Should I make a PART 3? I need an opinion 😶

This is a continuation of my previous script The Runaway Brides Twin Marries The Mafia Boss Part 1 ➡https://www.reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptHaven/comments/od08z9/f4m_the_runaway_brides_twin_marries_the_mafia/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

Legends :

° (y/n etc...) listeners action/your actions/sfx i think will work

Fact :

• although the heavenly Juliet rose can be purchased for less than the $5 million price tag listed above, it is known as the “£3 million rose” because that's how much it cost famed rose breeder David Austin to create the apricot-hued hybrid over the course of 15 years.

The pink noise distortion sfx link ➡ https://freesound.org/s/128362/

Script BELOW ⬇

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(Pacing back and forth out of nervousness)

Is it hot in here or what? this must be what they call wedding jitters... whew... I am going to melt my makeup off if i keep sweating like a pig. The more I over think this, the more nervous I get. I have to make peace with knowing that its time to say goodbye to my single life once I step outside this room. My life yesterday will no longer be the same after today. No more ogling at hot boys for me .no more tinder nor bumble, there is no need for me to numerously swipe left or right anymore since my soon to be match or shall I say mismatch is already handed down to me by my older sister.

(Knock sfx) (WC : start ) What is it? oh... the wedding procession has already started and I need to hurry up? (WC : lets go) I just need a few minutes, I have to shake this restlessness out of me first before walking out there or else I might end up running towards the nearest exit out of this place . (WC : long ) I won't take long and besides the ceremony won't even start yet if the bride is not there, so your boss and the rest of those well wishers can wait a little longer.

I can do this... all I have to do is walk down the aisle, look happy and very much in love, say yes and then kiss him, it is super easy, its like stealing candy from a baby. (Feel dreadful at the thought) Ugh!!! who am I kidding?! the kissing part is not that easy... why does he have to be such a good kisser?! I mean, I have been kissed before by a number of guys but oh god! amongst all of them he is the only one that could make my insides melt with just one kiss and it is scaring me.

I am truly doomed for all eternity, it only took one kissing lesson to make me want to taste him more . That man is the epitome of danger that I should be wary of and avoid at all cost, but how can I do that now when I'm about to tie the knot with him? he is very much unavoidable at this point. I am going to drown in all of his intoxicating essence, just the thought of him is already making my body go haywire. This feeling he awakened within me isn't normal at all!... right? I guess my sanity must have flew out the window when he kissed me for the first time.

(Deep breathes and a couple more of shaking shit out of your system sfx)

Alright, I think I am good. I am going to go out there and marry that man. This might not be such a bad idea after all. I am marrying the most sought after bachelor in the country and the other girls would die to be in my position. For outsiders he may seem to be the perfect catch and the total dream package of what every man and woman wants... but why... why does he have to be the bad guy? As much as I want to ponder on this a little more, my time is up. I am going to be Mrs. Mafia whether I like it or not.

(Open and close door sfx) ( walking sfx marble floor: inside ) (walking sfx concrete floor : outside)

(walking down the aisle song sound effect : Beautiful In White Violin Cover? I dunno if its possible. But yeah as your choice of background song is playing, you are talking to yourself)

Here goes... I am now walking down the aisle of no return with my bouquet on hand and a plastered look of pure disgu-... pure happiness on my face. We are getting married under the stars at the hotels' courtyard. The trees are adorned with fairy lights all over them, a canopy with an abundance of Juliet rose stands at the center of the fountain wall backdrop. Juliet rose THE most expensive rose ever developed! this man surely knows how to dangle his wealth for all to see. Candles and Juliet rose petals also lined both sides of the aisle up to the canopy where my soon to be partner is waiting for me... scratch that! he is walking with purposeful strides towards me... what the...

(Guest whispering sfx because of the grooms action ) (end of talking to yourself)

(Whisper yell at him but keeping it lowkey) What are you doing! you're supposed to wait for me back there! (y/n long ) I wasn't taking too long, this is how brides walk (y/n purpose ) I am not doing it on purpose! you just ruined my moment here. (y/n yanks ) stop tugging me along with you, the guest are looking at us. (y/n your fault ) You're blaming it on me? you are unbelievable.

(walking together sfx ) (background song sfx stop )

Are you happy now that I am standing here with you in front of all these people? (y/n I am) you are?... I wish I could say the same. (y/n stop ) Stop what? (y/n frown ) thank you for reminding me to stop frowning on the day of my wedding. (y/n thank ) and you are thanking me for what? (y/n staying ) staying? (y/n yes ) you left me no choice. It dawned on me the more that I struggle, the more harder it will be for me to adjust to married life with you as my partner.

(y/n not ) You are not my partner? (y/n husband ) you prefer that I call you as my husband? (y/n nods ) fine, husband. (y/n ask) You're asking what am I to you? (y/n nods) I would like to say I am your prisoner, but its sounds more acceptable and less nefarious to society when I refer to myself as your wife. (y/n chuckle ) Did I say something funny? (y/n humored ) I humored you? (y/n yes) I should get a reward then (y/n why) why? because you rarely smile and today I made you chuckle. (y/n what ) I want a dog. (y/n why ) why ? because let's face it, after today, you are going to be away all of the time, busy with all of your monkey business and with eliminating people that tries to go against you. I will be left all alone in that cold mansion of yours, a dog will keep me company. (y/n think ) you'll think about it? (y/n nods) okay .

(pink noise distortion sfx, or any sfx that'll sound like all the events are spiraling out of control like youre falling in a deep hole and everything just jumbles. I have the link for this sfx i found one 😅 take your time with this okay. )

It was my wedding day, a girl could only hope for a fairytale ending. After we said our vows, our "I DOs" and sharing a lingering kiss, it all went blurry. All I heard was the sound of gunshots and the crowd of people dispersing in all directions. Screaming... lots of screaming... as I lay on the ground, my white bridal dress now soaked with blood and the lifeless body of my husband on top of me.

The End.