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Sequel to this https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/u5csav/f44_witch_forces_a_jerk_to_shape_uptsundere/
Part 3 here: https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/vphh49/f4a_witch_girlfriend_picks_you_up_after_work/
Archive: https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/x9hb9v/script_archive/
Dialogue in basic text
Sound effects in bold
Context in italics
Context that changes the audio in bold italics
Speaker in listener are lying in bed. Listener is almost as far away from the speaker as they can physically get without falling off. Listener and speaker are about a week into this relationship. She’s been really pushing the listener to self-improve and they haven't had a tender moment since the last audio.
Sleepy tired voice
Hey
Hey
More Awake voice
Hey you
If you get any closer to the edge you're going to fall on the floor.
I know you’re faking sleeping little mouse. You don’t have to keep pretending.
Get over here.
Tongue Clicking
C’mon C’mon
Let me hold you
Listener stays put
Ughhh C’monnnn
We’ve been doing this for a week and you’ve spent every night in that position. It's ok if you're not comfortable being held, but you don't have to hide in the corner of the bed. I’m Legitimately concerned you’re going to fall out. Just Come. Closer. to the middle. I’ll make room if you want.
She moves over. Listener comes closer to the center.
Have you ever cuddled before? It’s ok if you haven’t, there’s not anything to be ashamed of my little mouse. Do you want to try it?
Listener nods uncertainty
Shhhh it's alright. Just let me hold you, take a deep breath. And if you don't like it, we’ll stop.
Speaker begins to spoon the listener. They place their chin on the listener's shoulder.
There, that's not so bad is it?
I’ve noticed you’ve been having trouble sleeping. That's normal when your sleep schedule changes. Yours was frankly not very healthy, staying up until 4AM and sleeping past noon isn't good for you.
You’ve had trouble sleeping since before then? Why's that?
Just anxious huh? That's fair. Has anything ever helped you sleep?
Rain? Here I think I can help with that
Snap
Gentle rain noises
There. It's just an illusion but whatever it takes to get you through the night is gonna half to do.
Breathing and time passes
Do you like this? Cuddling I mean?
Listener is noncommittal
Well personally I love it. Don’t tell anybody but I’m a super huge cuddlebug. Can’t get enough of it. Just holding somebody, I haven't done this in a long time. Since before I became what I am now actually.
What? Again you doubt the existence of my softer side? Oh ye of little faith.
Y’know that cat that followed you home from work the other night? The big fluffy brown and white one? That was me!
Laughs
You’re so sweet around cats. I loved when you scratched behind my ears and called me pretty. And the way you laughed when I rubbed against your legs. I hadn't heard you laugh like that before. It was sweet.
Listener is embarrassed
Awww look at you so embarrassed. Heaven help I break through your facade.
Would you like me to scratch behind your ears? It's a good feeling. I could turn you into a cat if you like. Maybe a big fluffy black one and I’ll just hold you tight all night long. Trust me you’ll love it.
Quieter laughter
No? That's alright. You really shouldn’t hold a cat tight anyways. You on the other hand
Holds them tighter
I can hold you as tight as I want. So long as you're comfortable with it.
Purring sound
I don't try to be hard on you y’know. I just want to bring out the best in you. You’ve done alright this week, better than I thought you would. I think you don't have to worry about becoming a mouse again. You have tomorrow off right? How about we do something fun. You deserve a break.
I have to check in at work for a bit. We can grab lunch with my apprentice and then maybe go down to the park. They’re having a chalk drawing contest and some of those artists are super good. I know a nice trail that loops around the back part of the old power plant, where we could get some exercise. Then maybe we can walk to my place and make some dinner and watch a movie. Does that sound good?
Listener agrees
Alright its a plan then.
Now its time for me to unleash my most powerful magic upon you.
Listener starts getting nervous
Shhhhh Shhhh It's alright.
No I’m not gonna turn you into a toad. Not yet anyway. No this is deeper more powerful magic. Brace yourself.
Kisses listeners neck
Neck Kisses!
Does a few more
Feels nice doesn't it? How do you like cuddling huh? Do you approve?
Breathing Listener has already fallen asleep
You're already asleep huh?
Sleep well little mouse
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