This post has been de-listed
It is no longer included in search results and normal feeds (front page, hot posts, subreddit posts, etc). It remains visible only via the author's post history.
Our Foolish Heart (Reverse Comfort) (F4M) (Realization and acceptance)
(Starting background SFX: muffled late-night club music) (The female is drinking whiskey but sheâs not drunk)
Female: (drink a shot of whiskey, put down the shot glass to the wooden table then sigh heavily) âWhat the fuck/ heck am I doing?â (sighing again and putting her head down in frustration, then looking at front again) âBartender, another one pleaseâ (raising the shot glass)
Look around the club and look at the male whoâs drinking beside you.
Female thought dialogue: âHeâs not intoxicated yet, Iâm surprise he can handle the poison his drinking, his like drinking from a dispenser, he just got his whiskey and heâs asking for more?â
(She chuckled at the sight of the boy that was drinking)
Female: âHey, how are you?â (The male answer heâs doing fine, and ask you how were you doing)
Female: (Brief pause) Iâm good, I see you drinking your sorrows away and youâre alone, Iâm impressed that you can handle the drinks and the solitude, may I join you?â (The male complies as he accepts your invitation)
Female: âThank youâ (Brief pause as the male compliments you on how you are able to see through his situation) âI have sharp eyes? Thank you, I mean weâre the only ones here so itâs not that hardâ
(Whiskey begins to refill your shot glass) So⌠youâre alone may I ask why? (The male look at you) (you doubted at first but you asked anyway) âIf itâs not too personal to askedâ
Female: (Brief pause) âJust trying to escape life? Huh, me tooâ (She chuckled and begins to smile)
âEscaping life, what does that mean? You got dumped?â (She said with a hint of laughter) (She drinks her whiskey and put down the shot glass)
(The male looked at you, holding his shot glass then asked âwhatâs your version of escaping your life?â)
Female: (The female looked down at her shot glass and sigh in defeat) âYeah, I got dumped too and I made the same mistake againâ (shaking her head and quietly chuckled) (The male looked at you, you looked at each other)
Female: âWhat?â (The male asked âagain?â) (female chuckled) âYeah. What Do You Believe in that saying?; âYouâre my first and Lastâ Thatâs bullshitâ (Jokingly reply while hiding the pain at the process) (He fixes his posture replying that too happened to him)
Female: (sigh) âYou want to talk about it?â carefully asked the listener. The listener didnât even hesitate to say no.
Female: âCâmon tell me, Iâll share my broken dreams if you doâ (Chuckled) âWeâre not grade schoolers, we can tell whatâs bugging our minds, weâre adults now, and beside Iâm not that kind person that wanders around everywhere telling anyone about personal shitâ
(The male chuckled he doesnât even know you)
Female: Iâm (boyish name/just name), nice to meet you, whatâs your name? (Male tells his name) Huh, thatâs very fitting (Female gently taps the wooden table getting ready to talk about the past) âNow I know what youâre thinking, (Name) is not a girlâs name, I get that a lot from strangersâ female let out a small laugh.
SFX: Bartender refills the femaleâs shot glass
Female thoughts: âWell somethingâs odd, weâre not drinking and ordering either, I wasnât complaining about it but I need a break from it, what other way to get away from the whiskey than classic conversationâ (Female drink the shot in one go then put down the shot glass) âtime to start a conversation if I want this to lastâ
Female: âSoâŚwhat happened between you and her?â
Female thoughts POV: âHe knew heâll get hurt eventually, but he still did it, he still learned to
Loveâ it was one of those things we yearn, a sense of company, A sense of belongingness. We
Know. We will get hurt, but we tried to forget it, not mind it, because, it hurts to the core, we donât
love at the past nor the future, we love at the present, we tend to forget that, but the pain catches
ups, and follows later, he didnât know why, why are we realizing this now?â
Female: âWe never did stop learning in the first place, learning to love again that isâ (Male asked
about the females break up story) âMe? WellâŚBetween me and my ex, looking back then, I was
the only one who made a mistake or to be real, the victim of a relationship, itâs pretty obvious, we
didnât break even, the one whoâs been hurt the most is the one who loves the greatestâ
Female: Him and I lasted for 3 years, I didnât expect to end in a dayâ (The male drinks his whiskey.
It got your attention) âYouâre awfully drinking too many?â (The male pauses) âYouâre not a light
weight, are you?â (Female chuckle. âNoâ The male replied) âSo are you here often or just for
tonight?â You say. No, just for tonight. How about you?â (The male replied âJust for tonight tooâ
female doubted the male, and asked jokingly âWhat does that mean? Youâre a player?â (Female
leaned forward to the male, causing the maleâs seat to move and made a noise, causing the male
to almost crash to the floor, but he retains his balance and now embarrass)
(The male responded quickly ââWhat? N-No, no Iâm notâ)
(Female giggled then laugh, this made the male listener laugh,)
Female: âIâm sorry, but your reaction was priceless, but donât take it personallyâ said with a
bit of laughter left (He smiles at you, and turn to the table waiting for a refill, then he frowns,
female notices this and begin to regret the assumption earlier) ââHey, I said I was sorryâ she said
âDonât be madâ
(Female said with a apologetic tone, then not long the bartender calls the last round
for beers and whiskey before closing. This made the female and male sad) âAlready?â
you asked.
Female Thought POV: âGuess it's for the best, I think weâre immune to the effect of alcohol, its
not making us drunk, it's making us more depressed than neededâ (Female looked at her shot
glass, ices were still present at the glass, female tried to shake it slowly, looking at the glass for
leftover whiskey liquid)
(The club music is getting louder, the female notices this and had an idea)
Female: âWe havenât talked about ourselves yetâ (The male replied âDidnât we introduce
ourselves earlier?â) âNot our broken dreams, dummy, who we areâ (The female notices that the
music keeps getting louder)
Female: (Stood up from the bar stool) âItâs loud in here, you want to take a walk outside?â
(Skips to outside, SFX background: two persons walking and quite city noises)
Female: âWhere you asked?â female grew a smile, and happily saying âTo my special placeâ
(SFX cold wind) âIt's cold innitâ
Female: âWhile Iâm freezing cold out here, letâs play a game?â (The male complies) âGood, it
called a wall city, itâs a city in a cityâ (Male asked If its in our country) âYes its in our country, of
courseâ (Male replied âIntramurosâ) âYes, it is in fact, Intramurosâ (The female snaps her finger
but fail miserably) (The male laughs) âHey donât laugh, I was going for a snap, I wanted to be
clever, okayâ Female chuckled âYouâre a bully, you know?â
(SFX: The city noises become silent slowly as you and the male approach the walled city, the
sound is replaced with a festive noises and people having fun)
Female: âCâmon letâs go!â Said happily as she grabbed the maleâs hand and went inside the city.
(Sometime later. The SFX Background festive and people having fun slowly disappear, and
replace with cricket noises)
Female: âThat was fun, right? Letâs sit by the bench at the cathedral, yeah?â
(SFX: Walking couple)
Female: âHow about there?â (The SFX: Walking couple stops)
Female: (Sigh Happily) âŚ. âThat was fun, I never knew that side of yours. You donât have to thank me for that, I should be the one though, think of it as an appreciation from earlier, never had someone who could lecture me, in my middle age ass yearsâ (The male thanks you anyways) âReally? I never met a person like youâ (Female laughs, but then realized something)
Female: (Sighing tiredly) âI wish everyday would be like thisâŚ. âI wish time would go back, back to the days, life was so much betterâ
Female: (The male agreed with the female) "Back then, we'll wake up and we don't have any problems worrying us. No responsibilities and no doubts, but as we get older weâŚ. we look back, wishing the days of our youth will return us, or at least the feelings. Those days were something else, nothing prepared us for the future, I wish we could go back in timeâŚ. But it doesn't work that way.... We just have to move on with the world" (The male was glad that the female realized it) "Yeah, you'll figure it out sooner or later"
(Sfx: Cold wind passes by then the male gives his jacket to the female) "What? (Male helped the female to wear the jacket) âOhâŚ. Thank you, your jacket is comfy...I like it"
(The male looked up to the sky, the moon and the stars, looking deep into it, the female notices this, female getting worried)
Female: "Do you like the sky that much? âŚYou looked at the sky to remember someone? .... Where are they now? ...You donât know?" (The male returned to being quiet)"Hey...You okay?" Asked the female worriedly. "You're just baffled? You looked like you're reliving the daysâ
Female: "You know; you should stay here... with me. (The male looked at the female. the female gets closer to the male) "You might find something valuableâ (The male asked âWhatâ The female sigh) âLetâs walk for a bit, yeah?â (Pause then SFX: couple walking) âWhatâs bothering you?......What I talked about earlier, makes sense? What are you saying?â
Female: (SFX couple walking stops) âValue whatâs in front of you?... I know that but⌠you know what Iâm talking about? âŚ. I trust you butâŚ. We were there. We are human, we always seek something, itâs not selfishness, whatâs bad if we want to seek something just for ourselves? âŚYes thatâs true, and you seem wise.
Female: âLook, we know what happened, we learn to love, weâve been hurt, and we move onâŚ. But arenât you afraid of what might happen again? To learn to love again and be broken againâ (Said the female in a scared/nervous voice) âDonât you have any doubts that the person you will meet in the future might be the same person that broke your heart?â
Female: You know what Iâm talking about? Then you would know that the pain from the past can never be forgotten! .... Donât let the past be the boundary of your future? (Female begins to cry and shake) âBut how?! ⌠I keep holding on⌠but every time I do, it keeps getting harder and harderâ (The male hugged the female suddenly) âWhat?â (Female notices this and cry on the maleâs chest. âHow? 3xâ Asked the female. âYouâll be here for me?â (Sniffs)âŚ. (Sniff) Weâll face the future together? âŚ. You know me enough to give me your trustâ (Sniff)
(Female letâs go slowly from the maleâs arms then punch (punch Sfx) him on the shoulder)
Female: (Sniffs then giggle) âThatâs for making me sadâŚ. But thank youâ (Female stays silent)
Female: âWhatâs wrong? Iâm just gathering the courage to do something?â (Giggle)
Female: âWhat is it you asked?â (Female kiss the male) âThatâs for making me fall for youâ
âYou want to do it again? Okay (Giggle) âI love you, okay? Donât let me go, everâ
(Hello and thank you for reading this, this script is my ever script and submission here, if you have any opinion or question about the script dm me and finally yes...you can use this for YouTube and etc... just credit me and we'll be good, as always thank you)
Subreddit
Post Details
- Posted
- 4 years ago
- Reddit URL
- View post on reddit.com
- External URL
- reddit.com/r/ASMRScriptH...