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Context: You've been with your boyfriend for a while now. He's not always good but, when he is, he makes you feel like you hung the moon. You're moving in with him in a brand new city and now wait at the train station for him to come to get you, not knowing this will be the night that changes your life forever.
Setting: Train station - exterior
Tags: [MM4A][Tsundere Boyfriend Speaker][Nice Stranger Speaker][Drama][Abandoned][Fight][Tsundere][Yandere][CW: Implied Emotional Abuse/Neglect/Kidnapping/Drugging]
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***
[BF] = Your boyfriend
[NG] = The friendly new guy
***
[Scene opens at an abandoned train station]
[SFX: Cold wind and a phone buzzing]
[You stand at the train station late at night, calling your boyfriend for the seventh time in a row]
[BF, picking up] âHeeyyy, babe. Look, Iâm on my way, OK, and I really canât fucking drive with you constantly ringing me.â
[Pause]
[BF, with an annoyed sigh] âI know Iâm late, OK? Itâs only by like five minutes.â
[Pause]
[BF] âOK, OK, an hour isnât five minutes, I get it. Iâll be there, OK? Relax. Oop, the cop is giving me the stink eye, I gotta go.â
[...]
[You tell him you love him]
[BF] âHm? Yeah, yeah, Iâll see you soon.â
[SFX: The call ending]
[You sit on the freezing cold bench, hugging yourself and trying not to sob. Itâs not working so well]
[NG] âHey. âScuse me?â
[You look up and see a young man approaching, looking concerned]
[NG] âYou OK? Itâs not safe to be out here alone by your lonesome at night.â
[Pause]
[NG] âOhh, waiting on your boyfriend, sure. Would you mind if I sat with you til he got here? Iâd feel awful if I didnât.â
[Pause]
[He smiles and sits next to you, warm]
[NG] âThanks. How long have you been waiting out here?â
[Pause]
[NG] âAn hour?! Itâs damn near freezing temperatures! Did the people inside not let you wait in the lobby?â
[Pause]
[NG] âClosed because of how late it is⌠Geeze, youâre having one Hell of a night, huh? At least your boy is coming to grab you, right?â
[...]
[NG] âSeriously? Heâs an hour late because he got pulled over by a cop speeding on the way here? Man sounds like a real dreamboat.â
[...]
[NG] âHey, Iâm sure he has his redeeming qualities, Iâm not saying you have bad taste in men, OK? A bit of hot tea might warm you up though, right?â
[You chuckle and the new guy smiles a little]
[NG] âSo, where are you pulling in from?â
[Pause]
[NG] âOh, Everfall? Quite the distance. You visiting him out here, then?â
[Pause]
[NG] âOh, youâre moving in with him⌠Wow, uhâŚâ
[...]
[NG] â...look, I-â.
[SFX: A car pulling into the parking lot and skidding a bit]
[NG] âOh, that must be him, hm?â
[You hop up and hurry toward the car as your boyfriend steps outside]
[BF] âAyy babe, câmere, gimme a hug. Woof, youâre fucking freezing. How come you didnât wait in the lobby?â
[Pause]
[BF] âClosed? Enh, fuck, my bad. Câmon, get in the car, letâs get home.â
[Pause]
[BF] âYeah, yeah, love you t-... who the fuck is this?â
[NG] âHey man. I was just waiting with them for you to get here. Didnât want her to be alone this late at night, no big deal.â
[Your boyfriend glares at your new friend, glowering]
[BF] âSo, what, Iâm five minutes late and youâve already got a new man on your arm?â
[Pause]
[BF] âBabe, shut up, alright. Iâll tell you I love you when Iâm not fucking livid. Who the fuck are you, and what were you doing with my partner?â
[NG] âDude, calm down⌠They were shivering like crazy and I didnât want them to be left alone. They couldâve been hurt.â
[BF] âLook, man, just butt out, OK? Câmon, babe, just get in the car, alright?â
[Pause]
[He lets out an exasperated sigh]
[BF] âIâm not having this argument, alright? Please just stop being stubborn and get in the car, alright? Itâs freezing cold out here!â
[...]
[BF] âBabe, câmon, just gimme your hand.â
[He reaches out for you but NG intervenes]
[NG] âBack off, man. They donât want to go with you, and youâre scaring them.â
[BF throws his hands up in exasperation]
[BF] âAlright, ALRIGHT, well if you want to go with your new boyfriend, fine!â
[He gets back in the car]
[Pause]
[NG] âHey-!â
[SFX: The car speeding off]
[Both of you watch your boyfriend speed off in stunned silence. NG sighs and drapes his coat around your shoulders]
[NG] âGeeze, what a douchebag⌠You deserve better, you know? Iâm not saying me, but⌠godamn. Here, take my coat, OK? There you goâŚâ
[Pause]
[NG] âHey, hey, donât cry⌠Shh, itâs OK, Itâs gonna be OK⌠Look, I know itâs weird, but I can give you a ride home if you want?â
[Pause]
[He smiles gently and leads you over to his truck]
[NG] âHey, itâs not a problem. Youâve had a rough night.â
[SFX: Car doors opening and closing]
[NG] âThere we go. Here, want some water? Itâs not exactly cold but, ah, youâre crying pretty hardâŚâ
[SFX: The truck starting up and heading off]
[NG] âYouâre welcome, sweetie. Sorry, itâs probably weird to call you that, right? Haha, Iâm no good at talking to people.â
[You take a few shaky sips of water]
[NG] âNo, no, itâs no big deal! Honest. I just really canât believe that guy was so rude to you⌠Thatâs no way to treat your partner, you know? I know itâs not my business⌠it just bothers me that someone as sweet as you got torn down by someone thatâs meant to love you.â
[...]
[NG] âFeeling tired? Itâs OK, you can take a little nap if you want.â
[...?]
[NG] âHm? Do I need your address? No, I donât think so.â
[You glance over and see a slightly eerie smile resting on his lips. Your head is swimming]
[NG] âHmhmhmhm⌠you know, I was sure he was going to take a swing at me or would drag you into the car. I was so sure that I was about to lose you, but⌠that idiot gave you right to me.â
[...]
[NG laughs quietly]
[NG] âSweetie, the drugs are going to knock you out any second. Look at the pretty trees, enjoy the song on the radio, and try and remember what freedom tastes like, OK? Youâre going to want something pleasant to think about when we get to my cabin.â
[SFX: Your phone buzzing]
[NG] âAww, is that him? Calling to tearfully apologize after ruminating over why heâs such a broken thug that canât express his feelings in a healthy way? Thatâs cute. Lemme see that phone, hon.â
[He takes it, rolls down the window, and tosses it out onto the dark road]
[NG] âNo more phone, no more boyfriend, no more problems. Aww, youâre cute when you cry and yawn at the same time. Go to sleep, sweetie. Iâm sure itâll all be OK, now.â
[...]
[Sleep takes you before you can even think, before you can even realize that you probably wonât see your next morning]
[To be continued]
Note: I am an asshole :(
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