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Your oblivious best friend isnāt getting the hint you love and adore them with all your heart. Hopefully, a love letter will help you escape this friendzone hell. (~1200 words)
If this looks familiar it's because I rewrote last year's Valentine's Day script Of Course I Admire You and switched the roles of the speaker and listener.
(Don't look if you want an unbiased read) Inspired by Arataki Itto my beloved
Important Notes: Feel free to change or make additions to small aspects of this work such as the tags, pronouns, title, etc.! VA goes by BEST FRIEND and the listener is LISTENER. LISTENER responses are ā...ā
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FADE IN
EXT. OUTSIDE CLASSROOM BUILDING - CAMPUS WALKWAY - LATE MORNING
Foot traffic shuffles past the LISTENER and BEST FRIEND as they walk in the same direction after class.
BEST FRIEND
I canāt believe the professor lectured for an hour about one slide! I felt like I was gonna die from boredom and kept checking the time. Literally nobody was taking notes.
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Huh? What'd you write?
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Ohh, yeah, drawing the diagram was a smart move. But at least class wasnāt completely boring.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND
What do you mean āwhat do you mean?ā I got my first-ever candy gram! I canāt believe our school actually does these, but Iām not complaining. Too bad the gram didnāt say who itās from thoughā¦ Anyways, here, I got these mini chocolate cakes from the supermarket across the street. I bought five so take as many as you want. For real, theyāre making my backpack super bulky and they might be melting.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND
Ughh, yes they make me bloated but you just gotta live life a little! Valentineās Day only comes once a year.
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Well yeah, of course I wanna know who sent me my first-ever gram. Like, look at it.
They flaunt the legendary gram in their hand.
BEST FRIEND (CONT'D)
Itās got such a cute bow and good-quality candy. But, if anything, maybe it was sent to me by accident. But I donāt really care who itās from unless itās from the person who I hope itās from.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND
Youāre saying you wanna know who I hope sent it in case they were really the one who sent it and my hopes and dreams come true? Nuh-uh, canāt tell you.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND
No. Youāll tease the hell outta me!
[...?]
BEST FRIEND
What?! I do not have a crush on a professor, and itād be super weird if they sent a gram in the first place. Besides, youāre the one who actually had a crush on a professor.
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Really? Then maybe it was a nightmare I had. I was actually so worried youād run off and leave me behindā¦ for a professor of all people. I mean, I was worried just cuz weāre good friends and all.
The listenerās heart drops when they feel the mighty sting of the friendzone.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
You good? Did I say something weird? Or are you upset that Iām not telling you who my crush is even though weāre besties?
The listener scoffs and rolls their eyes.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Roll your eyes all youād like, but Iāll call ya anything. My bro, homeslice, homie, fam, buddy, pal, the one who shares my brain cells. Iāll even call you my Valentine so we at least both have one. But honestlyā¦ Iām surprised youāre not dating anyone.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND
(chuckling)
Oh come on, you know why.
(normal)
Youāre really sweet and fun to hang out with. I feel like I actually connect with you and we justā¦ āgetā each other. Itās almost freaky how you understand all my references. And whenever you say the lyrics of a song, itās like our minds connect via Bluetooth and we have the same song stuck in our heads, which is really cruel by the way because then I suffer along with you.
(thinking out loud)
Maybe I should buy you a Valentineās card and write down whatās great about you so whenever youāre down you can read it and cheer up.
The listener points out a wad of folded paper within the contents of the best friendās candy gram bag.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
How did I not notice that? And whatās it doing being buried under all the candy?
They take out the folded paper.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Damn, this paper is folded like a million times. Maybe itāll say who sent it.
The paper is finally unfolded.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Aww, itās a letter! Hmm, but still no name. Letās sit on the bench over here and I can read it out loud.
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Whatās so wrong about reading it out loud? Iām sure itāll be super sweet. Now sit already.
The listener sighs and sits.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
There we go. And if it makes you feel better, Iāll only read out the important bits.
A beat. The tension swells.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
(reading out loud)
āItās like we share the same brain cells and I can always be myself around you. I donāt care about how loud or cringey we are in public when Iām with youā¦ youāre insanely sweet and deserve the worldā¦ knowing you, let me make this clearā¦ā
The paper shakes in their hand as their face turns pink.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
O-oh wowā¦ it uhmā¦ they said that they love me. And, I never thought someone would say that they admire me.
(chuckling)
Iām justā¦ me.
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Heh, you're really saying thatās admirable on its own? You really are too sweet.
Another beat.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Iām getting the feeling you know who this is from.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND
Nuh-uh, donāt turn it on me. I told you Iām not telling you who I hope itās from. But it looks like Iām right, you do know who itās from.
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Yeah, yeah. Call me ācluelessā all youād like, but itāll only force you to tell me directly.
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Youāre kiddingā¦ youāre not. Fine, youāre on.
The two ready their positions.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Rock, paper, scissors, shoot!
They lost.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Damn it. Fine. You wanna know who I hope itās from? Here goes.
They take a deep inhale, but then quickly chicken out.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
(indecipherable mutter)
Iām hoping itās from you.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
I saidā¦
(mutter)
Iām hoping itās from you.
[...?]
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
I said I hope itās from you! I justā¦ wellā¦
[...]
A beat. The best friend fully absorbs their words.
BEST FRIEND
Itās... amazing hearing you say that instead of me just reading itā¦ I love you too. And I admire you too.
(chuckling)
Youāre my best friend for crying out loud, and now even more.
(teasing)
Ehehehehe, but you went all that way to give me a sappy little letter and candy? And you said āI love youā first too. Iām honored.
The listener rolls their eyes and looks away.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Oho, and now youāre getting all flustered. Well, now I can say whatās always been on my mind. I love your teasing, the way you roll your eyes at me, and your oh-so-cute laugh.
[...!]
BEST FRIEND
Thereās no way Iām stopping. Or, you can always shut me up with a kiss. If you arenāt too shy to do so of course.
[...?]
The best friend practically chokes from hearing the listenerās bold proposition but tries to play it cool anyway.
BEST FRIEND
I uhm- ahem. Whatās your plan exactly if I do come back to your apartment? I mean, thereās more privacy and all and of course, I want our first kiss to be specialā¦
[...]
BEST FRIEND
Hell yeah! Watching Princess Diaries sounds great.
(softly)
But uhm, could Iā¦ ?
They lean over and plant a soft kiss on their forehead. Now the two are all smiles.
BEST FRIEND (CONTāD)
Heh, couldnāt resist. I always found your forehead just so kissable. Well, since weāre done with classes for the rest of the day, shall we go and gorge on these mini chocolate cakes, my Valentine?
FADE OUT.
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