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[M4F] [F4M] The Stranger [SFW] [Paranormal] [Horror] [Creepy] [Thriller] [Suspense]
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thewritevibe is a female looking for a male in Suspense
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Not gender specific 😊👍 This is my FIRST attempt at making this type of script because TBH I am not a fan of anything horror based 😂😣🙈🙉🙊

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° (y/n etc. ) ~> listeners action/your actions/some sfx i think will work.

Setting : Outskirts of the city, y/n got lost in the middle of nowhere and got caught in the rain. Night setting.

Script BELOW ⬇

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(Car windshield wipers sfx, rain sfx, footsteps in rain sfx )

Excuse me... I was just passing through and I couldn't help but notice the distraught look on your face while standing out here in the pouring rain with nothing but a flimsy umbrella on hand, is everything alright?

(y/n lost) You're lost? (y/n nods) to where do you plan on going? (y/n tells ) well... I hate to be the messenger of bad news but you took the wrong turn at the intersection. You should've taken a right turn instead of taking the left.

(y/n thanks ) Don't thank me, I'm just happy to be of service. Well... I better get going, if you no longer need my help. I don't think the rain would be stopping any moment soon, I should hurry with making my way back home. You sure you'll be alright just standing outside here in the middle of nowhere? (y/n sure) alright, goodbye then, but before I go, I want to point out that you have a flat tire , do you have a spare tire to change it with? (y/n nope) guess its just a bad day for you huh, getting lost... and a flat tire?... sheesh.

(y/n tried) You already tried calling a towing company but theres no reception? that happens here more often than not, living in the outskirts of the city can be a pain in the ass sometimes. So what are you going to do now? (y/n stay) you're going to stay here with your car? are you sure? (y/n yes) okay then I'll leave you be. Take care.

(Walking away sfx for a few sec before y/n calls out )

(y/n ask) What is it? (y/n house) My house?... its just beyond the clearing over there, a couple of minutes walk from here. If things gets worse around here, you could drop by and wait it out in there until the morning.

(y/n come) You're asking if you can come with me? (y/n shy ) no, no, its okay, I live there by myself at the moment. My family are back in the city since our business is situated there, I stayed behind to look after the estate, so you don't have a reason to be shy since its just the two of us.

Before we go... promise me one thing... you will leave once I tell you to leave (y/n okay). okay? okay.

Come on then, follow me ( footsteps in gravel sfx for a few minutes )

(y/n this is it ) We're here, and yes this is it, my great great grandfather built this in honor of his late wife. A 3 storey stone fortified manor, impressive right? (y/n nods ) you'll be in awe once you see the interior inside, let's go in (door opening and closing sfx )

( footsteps walking on wood inside the house sfx for a few sec )

Please, do have a sit, make yourself comfortable while I go in the kitchen to make us some tea (footsteps going to kitchen, wait for awhile)

I'm sorry to keep you waiting, it took some time for the water to boil. Here you go I hope you like chamomile tea ( clanking teacups on the table sfx )

(y/n looked around etc. ) You looked around and you enjoyed looking at the gallery wall? ( y/n nods ) .. its fine you can wander around I don't mind at all (y/n ask ) You want to ask me something? (y/n family ) about my family? (y/n nods ) what do you want to know? (y/n big family) You already saw the photos, so its a yes... I do have a big family, every year my family grows and it became a tradition to add photos on that wall. Its overwhelming seeing them at times but I consider them as heirlooms which makes them very, very precious to me.

How about you? do you have a big family? (y/n tell story ) So you're telling me that youre an only child and that your parents died when you were young?... oh dear... my sincerest apologies, I didn't know. I should've just kept my mouth shut. (y/n its okay )

Uhmmm... wait here, I forgot to get us something to eat. (footsteps going to kitchen, come back after awhile)

I only have some leftover macaroons I hope you don't mind, (y/n love ) you love macaroons? (y/n nods ) good to hear that, here... have some (y/n eats for awhile then stops midway )

Are you okay? you don't look so good ... (y/n sick ) You feel sick? (y/n nods) you probably caught a cold for being out in the rain too long, why don't you take a rest for awhile. I'll just be here... I'll wake you up when dawn breaks and I'll find a way to get you a cab out of here ( y/n sleeps, wait for awhile before adding sfx below )

(12 midnight grandfather clock sfx, sound awakens y/n )

Good youre awake... (y/n ask what place ) did you forget? YOU asked if you could come home with me, so I brought you here. (y/n this isnt) This isnt what? (y/n not the same ) you're telling me this isn't the same place?... are you sure about that? (y/n panic) calm down, panicking won't do you any good.

(y/n want to go home ) You want to go home? this is your home.

(y/n run and tries to open door, wiggling doorknob sfx) Its useless trying to open that door, for I am the only one who can enter and leave this dimension.

(y/n scream help) You can scream all you want but I assure you that no one can hear you. How ungrateful can you be?... I mean... look at this place! endless amounts of blood dripping on every corner, unwavering wails and screams echoing all throughout and the intoxicating smell of dread in every whiff!, this is a horrifyingly beautiful place and you'll be living in here with me for a very, very long time.

(y/n plea ) No matter how hard you plea and cry to me to let you go, I cannot and will not do that, you promised remember?... you promised that you will leave when I tell you to, but fortunately that won't ever happen, I am keeping you here with me ( chuckle )

( y/n ask ) Youre asking what I have here in my hand? isn't it obvious? Its a very special kind of camera,... since you are a member of this "family" now, you need to get your photo and... soul taken.

(y/n looks at the photo wall ) now the gallery wall makes sense to you huh? look at them... all these souls trapped in each frame, they look so fitting to be right in there don't you think so? (y/n crying ) Are you crying because you're jealous? hush now... don't worry... you'll be joining them any time soon.

NOW look at the camera... say cheeseeeee ( camera click sfx ) ( scream sfx )

The End.

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