble of an experienced, capable man whoâs sat in the pantry a little too long, hehe.â
[Your daughter pokes her head into the room]
âAh, thereâs the terror herself. Câmon, Ann-Marie! Itâs safe, just be careful.â
[She happily darts over and hops into his open arm]
âHehe, well, hello there, maâam. Can I help you with something?â
[Pause]
âOhh, a drink of water, huh? I think I can manage that. Or⌠if you want to brave running to the mini fridge, I reckon we have some juice boxes. Oop! And there she goes, haha. Her motivation for apple juice is pretty admirable.â
[Pause]
[He keeps holding you, palm over your baby bump]
â...I love you. So much.â
[Pause]
[He smiles shyly]
âWell, Iâm glad the dopey blacksmith you met in a dive bar was the man you decided you wanted to marâŚmarryâŚ?â
[You try and get down on one knee but the baby bump ainât having it. You sigh and show him the ring]
âWait, youâre asking⌠me to marry you? B-Baby, I donât⌠Wait, did you forge that ring yourself?â
[Pause]
[He claps a hand over his mouth as tears start spilling down his face]
âI-Iâm supposed to⌠I-It was my job to⌠Huh? O-OK, Iâm listening⌠Iâm listeningâŚâ
[Long Pause]
â...Youâre not doing this because you think I wonât, you just⌠know how hard I can be on myself and wanted to⌠to take the pressure offâŚâ
[He crumples against you, sobbing quietly against your back]
âGodamnit, I⌠I donât deserve you, you know that? Youâre the only partner Iâve had that has stuck by me, had the patience to put up with my shyness⌠Hell, you didnât even give up on me when I shut down when things were stressful. You never let me suffer alone and I justâŚâ
[Pause]
â...Of course Iâll marry you, baby. Iâd be a damned fool not to realize what I have in my arms. Iâm just sorry you had to wait so long⌠When Ann-Marie was born, I was going to ask but she was so sick and you were so sick and I got so swept away.â
[He rumbles a little as you gently scratch the stubble around his jaw]
âHeh. You remember that night we met? You came waltzing into that dive bar and knew the bartender. Hell, you knew everyone⌠âCept me. So you sat that pretty backside down right next to me and said âHey, handsome, you new here?â. And I think my response was some kind of mix between a wheeze and a swear. Iâd always been painfully shy and, in ten minutes, you had me throwing darts and singing sea shanties, hehe. You brought out the best in me and, like a damned fool, I didnât ask for your numberâŚâ
[Pause]
âAnd then you waltzed into one of the classes I ran here and I was so happy to see you that I damned near dropped my hammer when you smiled real big and said âAyyy, Toby the Hot Blacksmith!â.â
[You both laugh together and Ann-Marie jumps back up into your arms]
âHey hey, Miss Ann-Marie. You remember how you always wanted to be a flower girl?â
[The little girl squeals and the freckles she inherited from her Dad almost light up]
âHmhm, I thought youâd like that. We donât know when itâs gonna be yet, OK? I know youâre excited but at least this will give you plenty of time to draw the dresses you like, yeah?â
[SFX: Excited little footsteps running away]
âAnd there she goes⌠Hmhm. Love that little girl. Makes me well up with tears just thinking about her sometimes, you know? Just thinking about my girls and my son⌠God, it makes me proud to be yours, Hon.â
[Pause]
âThe ring? Itâs perfect, baby. Absolutely stunning.â
[Pause]
[He laughs a little, admiring it on his hand]
âNo, you donât need to tell me itâs OK if I want to clean it up a little bit. I will never change this ring unless it is to repair it. I donât want it to be any different from how it is right now.â
[He kisses you and you return it, ignoring your daughterâs âEwww!â]
âI love you, Hon. Câmon, I can shut the shop down early. Letâs go eat our first dinner in our new home, yeah? Ann-Marie was chanting pizza early, but Iâm happy to cook for you.â
[Pause]
[He laughs again and puts an arm around you]
âYeah, I walked into you wanting fried potatoes. Not a problem, my dear. Not a problem at all.â
[The End]
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