Heyyo this post is old! If you got linked here this is a more updated archive of my stuff! https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/x9hb9v/script_archive/

I've been writing scripts for a few months now and I've been posting them here. I've gotten a pretty decent amount of upvotes and a couple fills, but I'd really like some feedback in words because I genuinely don't know what I'm doing lol. I really enjoy this writing style. The format I think has helped me finally get back into writing, but I also don't want to flood this subreddit with crap lol! I swear this isn't a self promotion post or anything, I'm just for real looking for feedback.

If you'd like to use them go ahead! You can post them anywhere and monetize in anyform you like (including behind a paywall). Also feel free to modify as you like to make it fit your speaking style (You can also change up the genders if you like (with the exception of the moon goddess one where the listener needs to be kept as trans or it kind of loses its whole theme) But if you're F and want to make one where the speaker is designated M or vise versa go ahead!) The one thing I would ask is that you alert me when you fill one because I'd never know about it otherwise and I'd love to hear your take!

I also take requests if you'd like me to write a specific script!

Anyway here are my scripts that I've posted! ​ Beast saves listener

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/x7s98w/m4f_rescued_by_a_beast_beauty_and_the_beastbeast/

I never liked this fairy tale so I decided to kind of twist it a bit. [M4F][Semi-Platonic][Serious]

Drunk Rando

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/x21a5e/a4a_keeping_an_eye_on_a_drunk_rando/

A random drunk breaks into your fridge. Being the responsible sort you keep an eye on them until their ride shows up [A4A][Platonic][Silly]

Dorky Evil Queen

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/wteaww/f4ayour_evil_queen_is_kind_of_a_dork_tbh/

I really had a lot of fun writing this. the queen realllllly tries to be evil, but has a childish view of it. [F4A] [Platonic][Silly]

Journey into your soul with a hippie

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/wceh50/f4m_hippy_chick_heals_your_heartbreak/

This one's bad but I stand by it.

[F4A][Non-Platonic][Silly]

My weird one

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/w39tjf/a4a_speaker_challenges/

I don't get it either [I cant tag this one]

Friend rambles to you about a franchise they love

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/vt5ua0/friend_rambles_to_you_about_their_favorite/

I love when people do this. [A4A][Platonic][Silly]

Best friend has a superpowered dark side

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/vzd1z3/f4fbest_friends_superpowered_side/

My favorite superhero is the incredible hulk but I always thought the romance could have been handled better. [F4F][Non-Platonic][Semi-Silly]

Evil Queen Needs your comfort

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/vkv5mz/all_under_heaven_comforting_an_evil_queen/

I think this one probably has my best character work but IDK if it really works in audio format [A4A][Dominant][Serious]

Moon Goddess wants snuggles

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/vcjnhz/f4f_moon_goddess_is_infatuated_with_you/

I think this one is probably my favorite I've done. But I don't think the dialogue is that good. I wanted to write one for a trans listener that wasnt about coming out as trans.

[F4TransA][Semi-Platonic][Semi-Silly]

Robot turns on its master for the greater good

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/v0rakq/a4a_messiah_machine_kind_robot_wont_destroy/

I'm not sure what I think of this one

[A4A][Platonic][Serious]

Dominant tsundere witch forces you to be a better person

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/u5csav/f44_witch_forces_a_jerk_to_shape_uptsundere/

And

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/up7q3t/f4a_tsundere_witch_cuddles_you_to_sleep/

And

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/vphh49/f4a_witch_girlfriend_picks_you_up_after_work/

This is probably my favorite character I've made. I wanted to kind of make the opposite of the manic pixie dream girl, but I think I just made a manic pixie dream girl for people that like Kafka novels. They also might be too long?

[F4A][Non-Platonic][Dominant][Serious]

Tsundere moon of Jupiter

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/uakj91/a4a_tsundere_europa_shows_you_their_ocean_space/

I had a lot of fun with this character [A4A][Non-Platonic][Silly]

My worst script

https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/u7jvn2/phone_call_from_mothman_a4aannoyedsillydeath/

I hate this one. I was superrrrrr drunk when I wrote and posted it but its here. [A4A][Platonic][Silly]

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But yeah those are all the scripts I posted here! I really would genuinely appreciate constructive criticism. I plan to write a lot more and I want to get good at it!

I have an idea for a several part series themed around a journey for enlightenment in the desert. And I want to do at least one more chapter of the tsundere witch saga. I've also realized I keep coming back to the theme of "physical intimacy with a powerful woman" so I guess I should try and break out of that mold.

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Anyways thanks in advance for your time!