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Context: Your patient today is Dr. Valente, a top practitioner and doctor in the country. He urgently requested your help after having a fight with his wife. After hearing him out, you almost wish his wife could hear it as well... Maybe it would have been different...
Setting: Dr. Steven's office
Tags:[M4AF][["Two" Listeners][Remorseful Neglectful Husband Speaker][Therapist Listener][Neglected Wife Listener]["Ghost" Listener][Confession][Argument/Fight][Sad][Revelations][TW: Offscreen Suicide Attempt/Neglect/Mentions of Abuse/General Hard Angst]
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[Scene opens in a therapistās office]
[SFX: A clock ticking against a generally calm environment]
[You peer over your clipboard at the older gentleman sitting across from you. His eyes are bloodshot and he looks exhausted]
āThank you for squeezing me into your schedule, Dr. Stevens.ā
[Pause?]
[He shuts his eyes, breath shaky]
āYesā¦ I apologize for being pushy about it, butā¦ my home life has had a bit of a shake-up andā¦ I need helpā¦ā
[The man before you is Dr. Valente, a renowned practitioner. Handsome, well-spoken, and a bit dense, at times. Seeing him this broken is an odd experience]
[Pause?]
[He takes a shaky breath]
ā...My wife and I had a bad fightā¦ and I fear sheās given up on meā¦ā
[Pause?]
ā...I was at home, getting ready for work. She approached me and asked about a sore subjectā¦ One that weād been fighting about for years on end, and I lost my temperā¦ Itās the worst mistake Iāve ever madeā¦ā
[Pause?]
ā...Even knowing youāre my therapist, I still feel like youāll be judging me harshly for this one. Which, I know, no judgment hereā¦ But, she asked about going back to school. We have newborn twins and sheās a stay-at-home mother. Iāve told her, over and over, that I canāt put my career on hold, Iām the sole breadwinner, but she keeps coming at me like thereās a way to negotiate things. I justā¦ā
[Pauseā¦?]
ā...I told her that she shouldnāt have asked for kids if she didnāt want to help raise them, and that I wouldnāt have my sons be abandoned like I was just because she was holding a grudge against me for things I couldnāt controlā¦ā
[...]
[He looks down, deeply troubled]
ā...I regretted it the instant the words left my mouthā¦ The second I saw her eyes widenā¦ Those beautiful lips formed a thin line as she fought back tearsā¦ and that weak, defeated, āsorryā she managed before walking awayā¦ā
[Pause?]
ā...I donāt know why I blew upā¦ I was just so sick of the arguing, of her questioning why I wonāt do this or that for her when we can totally afford itā¦ā
[Pause?]
[He sighs again, eyes down]
ā...When I started medical school, it was to become a doctor, and a damned good one. Myā¦ Dad needed care at the time. He only had a few years left to liveā¦ I could work and study or I could take care of my father and have no income for a few yearsā¦ My wife offered to be his caretaker while I finished schoolā¦ She only asked that, when the time came and Dad had passed, I help her get her educational goals goingā¦ He passed three years ago and thereās just been no damned time! I need her at home with our newborns!ā
[Pause?]
āA nanny is an option, sure, but my parents missed my entire childhood because they were hard workers. I donāt want that for our sonsā¦ I know she wants to go. I know sheās tiredā¦ God knows I know that, but I have no idea how to take care of the boys and no time to learnā¦ā
[...]
ā...I know itās unfair to herā¦ I love my wife, but itās not exactly like sheās faultlessā¦ The house isnāt always the cleanestā¦ The kids are always taken care of. Iām always taken care of, so Iā¦ fuck, I know I have very little reason to complainā¦ā
[Pause?]
āOf course, I tell her I appreciate her!ā
[Pause?]
āDo I tell her with my actionsā¦? Iā¦ I take her out when I canā¦ I buy her all the luxuries she never got growing up, I get along great with her fatherā¦ better than she does, reallyā¦ and up until that fight, our intimacy was great!ā
[Pause?]
āElaborate on my relationship with her father? I meanā¦ Hankās a good guy but heās pretty open that he didnāt originally want a daughter. Itās not great of him to joke about it but sheās still pretty sensitiveā¦ She tries hard to make him proud and itās not an easy task. He was a top surgeon in the country before retiring, so we bond over that.ā
[...Pause]
āShe does want to go to medical school too, yeah. Why?ā
[...]
ā...Well, yesā¦ Having a father who values that experience judge you for being a stay-at-home mother isā¦ Oh.ā
[...]
[He rubs his face, swearing quietly under his breath]
ā...Fuck meā¦ And Iām rubbing it in her faceā¦ Oh, my God, I deserve every stereotypical rolling pin to the head that has ever existed!ā
[Pause?]
āNoā¦ When I asked her before she said sheās glad me and her father get onā¦ She knows my father was never aroundā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
ā...Iāll apologize to herā¦ I would, anyway, if sheād listen to meā¦ā
[Pause??]
āIāve tried talking to her, over and overā¦ She stares right through me, gives the briefest answers she can, or just murmurs, āNo thank youā. Sheās not eating as much, she hasnāt smiled, and now the older kids are asking me why mommy is so sadā¦ I even asked if sheād join me here and it was the same! A sad, quiet, āNo thank youā...ā
[Pauseā¦]
ā...I wasnāt the best when she was pregnant, noā¦ We argued a lot over so many small, insignificant thingsā¦ I love her, though, I swear on it!ā
[Pauseā¦]
[SFX: Some notes being taken]
[While you jot down notes, he asks a very painful, immensely sad question, quiet as the little boy he once was:
āDoctor? ...Am I ā¦ abusiveā¦?ā
[You peer at him over your clipboard and his expression is heartbreaking]
[...Pause.]
āI thought I wasnātā¦ I thought I knew what abuse looked like, but Iād get these moments of panic and anger any time sheād ask me to help with the kids and I just thought it was the stress andā¦ā
[The cold, clinical veneer shatters and you watch this incredibly wealthy, well-established man break down sobbing]
[Pauseā¦]
āI do want to be a good husband and father! With everything in me, I want my wife back!ā
[He hides his face in his hands and just sobs as you slide him the tissue box]
[SFX: The tissue box being used/the clock ticking]
[Pauseā¦]
ā...Pleaseā¦ How do I get her to sit down with me and talk?? Iām terrified, she has a history ofā¦ ahem, apologies, I didnāt ask her if it was OK to share her details, so Iāll refrain. Point isā¦despite all of that, my wife is one of the most kind, selfless people on the planet, and I will do anything to make her smile again!ā
[Pause]
[He listens, still sobbing silently as you try and give him a path]
āYesā¦ Yes, thatās brilliant! Offer to take the kids more or even parenting classes so I can build her way back up to school, of courseā¦ā
[Pause?]
āHow do I feel about itā¦? Terrifiedā¦ but hopefulā¦ Sheās such an incredible mother that I worry Iāll mess our poor boys up with my admittedly beginner skillsā¦ But Iāve made her wait long enough and itās gone too far, now. I needed this reality check before it was too late and I lost her.ā
[SFX: His phone buzzing]
āPardon, one moment.ā
[He takes his phone out and glances at it. The annoyance in his expression slowly turns to pale dread]
[Pauseā¦?]
ā...s-sheās in the hospitalā¦ā
[...?]
[He breathlessly stands, almost zombie-like as he gathers his things]
ā...Self-inflicted woundsā¦. She tried to kill herself.ā
[...]
ā...I have to go, now.ā
[You assure him you understand as he hurries from your office, out to his car, and then quickly speeds off. You feel yourself go numb as the uncertainty sets inā¦ The not knowing. You wonder if the poor woman hearing her husbandās words might have made a difference. You wish, somehow, she could haveā¦]
[SFX: Fade out on him hurrying out of your office/racing off in his car]
[To be continued]
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Note: This is why you don't challenge me to write slice-of-life angst.
Second note: I'm going to drop this, not elaborate, and go to bed, lol <3
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