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Summary: As Barlow lays siege to Angora, you and Morgan flee attempt to make your escape on board the Rose. However, when Barlow springs a trap, the two of you finally come face-to-face with the Dread King himself. Morgan refuses to hand you over, and is ready to fight to the death for your freedom, even if it costs him his own life. However, youâre not about to let your captain die for you.
CW: violence, stabbing, threats, innuendo, yandere elements, storms/thunder/lightning, Pirate Tropes Galore
Characters:
- Morgan (M) - Male; pirate; captain of the Black Rose; in debt to the pirate king. Acts ruthless/harsh, but has a soft and gentle side that is emerging more and more as he falls for the Listener.
- Barlow (B) - Male; the pirate king. Ruthless, sly, and domineering; thrives on manipulation and control. Has kept Morgan in indentured servitude for the last decade. Considers the mer-Listener to be the ultimate "treasure", and wants Morgan to hand her over as the final payment for his debt.
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- Gender-flipping and small tweaks are okay (e.g., changing pronouns, leaving out/changing curse words), but no large edits are permitted.
- Feel free to use music or insert sound effects if youâd like. Any sound effects given are suggestionsâuse at your discretion. *Sound effects in bold, set apart by asterisks\*
- Any dialogue or reactions given by the Listener are purely for the benefit of the VA, to help them feel like they have something to respond to while theyâre acting. Listener reactions in italics.
- Please let me know if you have any questions!
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\distant sound of cannons firing; background panic/commotion\**
M: (frantic; out of breath) There she is! Come on, Angelfish! Weâre almost there!
[...]
M: What does it look like weâre doin!? Weâre gettinâ the hell out of here! Donât be afearedâonce weâre on board the Rose, not even he can catch us. If we can justâ!
[...]
M: What?! Noâto hell with me! Weâve got to get you out of here! If we can just get out to sea, you can throw yourself overboard andâ
[...]
M: NO! Donât you understand!? Iâd rather be in debt to him me whole damn life than see him lay a finger on you! He can drag me down to Davy Jones himself if he wantsâI donât care. So long as youâre safe, thatâs all that matters. Now stop arguinâ! Get yourself up that gangplank; you hear me!? Thatâs an order!
\running footsteps; grunts as Morgan and the Listener climb aboard, only to be greeted with an empty deck\**
M: What theâ? Where is everyone? (calls) Dawson!? Beckworth!? Greaves!? Get yer greasy hides out here, or so help meâ!
B: (calls) NOW!
\cries and shouts of a mob\**
M: Aaaargh! Damn it! Angelfishâget behind me!
\more shouts, as Morgan and the Listener are surrounded\**
M: GrrrrâŚscurvy dogs! Got you doinâ his dirty work for him, does he? Too much of a coward to come and face me himself!?
\footsteps\**
B: \evil chuckle** Mayhap I was just waitinâ for the right moment.
M: Barlow! How the hell did you know where we were!? What do you want!?
B: Well, wellâŚif it isnât me old friend, the great âNo-Mercyâ Morgan. Looks like I was rightâif you want to catch a rat, youâve got to track it back to its nest.
M: Answer me question, you bastard! Just what do you want with us!?
B: Methinks you already know the answer to that, donât ye, lad? (sees the Listener) So this is the creature, eh? Begginâ your pardon, milady. Captain Romulus Barlow, at your service. Or perhaps ye might know me better as the Dread King. (leers) MmmâŚaye. I see Perkins wasnât exaggeratinââyou truly are the greatest beauty a pirate ever laid eyes on.
M: Perkins!? (rage) Of courseâŚthat double-crossinâ little scab! Iâll string him up by his insides!
B: \chuckle** Youâre welcome to tryâŚthough you might have some trouble findinâ all the pieces. After all, the only thing I hate more than a thief is a turncoat. Still, he had some mighty interesting things to say, before the end.
M: What did he tell you?
B: He said youâd had quite a successful raid the last time around. He also mentioned youâd found something of tremendous valueâŚand he didnât know if you could be counted on to hand it over, as you should.
M: Donât tell me you believed him? That rat would say anythinâ to get himself made captain!
B: Aye, so he would. StillâŚI canât deny thereâs been a change in you, Morgan. I can feel somethinâ shiftinâ in you, like the wind in me sails. I figured it was time we had a little chat, to remind you of where your loyalties lie.
M: Loyalty? Just what have you done to deserve my loyalty, you bilge-suckinâ bastard!? I shouldâve been free years ago! We all shouldâve!
B: Watch your mouth, lad.
M: NO! Iâm through with it; you hear me!? All these years youâve been bleedinâ us dry, always tellinâ us weâre nearly there. Well, you can take your lies and shove âem up your arse!
B: \dark chuckle** Seems youâre still the same hotheaded pup that you were, all those years ago. Very well. You want your freedom, do ye? Then letâs see you prove yourself one last time. Give me the girl, and weâll call it even.
M: Back off, Barlow. Sheâs mine.
B: Oh, really? So Perkins was right. OrâŚis it more than that? Donât tell meâŚhas the great âNo-Mercyâ Morgan actually gone soft?
M: Shut up!
B: Donât lie to me, lad. I can practically see Cupidâs arrow stickinâ out of that pathetic heart oâ yours. I thought I taught you better than this.
M: Shut your damn mouth! Sheâs nothinâ to me!
B: Then it should be easy to part with her, eh? Whatâs one small piece oâ treasure, when it's the rest o' yer life at stake?
M: How do I know this isnât just one more of your lies?
B: I swear it on me name. Hand her over, and youâre a free man, at last. I might even leave this town standinâ, if Iâm feelinâ generous. (sinister) Otherwise, you know whatâll happen, donât you? AyeâŚâtwould be a shame if you met the same fate as your dear mother. If only she hadn't tried to shield ye...but no reason for ye both to die a senseless death. Last chance, Morgan. Give her to me.
Pause.
M: âŚAlright, then. Shake on it?
B: \chuckle** Thatâs a good lad. Just like I taught you, eh? Show no mercy, no matter whaâ
\stabbing noise; cry of pain from Barlow, followed by a scream of rage\**
B: GRAAAH! \blade being drawn\** You filthy rat! Iâll use your skin for a sail!
M: Then so be it! Youâll never touch her, so long as I live!
\clashing of swords; grunts\**
B: Hahânot bad! Still, you forget who youâre dealinâ with. (to his men) Men! Seize him!
\loud shouts from the men\**
M: No! Aaaargh! You cheatinâ bastard!â
\cry of pain from Morgan\**
\blade clatters to the ground\**
B: Thatâs right, men. Hold him tight! (to Morgan) Have ye any last words, Morgan? Mayhap yeâd like to say a final goodbye for your sweet little mer-lass overâ?
Suddenly, the Listener speaks up: âSTOP!!!â
B: âHuh? What was that, milady?
M: Angelfish, NO! Get out of here!
B: Well, well. Just what are you tryinâ to do, lass? You donât really think you can stop me, do you?
[...]
B: Spare him, eh? Why should I? The punishment for mutiny is death. OrâŚhave ye somethinâ to offer in exchange?
[...]
B: Yourself? (laughs) You do realize I could just kill him and take you, donât you? No bargain necessary. StillâŚI like âem feisty. Very well, then. Come here.
M: No! Angelfish! What the hell are you doinâ!?
B: \chuckle** Thatâs a good girl. Itâs been awhile since I had meself a new toy. Iâll warn you, thoughâŚI tend to play rough.
\magic sounds\**
B: Gah! The hell was that!?
\Throughout the following dialogue, the faint sounds of a storm begin, growing progressively stronger\**
B: Tryinâ to pull a fast one on me, eh? Unfortunately for you, itâs gonna take more than a bit oâ magic to bring me down. Still, by all means, keep tryinâ. Iâd be glad for an excuse to punish you later.
M: NO! Let her go!!!
B: (sinister, gleeful) AyeâŚmayhap I was too hasty before. A traitor like him doesnât deserve a quick death. NoâŚbetter to let him live, so he can see just what Iâm gonna do to ye. Now, allow me to show you to your new quarters. If you thought the Rose was impressive, I promise yeâŚsheâs nothinâ compared to the Lost Soul.
\thunder\**
B: Hmm? What theâ? Where did all these clouds come from!?
[...]
B: What? Noâtheyâre only over us? Itâs not possibleâŚhow the hellâ?
\loud clap of thunder; noises of fear from the crew\**
B: Graah! Silence, ye filthy swabs! Youâre really gonna let a little storm intimidate ye!?
[...]
B: (getting desperate) Enough! That be nothinâ but a fairy tale; you hear me!? Iâll hear no talk of so-called âcursesâ! Now, take the traitor to the brig, or I swear, Iâll send ye to the depths faster than ye can say âDavyâ
\even louder clap of thunder\**
\panicked shouting, as the other pirates flee\**
B: Hey! HEY! GET BACK HERE! Yellow-bellied cowardsâIâll have all your hides! (to the Listener; raging) Is this you, then, lass!? Miserable little wretch! Ye forget who I am. I am the Dread KingâŚthe master of the seas! Ye think ye can scare me? Iâll show ye what fear really means!
\lightning strike, accompanied by a scream from Barlow\**
\thunder/lightning/storm sounds fade out\**
Silence.
M: (breathing hard) Angelfish?
Morgan sees the Listener lying motionless on the deck.
M: ANGELFISH!
Morgan runs over to the Listener, holding her.
\Morganâs voice starts to fade out, as the Listener loses consciousness\**
M: (frantic) No! No; stay with me! Stay with me! Come on, Angelfish! It's gonna be alright. You'll be fine; you hear me? Just stay awake! Come on! Stay awake!...Angelfish?...Angelfish!...
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