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This story isn't gender specific.
Just a thought of mine... men can be soft and women can be rough on the edges too right? hmmm.
Legends :
° 📷 camera sfx ° 💼 scowering bag sfx ° (y/n... etc ) ~> listener actions/your actions/ some suggested sfx
Setting : Exploring an abandoned building at night because of a dare.
Sfx I think might work :
° owl sound sfx outside ° cricket sound sfx outside ° water dripping sfx inside building. ° stair/door creaks ° floor creaks sfx ° running on wood sfx
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Are you positively sure that you want to do this? (y/n yes) I think this is a bad idea, we should head back home instead (y/n go without me) are you fucking kidding me right now? you expect me to leave you alone in this dilapidated god forsaken place?! not a fucking chance.
(y/n asks if youre mad ) You're asking me if I'm mad? of course I am mad! what were you thinking when you accepted this stupid dare anyways?! (y/n i wasnt ) right! you weren't thinking! you just mindlessly made your own bed and now I have no choice but to lay down on it with you. Wherever you go, I go, whatever you do, I'll be there with you... remember? Let's just do this before I change my mind.
(y/n gives phone) whats this? you want me to take your photo? (y/n yes) but why? (y/n explains) documentation? for what?... proof that you are doing this? (y/n nods) I have a better idea! since I am doing this with you, lets just take a selfie together it'll be fine, come closer... 1, 2, 3... smile 📷
(y/n smacks you ) Ow! what was that for? (y/n scowls ) I can't help it if my middle finger have a mind of its own, better send it to your so called "friends" already, so we can get started and be out of this place as soon as possible.
And what is our objective again? (y/n explains) so all we have to do is to find and retrieve whatever it is that they hid inside this building? (y/n nods ) but what if its a dead body? (y/n scared ) I am not trying to scare you! I am just... just trying to... mentally prepare you for the endless possibilities that are waiting for us inside.
Give me the map (y/n gives map) who the fuck drew this? my 4yo niece can draw better than this piece of shit (y/n stares) what? its the truth! oh wait...hold this for a sec, I just have to get some stuff inside my backpack that we can use. 💼
(y/n criticize you ) What? you expect me to just walk right in there unprepared? nuh-uh. Come here, let me strap this on your head, stand still will you? (y/n its tight) its too tight? well too bad! If I loosen the straps on this headlamp it might come off once you get spooked AF and run like the wind out of this place, now... repeat after me "I will not loosen the straps unless we're already outside" (y/n epeats ) good. (y/n flashlight is better) A flashlight? believe me... if I let you use a flashlight, you'd just end up hurling it at something or someone, before running blindly at pitch black for your dear life like a loose canon.
Hand over the map (y/n no ) No?! you know damn well that between the two of us I am the one who is not easily rattled and with the way you're gripping my hands right now, you'd end up tearing it before we're even inside, you have sweaty palms as well! sweat and a thin piece of paper don't go too well together, so... give it to me (y/n gives map ).
This is it!... time to go inside, you have one last chance to back out (y/n annoyed ) I was only asking, you don't have to be a sourpuss about it.
( footsteps walking towards the building, creak door sound whilst opening it )
Whew... this place is an eyesore both inside and out. You know, I've heard alot of ghost rumors thats been happening in this place but since I'm a skeptic I just brush it off ... this was also featured on the local news in one of their Halloween episodes remember? we even watched it together (y/n ask you to STFU ) You want me to shut up? fine... fine, we'll have it your way this time.
(y/n check the map ) alright I'm checking, I'm checking... according to this ugly map that your friends drew, we should be heading up to the 4th floor and... (y/n and? ) wait... there are two X marked spots in here though, one in the basement and one on the 4th floor... (y/n says friends are assholes) I agree they are total assholes I guess they're trying to keep us in here a little longer than expected.
So what shall we do? (y/n split up) you want us to split up because it'd be faster to find the item? okay. (y/n will go to basement ) and you'll go down the basement? are you trying to put on a brave act right now or what? (y/n annoyed ) fine, you'll be the one going down the basement and I'll be searching on the 4th floor.
Here... take the map (y/n refuse) take it, I don't need it, you need it more than I do and besides I already took a photo of it with my phone for reference, just in case I get lost, which I doubt would happen.
(y/n hesitates to tell you something) what is it tell me? (y/n explains ) sooo... you want me to stay on call with you the entire time while we search both areas separately and not hang up until we meet right back at this spot, is that it? (y/n nods) okay baby...
( 📞 ring... on call, whilst still together )
You go ahead first I'll keep a lookout and wait til you go down the stairs before heading up, stay safe okay? (y/n nods and heads to opposite direction... you wait a few minutes in the spot )
dialogue in your head ~> " in 5...4...3...2...1 "
(running/panting sfx .. y/n comes running back to you)
(y/n stop laughing ) I am not laughing!... but you almost had me convinced that you're going to do it all by yourself! (y/n im scared ) I can see that you are scared! its showing no matter how hard you try not to. I knew you were already shitting your pants the moment we got out of the car!!!
(y/n what to do?) Let's just do this together okay? (y/n nods) now come with me scaredy cat, I have a pretty good feeling that what we are looking for is in the basement. (y/n ask how do you know ) Do you think your friends will risk their lives climbing up those rickety stairs over there? (y/n NO)
Come on lets head down.
These stairs here looks more solid than the other one, a bit creaky... but alot safer. Careful...they are quite slippery too because of the moss. ( creaky stairs sfx )
Here we are... we better start searching... (rustling/moving stuff around sfx )
(y/n found it) You found what? Is that it? (y/n nods ) is that what I think it is?! (y/n funny) funny? this isnt funny! you need to reevaluate your friends or I'll rearrange their faces on a daily basis! your so called "friends"... are piece of shits.
They know you are too proud to admit that you're scared being inside this place, they tried to sabotage you by marking 2 different spots in this map (slam map on table sfx) you know what upsets me even more?! the idea that you couldve gotten yourself hurt because of the latter.
Grab that fucking dildo and lets go!
(y/n worried )Don't worry... I'll be alright once we get back home safely. Come on. (y/n is sorry) Don't be sorry ... you know what? I just realized...(y/n what) you're too good for your own good and I have to look after you even more my love ( kiss y/n )
The End.
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