Hey hey hey it's your old buddy timeraft here with another "powerful woman gets all up in your space" audio script. Your friend spends Thursday night in the desert for some reason. You’ve wanted to confess that you are in love with them for a long time and when they left their switch at your place you figured you had a good excuse to hunt them down and do just that. Unfortunately they have a secret. They’re a superhero! (similar to but legally distinct from the incredible hulk lol). Good to monetize and modify! (feel free to mess around with the genders I just didn't want to avoid using pronouns this time.) As always I'd love feedback!

Script archive: https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/von9nl/could_i_get_some_constructive_criticismfeedback/

Dialogue in plain text

Context in italics

Sound effects in bold

Context that changes the audio in bold italics

Speaker is sitting alone on a rock looking over a canyon in the middle of the desert. They seem tense. You accidentally sneak up on them

Surprised shout

They have a timid shaky voice

What! W-What are you doing here! I-I told you d-don't go looking for me on Thursdays!

W-what am I doing out here? That-that-that's none of your business! Why didn't you listen Y-you idiot!

I left my switch at your place? Th-thanks, but it can wait!

Look man you you gotta you gotta get outta here man! You gotta go!

Look, I can't explain it well! There's like this other side of me alright! And she’s dangerous, I’m holding her back but.

Speaker gets overtaken by a headache and begins holding their head in their hands

Ahhhgggggggggggrgghghggghghh distorted double voice GET AWAY!!!!

Running sounds

The speaker jumps a long distance right at them landing in front

Their voice has changed. It's no longer shy and timid. its direct and assertive, almost a little rough

Too Late!

Grabs listener

Gotcha!

Their appearance has changed, they're more muscular and have red skin.

What's the matter? You wanted to talk to me girl? Then talk!

What?! I’m her too!

I’m just stronger and faster and better and prettier and cooler. You catch the drift.

She was out in the lab doing that science thing she does right and accidentally cracked open a portal to some messed up otherworld and got blasted with Omega Rays.

And then boom next thing she knew I was there. All the stuff she doesn't talk about rolled into one bundle of superpowered joy. God it's so great!

Remember when that frat boy of a god threatened to blow up the city because of some stupid thing the museum did? What was that punk's name? Apollo or Ares or somebody like that I dunno.

Yeah and that mysterious red woman who kicked him across town and fried him with radiation? That was me!

She gets really enthusiastic

God I love fighting! All those years of being pushed around and now I can just wreck stuff! Sweet Charlotte Pike I’ve never felt this alive!!

But this goodie two shoes was all like

Mocking whiny voice

“Oh no you can't just break out and fight whenever you want! Oh no you destroyed the shopping district! Where will all those rich girls buy their sweatshop purses? Oh no you smashed up the DMV! Blah buh Blah Blah Blah!”

Back to a normal voice for the character

It used to be that I only broke out when she was stressed or mad or hiding her emotions which believe me was. All. The. Time.

But she figured out a trick to stop me. Remember that time you guys hugged at the fair?

She was all sad because she’d been all wishy washy like she always is and something hadn't gone her way and she was crying and you hugged her right down. It was cute.

She would whip that memory out and boom I was right back in the corner of her mind like the jukebox in that stupid song.

So we came to an agreement.

I could only break out when the city was in danger. And Thursday nights belong to me as long as I stay out here in this blasted wasteland.

Now then, no reason we can't continue this conversation. Thanks for the switch, but I know you didn't come all this way just to bring me something I forgot.

What brought you all this way?

Listener denies anything

Oh playing dumb are we? We have ways of making you talk

Pins the listener against a rock.

So there’s really nothing you want to tell me?

Keep squirming. It's cute. You’re not getting out.

Ear whisper

I’m not going to hurt you

They're face to face, she's just inches from the listener

Well if you’ve got nothing to tell me. I’ve got something to tell you.

Laughs

The other me is desperately trying to retake control. She can't though, not this time because this is something she secretly wants to say deep down.

This is why she forbade me from going into town and hunting you down. But tonight. Oh tonight my little Jackalope you. Came. To me. And now I’m gonna let my secrets out.

That's right buster, you’re a smart cookie. You already know what I’m gonna say but I’m gonna say it anyways.

I am-and we are. Pathetically. Desperately. Madly. In love with you.

Uh-huh that's right, cutie. We’ve been head over heels for ya for years. You should have noticed! Honestly girl! This dork was practically telegraphing it but she just could not. Spit. It. Out! Ugh I was in her brain screaming at her to just say it for so long! But when you’re around I can't ever bust out.

Well? What do you say? Wanna be my-our girl?

I know that's what you came here for

Listener confesses

I knew it-gasps

First voice is back

D-do you mean it? I’m so sorry I don't want to pressure you! You must think I’m so scary now!

You really mean it?

Tough voice is back.

Good

Kiss me damn it

Kissing sounds

God why did I wait so long

Don't stop! More! More!

They fall into the sand making out.

Laughs

There's a third voice. Calmer but still firm

All the voices are gone! I’m one mind again! You. You merged them!

God I love you!

I hope I’m not gonna be red forever though.

Red is your favorite color?

My little Jackelope. You always know what to say.

Well the night is young yet.

Let's make up for lost time.

Fade out

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