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[Background SFX]
(SFX created by the speaker)
{Stage Direction}
*non-spoken context*
~emphasis~
|Authorās Note|
A Fur-midable Feline
[bushes rustle]
{talking to themself}
Three clicks east of the local village, I should be coming up on it any second now.
*small pause*
Here we are! Temple definitely looks old. Carvings might place it around 4th century A.D. I wonder if itāll have some intact masonry? We still donāt really understand how they transported this much granite from the quarry. Iām betting on oil and slide mechanics but Iād love to get some evidence.
{loudly}
Over here, boys! Bring the cameras! Weāve uncovered the find of the decade!
[bushes rustle]
{examining}
Letās get a few distant shots then head over. Make sure to have your tranquilizers ready! Weāre pretty deep in the jungle and the natives say this is tiger territory.
*pause*
{profesional}
You two take pictures of the whole exterior. I donāt want to miss an inch. You photograph the central room and Iāll check in on the upper levels. I want every bit of this place documented!
[walking sfx]
*small pause*
{dissmisive}
Theyāll be fine out there, |last name 1|. We are plenty prepared for anything this jungle throws at us. Now take the pictures and shut up about that whole ābeing watchedā thing. Youāre getting everyone on edge!
[walking sfx]
[photographs flash]
{talking to themself}
The oil bowl is largely intact after all this time. Now thatās craftsmanship! In fact, these upper levels seem way better off than the exterior. Maybe a wind tunnel prevents internal erosion. Iām done here for a while, I should go check in on |last name 1|.
{loudly}
|last name 1|! |last name 1|! I swear if you got buried in rumble not five minutes in!
*small pause*
Hey, where are you! I want to compare findings, say something!
*small pause*
|last name 2|! |last name 3|! Have you seen |last name 1|!
*small pause*
{talking to themselves}
Where did they get off to? Did they all just bail on me? That canāt be right.
*small pause*
{confused}
Itās that a flare? Why would someone fire that?
[running sfx]
Yep, thatās definitely one of our flares. And tranquilizer casings? What is happening right now?
[growling]
{spooked}
Oh, that explains whatās wrong! That tiger is huge! Iāve got to stay calm. Iāll keep talking in this low tone. And very slowly Iāll reach for my gun. Itās a good thing itās already loaded. Just stay calm, Misses Tiger. Mister Tiger? It really doesnāt matter since youāre clearly angry. And that makes sense, Iām in your territory, maybe close to a den. So Iāll just back away nice and slow. Here, Iāll kick the flare over that way andā¦
(sound of exertion)
Thatās right, look at the bright flare. And donāt pay attention to me doing this!
[tranquilizer fires]
*speaker runs*
[bushes rustle]
[speaker trips]
*speaker tries to crawl away*
{scared}
Please donāt! Iām sorry for trespassing it wonāt happen again! Please let me go! Please-!
(ragged breath)
You stopped. Thank you so much! Iāll leave here and never come back, I promise! Just stay right there and you wonāt ever see me again!
*listener speaks*
Oh no! Iām dead. Iām dead and in my last moments, Iām imagining talking tigers! Why did it have to be me? I could have been a chef! Chefs donāt die alone in jungles!
*listener speaks*
{dazed}
āCoinā? What like you want a coin? Do I have to pay you to move into the afterlife or something? Uh, I should have stayed home! Mom always said this job would be the death of me!
*listener speaks*
āFootā? I donāt understand? Well, I guess I donāt need to. I must be losing so much blood that I canāt even imagine a proper conversation. Wonāt be long before everything fades to black.
*small pause*
I never got to tell my sister about her goldfish. I wonder if this is how it felt when the cat got to it.
[growls]
{fearful}
Okay, youāre angry! Iām sorry but I canāt help! I donāt have any money and I canāt-!
*small pause*
(slight exertion)
{confused}
There was a coin lodged in my boot. Of course, there was! Who knew my dying brain could create a perfect Dues Ex Machina? Here, you want the coin? Take it and let me die in peace! *speaker walks to tiger and hands them the coin*
[collapses]
{loopy}
I canāt even muster the strength to stand! I feel so cold. My vision is failing me. Mom, is that you? You look so orange, and fluffy?!
*speaker snaps up*
{attent}
Youāre the tiger! And youāre a person and Iām going crazy! This is too much, even for me. Just let me bleed out already!
(yelp)
Youāve got me on your shoulder? Why? Are you going to take me back to the temple and sacrifice me to the tiger gods?
[running sfx start]
Woah! Youāre very fast. I guess thatās tigers for ya.
*small pause*
Oh god, were ~are~ going back to the temple. Am I really going to imagine a sexy tiger hybrid mauling me to death? Really brain? Is that the best we could do in our dying moments? Please just let this torture end! Let me die!
[running sfx stop]
*listener utters*
{irked}
āDeadā Yep, that me! Dead. Not alive. Finito!
*small pause*
You know itās pretty weird that you speak some English but not fluent English. Youād think in my dying moments I could actually pick a lane for my fantasies but noā¦
*listener parrots*
āNoā? Youāre just repeating what Iām saying now? Thatās great. Definitely how I wanted to go out.
*listener connects*
āNo Deadā? Denial, cool. I hope you arenāt like, a physical representation of the stages of grief, because I really donāt want to see anger.
*listener moves*
{frightened}
All right, paw on my chest! Your claws look very sharp, thatās for sure. Please just make it quick.
(brace)
{confused}
Youāre still just touching me. Whatās happening here?
*listener repeats*
āNo Deadā. Iām sure you think that because youāre just a figment of my imagination, but thatās not true. Please try to think about this. The only logical explanation is that Iām dying, and vividly hallucinating. The idea that youāre a semi-intelligent magic tiger who chased me for a coin and then dragged me back here to eat me is laughable.
*listener speaks*
āNo Eatā? Well, that would be nice I guess. But it would just confuse our little narrative here. If you donāt want to eat me then why would you take me back here after trying to chase me away?
*listener states*
āPlayā? What does that even mean? Do you have board games here or are we talking fights to the death because if thatās the case, I canāt really-!
*listener tackles speaker*
{mildly perturbed}
You pounced on me! Hey, down kitty! Donāt-!
[listener licks speaker]
Gross! You canāt just lick my face, I donāt know where youāve been!
[licks again]
Stop it, your tongueās all tickly! And itās cruel to play with your meal like this.
*listener nuzzles*
Stop nuzzling me, itās weird! Just two minutes ago, you were coming for my blood and now youāre scenting me like a house cat. What changed?
*listener speaks*
āCoinā.
(sigh)
I guess thatās all the explanation Iām going to get.
*small pause*
And now youāre purring. It feels kind of odd to have a massive, fluffy cat vibrate on me, but whatever.
*listener speaks*
{calm}
āNo Deadā. Iām not sure I actually believe you, but I can at least stop panicking. Why do you care, do you only eat calm meat or something?
*listener speaks*
āLeaveā? What like I ~can~ leave, or youāre telling me to leave?
*listener stands up*
Okay, this feels like youāre letting me go. Iām sorry about the tranquilizer from earlier, although you didnāt seem to care too much. Iām going to leave now, Iāll make sure not to grab any more coins on my way out.
[walking sfx]
So youāre letting me go, just like that. Iāll do it! Iām at the threshold of this temple and I can just keep walking!
*listener speaks*
āVisitā? Yeah sure. If you just donāt want us to take anything I can bring the crew back to finish documentation real soon.
*listener corrects*
āVisit Aloneā? Did the others do something wrong, orā¦
*listener approaches*
Okay, youāre getting all close again. Iām sorry if questioning you was against the rules or something, I didnāt know-!
*listener licks speaker*
There you go licking me again. Youāre just a big softie, arenāt you?
*listener repeats*
āVisit Aloneā Alright, whatever you say. Iāll go recover my footage and then Iāll finish the expedition alone. See you soon, I guess.
[walking sfx]
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