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The listener is one of the City’s most powerful superheroes. One day, their roommate barges in with an issue: she thinks she might have superpowers, too. Since she doesn’t want to go to the official testing center, so the listener decides to help her test out her powers. Her power is mind control, and unfortunaly, she isn't able to resist the temptations that come with it.
It starts of with two good friends bantering and testing the limits what she can do together, but then it takes a sudden dark turn when she decides to take control for real. She overpowers the listener, and in the bad ending, it ends on making them sleep. In the good/hopeful ending, she changes her mind at the last moment and grows remorseful.
Script
Roughly 1900 words. There is one gendered line, with an alternative 4A line provided.
I hope you enjoy!
This was inspired by Lulucille's "A Reliable Adversary", and by u/Acrobatic_Still7483's amazing Shy Superheroine series.
I owe a debt of grattitude to many people for this one. Neetzie, Acrobatic_Still7483, KateriWilde and another anonymous redditor were all so kind to betaread and gave a lot of very useful feedback! Thank you all very much, this script wouldn't be half as good or as fun to write without you!
Feedback and constructive criticism is always very welcome!
Finally, monetization: On Youtube is fine, for anything else please check with me in advance.
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