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Context: Your father did his best to raise you after your mother left, despite your difficult medical condition. He did his best to run his criminal organization at the same time and ended up realizing quite quickly he had to choose. So, you were left to your own devices, left to play with the young men he'd bring in to do his dirty work. Some, you never saw again. Most left. But Evan stayed, even when he should have gone, and your father made sure he paid for it, even to this day. Now he's brought Evan home injured, and you know how the night is going to end... like it or not. Someone is going to die tonight.
Setting: Home
Tags:[MM4F][Established Relationship][Criminal Father Speaker][Injured Ex-BF Speaker][Closeted Vampire Listener][Injury/Fight][Hard Angst]to[Happy Ending?][Confession][Criminal Underworld][Southern Accents][Power Play][Vampires][TW: Death/Injury/Murder]
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[F] = Your father
[E] = Evan, a childhood friend, ex, and proud bullet-wound owner
[Scene opens in a quiet, dark home]
[SFX: Late night ambiance - deep South, many crickets/frogs and an old car rushing over gravel]
[You peer out the window as your room is flooded with light and see your fatherâs car rush into view, peeling to a stop before he hops out with a young man under his arm]
[F] âDOT! WAKE UP, WEâVE HAD A SHOOTINâ!â
[Pause!]
[You hurry downstairs and meet him at the door. Heâs carrying a once-good friend⌠Evan]
[Pause!!]
[F] âMove, girl! Evan took a damned shot to his gut and I need to patch him. Help him get to the couch, hold pressure on the wound as best you can, and keep him awake. Got it?!â
[P-PauseâŚ]
[SFX: Them getting Evan to the couch]
[E, weakly] â...ay, DotâŚâ
[PauseâŚ]
[F] âDonât you dare talk to that idiot. You know what happens if you do. Just keep pressure on the wound while I go get the damned sewing kit.â
[SFX: Your father storming away]
[...]
[E, weakly] â...DotâŚ? You thereâŚ?â
[You pat his shoulder gently]
[E] âGood⌠Sorry, I got blood all over the couch. And the car seat. And that guyâs dog⌠Wasnât expecting to get shot THEN jumped THEN have to explain myself to the poor lady at the pet store while I used their phone to call your old manâŚâ
[...]
[E] â...I know, I know⌠Did it to myself⌠Well, it gives me an excuse to see you again, at least⌠So⌠how have you been? Had a good day? Still taking them online classes?â
[...]
[E] â...Câmon, just⌠one word⌠Please? I still-â.
[SFX: Your Father storming back, muttering angrily]
[F] âMove. Fucking idiot, you know that, boy? Thatâs what you are! I told you to keep a low profile! But no, you had to fucking go and rile up Morrisâs boys enough that Iâm gonna have to watch my back for months!â
[E, quietly] âYes, sir⌠Sorry, sir⌠Nngh, Christ this hurtsâŚâ
[Your father gets the needle heated with a lighter, shaking his head]
[SFX: A lighter being lit]
[F] âSwear to God⌠I thought you were one of the smart ones before you got too familiar. I chase you away from my kid a few times and now itâs like youâve got a damned death wish.â
[Pau-]
[F] âGirl, shut your mouth. You shouldâve known better, too! Youâre meant to be worried about your studies and your future, not hanging out with some low-life I keep on the payroll for God knows what reason!â
[...]
[E] â...Câmon, Mister L. It wasnât Dotâs fault⌠I got it in my head that I was good enough for her. She didnât do anything wrongâŚâ
[F] âOh, I am aware, boy. I am aware. Havenât thought of much else for seven damned years⌠How a family can be torn apart by horny, teen idiots. But, donât you worry, Evan. Iâll fix it. Iâll fix all of thisâŚâ
[Your father gives you a side-eye that sends chills down your spine]
[F] âGo upstairs. Dinnerâll be ready, soon.â
[...]
[F] â...Did you just tell me, your father, ânoâ?â
[Pause!]
[E] â...You aim to kill me, huh? Issat it?â
[F, ice cold] âGodamned right.â
[E, quiet and sad] â...You used to call me your sonâŚâ
[F] âAye, and then you had to make it weird, Evan. You had to go after my daughter, even when I told you no to every âblessingâ talk you asked.â
[Pause.]
[F, amused] âOh, you wonât let me, huh? Thatâs cute, Dot. Thatâs really cute.â
[...]
[F] âOh, I havenât forgotten what you are, girl, or what your mother was⌠Vampire or not, youâre a weak one. Iâve made sure of itâŚâ
[Evan lets out a weak, pained laugh]
[E] âRookie mistakeâŚâ
[F] âExcuse me?â
[E] â...Mister, how do you reckon Iâve been bleeding all this blood this whole time without dyingâŚ? Especially without triggering a vampire who hasnât eaten in a bit?â
[SFX: Evan standing]
[Evan stands, cold as ice as he lets a few empty blood bags flutter to the ground. You stand with him]
[F] â...Fuck.â
[E] âDidnât even blink an eye when I offered to start doing night jobs. Only commented I looked a little paler, huh? You were as good a mentor and boss as you were a father.â
[Pause.]
[The tension in the old house is immense. Unrelenting]
[E] â...Left your gun in the kitchen, hm?â
[F, bitter] âI did.â
[E] âYou gonna let us leave peacefully?â
[F] âOver my dead body.â
[...Pause]
[Evan sighs]
[E] â...Go get your things, Dot. The carâll be waiting here in a few minutesâŚâ
[F] âWh-... You planned this down to the last fucking detail! HowâŚ?! How in the Hell did an idiot like you commit a mutiny with this level of skill?!â
[E, coldly] âDid you ever consider I wasnât as dumb as I let on, Mister L? Did you ever consider that I got into crime out of something else besides desperation? By your own rule⌠never underestimate your opponent, right? Especially ones you donât even know youâre fighting.â
[Pause]
[F] â...Huh⌠Iâll be damned.â
[E] âThatâs the idea⌠The one card you have over me is Dot. If she asks me to spare you⌠I will. Iâm willing to walk away with her and pretend you never existed. I wonât touch you unless you mess with us. Last offer.â
[Pause]
[E, affectionately] âNo, baby, you go on and pack. I got this.â
[Pause <3]
[You run upstairs and get the suitcase you hid under your bed months ago. Itâs quiet, save for one single, distant:]
[SFX: A muffled thud somewhere in the [Pause]]
[You hurry back down and see your father laid out on the ground, still]
[PauseâŚ]
[E] â...I made it quick, donât worry. Câmon, letâs get the Hell out of here. Itâs time for a nice, rare steak dinner in the cityâs finest steakhouse. Then, my lady will get to see her new apartment with a wonderful view of the water.â
[Pause <3]
[He wraps his arms around you, smiling deviously]
[E] âThank you for your patience, my nibbly missus⌠Now that I can put my arms around you whenever I want, itâs going to be hard running an entire criminal organization⌠but at least weâll be running it together, hm?â
[Pause! <3]
[E] âEheh⌠love you, too, my eternal. Câmon, this place will blow up in ten. We need to get some distance.â
[Pause]
[With that, and one last look at the body on the floor, you set out toward the rest of your life with the new most dangerous man in the state. Your boyfriend <3]
[SFX: Fade out on them driving off/ an eventual explosion if desired to stretch time]
[To be continued?]
Note: I am still sick but trying to write a little T w T Would folks like more of these two terrifying cuties? Lemme know <3
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