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[F4A] Friends to Lovers [Slice Of Life] [Relaxation] [Hypnosis] can be [Sleep Aid] or [Betrayal] [Changing Your Mind] [Implied Brainwashing] [Friends To Lovers] [L-Bomb]
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Dibokucres is a female looking for anyone in Friends to Lovers
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Premise:

You invite a long time friend over for dinner. You have a crush on her, but you’re afraid to ruin a good thing by admitting it to her. After dinner, she wants to repay you, by showing off one of *her* skills. She makes you feel so incredibly relaxed, it’s almost magical. Your girlfriend really is amazing.

(Feel free to modify to a happy ending where the speaking character does not to anything evil, or to a sleep aid)

Script

Roughly 1300 words (1100 in sleep aid version).

Monetization: OK: youtube only, NOT OK: any form of paywall or early access.

Alterations: OK: improvisations and changes, NOT OK: gender flips

Too long, not going to read:

I was in a mood, so I was cleaning house in all of my WIPs, when I stumbled upon this practically finished script, abandoned due to critical motivation failure. I figured it would be a shame to trash it, so I decided to finish and release it instead. It was supposed to be a 500 word quickie, just had to rewrite the induction part, as I had repurposed it already in another script. Aaaand it ended up ballooning and this script became another 1.3k one, wasting many more hours than planned. At least writing itself is still always fun :)

I still remember how this one got started, a friend who betaread pointed out that the terms of endearment I was using in another script were not appropriate between roommates, but for an established romantic relationship. They were right of course, so I changed it. But that comment got the idea of a "change in terms of endearment before and after the thing" brewing. Initially it was subtle, just a single mention of the wrong nickname at the end, to indicate that something was off now. But I ended up making it more explicit in the end.

Thanks, friend, for all your encouragement and support over these two years now!

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2 years ago