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Muddied Waters
[sea storm ambiance]
Tighten the jib and slack the spinnakers! Man the portside cannons! Weâve got a date with destiny, and it ainât gonna end with a kiss!
*small pause*
Aim true! Anyone who misses that monster will be loaded in with the next shot!
*small pause*
Fire all!
[cannons fire]
The beast felt that! Ready harpoons! I wonât let this snake get away from us!
*small pause*
{yelling}
Iâve got you now, you slimy-faced monster!
*small pause*
Fire harpoons! And lodge âem quick! Else the whale might suck you down to the depths!
*small pause*
Drop anchor! Weâll lock the monster down, and pepper it tilâ its last breath!
[wood groans]
Donât lose your nerve, men! The ship will hold! Focus on slaying this sea dragon!
[cannons fire]
*small pause*Keep at it!
[wood groans]
The beast is tiring! Weâve almost got it! Think of the reward, men! Ten thousand gold pieces from the bounty alone! Plus whatever we can sell to those freaks at Solven! Weâll be rich!
[wood buckles]
Fire all!
[cannons fire]
[wood snaps]
Brace!
[ship splashes]
Steady yourselves! We may have lost the anchor, but we arenât out yet! That beast is still dragging us behind! Ready the bow chaser! And load it with scrap! If this monster thinks it can pull us around, weâre gonna make it think again!
*small pause*
Quartermaster! Ready the Minnow. If that beast starts submerging, weâre going to dive after it!
*small pause*
Fire forward cannons!
[cannons fire]
Drop all sails! We need to add some drag to this line! Reel in this oversized fish!
[bell rings]
No. No! That canât be the lookout bell! This snake isnât smart enough for that!
*small pause*
(growl)
Brace for impact, men! The fish is trying to beach us! Donât let a sandbar buck you off!
[boat crashes]
Lodged? No! I wonât let this fish escape. Not again! All starboard cannoneers, head below deck! Keep this boat above the waves! Quartermaster, Boâsun, with me! The Minnow is more than enough to finish a wounded beast!
*small pause*
Iâll seal the hatches. You two ready the long arm. We need to get our hooks in that monster before it makes for deeper waters.
*small pause*
Cutting the ropes! The Minnow is submerging.
[muffled sea ambiance]
Fire when ready.
[harpoon wooshes]
Nice shot, Boâsun! We arenât losing this snake anytime soon! Now, letâs start readying flares. Weâve gotta show the Plunder where to drop⌠theâŚ
*small pause*
Poseidonâs beard. Itâs huge. Bigger than I ever imagined.
*small pause*
And it's coming up at us! Letâs hope the Minnow can hold up against a brush-by.
[wood crunches]
Itâs grabbed us! This dumb fish must think weâre a snack! Quick. Ready the-
[wood snaps]
No!
[water floods]
*pause*
You dumb monster! You break my sub! You drown my men! But I bet you didnât count on me being able to breathe down here, did you?
*small pause*
Iâll cut you up myself if I have to!
(grunt of effort)
Iâll make you pay for-
(groan)
{strained}
Gonna crush me now too? A mighty sea beast reduced to fighting a human?
*listener speaks*
(exhale)
By the gods, you can speak! What sort of monster are you?
*listener responds*
Sod that! What magiks are you in league with? To even speak underwater youâd need some exceptional hearing, and a little magic to boot!
*listener comments*
I will not have some fish flip my questions! Iâve got a few friends of the aquatic variety, and theyâve given me a few gifts over the years. Thatâs all youâre getting from me! Now, be a good little monster and surface so my men can get another sweep at you!
*listener swims*
No, you dumb snake! To the surface, not deeper! You have to face us for-
(groan)
{strained}
Do it! Crush me. But know, I am |Characterâs Name|. Captain of The Queenâs Plunder. And I will not die trying to please some overgrown eel!
(gasp)
You dumb animal! Canât you finish anything? Either kill me, or surface! You canât leave again! You owe me that much!
*listener denies*
Oh, now that got a rise out of you! What? Donât like remembering the terrible things you did? Not too fond of actually taking the responsibility for your actions?
*listener threatens*
Save it. Youâre a monster. You deserve everything my crew and I could possibly do.
*listener states*
Donât lie to me, snake! Iâve been after you for years. Iâve read up on every scrap about you. So you can stop trying to highroad me. Youâre remorseless, and if I didnât know that firsthand, then the fishing vessels you sunk could tell me instead.
*listener speaks*
Shut up. Listening to you talk is worse torture than you pulling me down to the abyss. If you actually wanted me to believe you had a conscious below all those scales, youâd either end me or flop up on that sandbar and let me kill you.
*listener answers*
Oh, Iâm sure. The reptilian monster from ten thousand leagues below doesnât want to kill the captain thatâs been chasing it for years? Makes perfect sense.
*listener insists*
Then why crash us on shore? Why crush the Minnow?
*listener responds*
That was before you knew I would be able to understand you? And know what? Did me saying a few words underwater shake you to your core? Do you recognize me as a person, and suddenly feel sorry for everything you did?
*listener denies*
Useful? Me? My darling monster, Iâm flattered! But I promise, Iâd sooner die than help you.
*listener offers*
Bringing up my crew isnât a smart play. Theyâre all ready to die for this cause, and even if they werenât, Iâd gladly sacrifice them to stop you. Iâve spent twenty years chasing you, Iâm not going to help you escape now.
*listener questions*
Because youâre a plague. A stain on this blue Earth. You deserve nothing more than to be cut up and sold by the slice like the whale you are.
*listener states*
Your talk is falling on deaf ears, snake. Iâve seen you. Seen the carnage. I wonât believe youâre any sort of innocent in this.
*listener asks*
Sudden curiosity, hm? You never seemed to care why I was chasing you before.
*listener insists*
(dry chuckle)
Are you hoping to find some crack in my story? To show me that this was all one big misunderstanding? Because if you are, youâve got another thing coming.
*listener goads*
No, Iâll gladly tell the story. Itâs my favorite one. The day I found a purpose.
*small pause*
Twenty-two years ago, I was on a cruiser. Three sails, and two anchors, but not a cannon, nor gun to be seen. My family and I were off to see an aunt or an uncle, and I was as excited as could be. After all, I was no older than ten, and it was my first time sailing across the bay. Iâm focusing on every little detail when I notice an odd slick across the water. A long, thin line where the waves seem to crash a little too early. Does that description ring any bells?
*small pause*
Before I could even bring my mother to see the funny little swell, you snapped. Unprompted, and unprovoked. You tore the back half of the boat clean off and I got knocked straight off the deck. From the surface, I watched as you circled around for the front, and then the deck, and then the survivors on the masts. Barring me, you didnât leave a single soul to tell the tale. I would have drowned too if I wasnât lucky enough to catch a favorable riptide inland. And once I washed up, I knew exactly what I had to do. I had to kill you, and the more I studied, the more I realized that what you had done to my boat was not an isolated incident. You had been picking off mid-sized ships for years. Countless deaths, all on your scaly claws.
*small pause*
So tell me, monster. Am I not justified to seek you out? Do you not deserve the steel side of a ramming bow? Do you have some twisted motive for the death you bring?
*listener states*
Whaling ships? I canât say I understand.
*listener clarifies*
You thought my boat was a whaling ship? And⌠that makes it better, in your eyes?
*listener confirms*
Whyâs that?
*listener explains*
(laugh)
Thatâs your big push? The motive behind the murders, the secrets behind the destruction. It all boils down to, âIâm hungryâ?
*listener speaks*
Itâs not me being reductive, itâs stupid. Who cares if the whaling ships kill off a few more whales than youâd like? The oil, the blubber, the marrow, we put it to better use than you ever could. The empires run on whale oil, and you smashing a few ships wonât change anything.
*listener denies*
Was that all you had? We killed the whales, so you eat the ships for sustenance, and hope that weâll get the message and stop fishing? Thatâs your excuse for killing my family?
*listener speaks*
You are a monster. And youâre just as dumb as I thought. Iâm done bobbing back and forth through this. Either let me go, or eat me so I can see my family again.
*listener denies*
Oh, youâre not done with me yet? Your brain must be smaller than a crab if you forgot about what I said. Iâd rather die than help you.
*listener asks*
But would I help you, to kill you? Have you gone mad, snake?
*listener comments*
What about the Queenâs Plunder?
*listener states*
Sheâs not sinking! Never has there been a studier ship. Sheâll survive this.
*listener claims*
Not without your help? And how exactly would a sea serpent help a pirate ship?
*listener offers*
Youâd ferry her to shore? And why would you do that? Hoping to earn some sympathy?
*listener denies*
Well then, you arenât completely stupid. I would hunt you tilâ my last breath. So I suppose that means youâll be killing me.
*listener disagrees*
No? I retract my statement then. You are completely stupid. Why would you act as a savior to the one ship and crew that might actually stand a chance at killing yaâ?
*listener muses*
To send a message? So you are banking on sympathy then.
*listener denies*
Oh, I would send the message, now would I? And what exactly would this message be?
*listener explains*
You want me to go to whatever kings and queens would lend an ear, and tell them about you? Tell them that youâre willing to negotiate? And in exchange, youâll deliver me, my ship, and my crew to safety?
*listener confirms*
And what assurance would you have that I wonât take your deal and neglect to speak of your plight to anyone?
*listener speaks*
Nuthin but my word, eh? You truly are daft.
*listener comments*
Oh, Iâll gladly be taking the deal, no doubt of that. And I may even honor it. Whoâs to say? But I will go straight back to hunting you the second the Queen is ship-shape again.
*listener confirms*
Well then, Iâm glad we could come to an understanding. Now, why donât you surface on the port side? All the men manning those cannons are below deck.
*listener denies*
Oh, and how would you know Iâm lying?
*listener comments*
You could hear me barking orders, could you? Noted, the creatureâs exceptional hearing could be exploited via sound mines. Thanks for giving me another weapon.
*small pause*
You should push the Queen from the base of the rudder chain. Itâs mahogany, it can take a little thrashing.
*listener speaks*
Yes, Iâm being truthful now. If I canât kill you here, itâs best I maximize my chances later. Speaking of which, where do you make rest?
*listener comments*
Well, if you want to negotiate with a human, I can hardly just point at the ocean and say, âThe monster is somewhere out thereâ, now can I?
*listener speaks*
You come to Serpentâs Rest every full moon? Youâre telling me that placeâs name is actually accurate?
*listener confirms*
Itâs where you were born? That just may be useful to me too. Youâre just plenty cooperative, arenât you?
*listener speaks*
Oh, well I guess youâll just have to wait and see. Come next full moon, thereâll either be a committee waiting to talk, or a few hundred ships waiting in ambush. And youâll just have to find out which.
*listener assures*
Oh, you could best a hundred ships? Well then, you should be willing to come to the rest either way then, shouldnât you?
*listener confirms*
Iâm glad you see it my way. Now, get me back up on my ship. Iâm not riding to land in your claws.
*listener speaks*
Donât push your luck, monster. I may just have the mines detonated if I feel like it. Kill us both in one fell swoop.
*listener denies*
Yeah yeah, Iâm sure. Just get me back on the Plunder. Iâve got an encounter to arrange.
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