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[M4AF] If You Can Hear Me ["Two" Listeners][Remorseful Neglectful Husband Speaker][Therapist Listener][Neglected Wife Listener]["Ghost" Listener][Confession][Argument/Fight][Sad][Revelations][TW: Offscreen Suicide Attempt/Neglect/Mentions of Abuse/General Hard Angst]
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ItsEsmeJones is a male in Revelations
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Context: Your patient today is Dr. Valente, a top practitioner and doctor in the country. He urgently requested your help after having a fight with his wife. After hearing him out, you almost wish his wife could hear it as well... Maybe it would have been different...

Setting: Dr. Steven's office

Tags:[M4AF][["Two" Listeners][Remorseful Neglectful Husband Speaker][Therapist Listener][Neglected Wife Listener]["Ghost" Listener][Confession][Argument/Fight][Sad][Revelations][TW: Offscreen Suicide Attempt/Neglect/Mentions of Abuse/General Hard Angst]

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[Scene opens in a therapistā€™s office]

[SFX: A clock ticking against a generally calm environment]

[You peer over your clipboard at the older gentleman sitting across from you. His eyes are bloodshot and he looks exhausted]

ā€œThank you for squeezing me into your schedule, Dr. Stevens.ā€

[Pause?]

[He shuts his eyes, breath shaky]

ā€œYesā€¦ I apologize for being pushy about it, butā€¦ my home life has had a bit of a shake-up andā€¦ I need helpā€¦ā€

[The man before you is Dr. Valente, a renowned practitioner. Handsome, well-spoken, and a bit dense, at times. Seeing him this broken is an odd experience]

[Pause?]

[He takes a shaky breath]

ā€œ...My wife and I had a bad fightā€¦ and I fear sheā€™s given up on meā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œ...I was at home, getting ready for work. She approached me and asked about a sore subjectā€¦ One that weā€™d been fighting about for years on end, and I lost my temperā€¦ Itā€™s the worst mistake Iā€™ve ever madeā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œ...Even knowing youā€™re my therapist, I still feel like youā€™ll be judging me harshly for this one. Which, I know, no judgment hereā€¦ But, she asked about going back to school. We have newborn twins and sheā€™s a stay-at-home mother. Iā€™ve told her, over and over, that I canā€™t put my career on hold, Iā€™m the sole breadwinner, but she keeps coming at me like thereā€™s a way to negotiate things. I justā€¦ā€

[Pauseā€¦?]

ā€œ...I told her that she shouldnā€™t have asked for kids if she didnā€™t want to help raise them, and that I wouldnā€™t have my sons be abandoned like I was just because she was holding a grudge against me for things I couldnā€™t controlā€¦ā€

[...]

[He looks down, deeply troubled]

ā€œ...I regretted it the instant the words left my mouthā€¦ The second I saw her eyes widenā€¦ Those beautiful lips formed a thin line as she fought back tearsā€¦ and that weak, defeated, ā€˜sorryā€™ she managed before walking awayā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œ...I donā€™t know why I blew upā€¦ I was just so sick of the arguing, of her questioning why I wonā€™t do this or that for her when we can totally afford itā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

[He sighs again, eyes down]

ā€œ...When I started medical school, it was to become a doctor, and a damned good one. Myā€¦ Dad needed care at the time. He only had a few years left to liveā€¦ I could work and study or I could take care of my father and have no income for a few yearsā€¦ My wife offered to be his caretaker while I finished schoolā€¦ She only asked that, when the time came and Dad had passed, I help her get her educational goals goingā€¦ He passed three years ago and thereā€™s just been no damned time! I need her at home with our newborns!ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œA nanny is an option, sure, but my parents missed my entire childhood because they were hard workers. I donā€™t want that for our sonsā€¦ I know she wants to go. I know sheā€™s tiredā€¦ God knows I know that, but I have no idea how to take care of the boys and no time to learnā€¦ā€

[...]

ā€œ...I know itā€™s unfair to herā€¦ I love my wife, but itā€™s not exactly like sheā€™s faultlessā€¦ The house isnā€™t always the cleanestā€¦ The kids are always taken care of. Iā€™m always taken care of, so Iā€¦ fuck, I know I have very little reason to complainā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œOf course, I tell her I appreciate her!ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œDo I tell her with my actionsā€¦? Iā€¦ I take her out when I canā€¦ I buy her all the luxuries she never got growing up, I get along great with her fatherā€¦ better than she does, reallyā€¦ and up until that fight, our intimacy was great!ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œElaborate on my relationship with her father? I meanā€¦ Hankā€™s a good guy but heā€™s pretty open that he didnā€™t originally want a daughter. Itā€™s not great of him to joke about it but sheā€™s still pretty sensitiveā€¦ She tries hard to make him proud and itā€™s not an easy task. He was a top surgeon in the country before retiring, so we bond over that.ā€

[...Pause]

ā€œShe does want to go to medical school too, yeah. Why?ā€

[...]

ā€œ...Well, yesā€¦ Having a father who values that experience judge you for being a stay-at-home mother isā€¦ Oh.ā€

[...]

[He rubs his face, swearing quietly under his breath]

ā€œ...Fuck meā€¦ And Iā€™m rubbing it in her faceā€¦ Oh, my God, I deserve every stereotypical rolling pin to the head that has ever existed!ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œNoā€¦ When I asked her before she said sheā€™s glad me and her father get onā€¦ She knows my father was never aroundā€¦ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

ā€œ...Iā€™ll apologize to herā€¦ I would, anyway, if sheā€™d listen to meā€¦ā€

[Pause??]

ā€œIā€™ve tried talking to her, over and overā€¦ She stares right through me, gives the briefest answers she can, or just murmurs, ā€˜No thank youā€™. Sheā€™s not eating as much, she hasnā€™t smiled, and now the older kids are asking me why mommy is so sadā€¦ I even asked if sheā€™d join me here and it was the same! A sad, quiet, ā€˜No thank youā€™...ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

ā€œ...I wasnā€™t the best when she was pregnant, noā€¦ We argued a lot over so many small, insignificant thingsā€¦ I love her, though, I swear on it!ā€

[Pauseā€¦]

[SFX: Some notes being taken]

[While you jot down notes, he asks a very painful, immensely sad question, quiet as the little boy he once was:

ā€œDoctor? ...Am I ā€¦ abusiveā€¦?ā€

[You peer at him over your clipboard and his expression is heartbreaking]

[...Pause.]

ā€œI thought I wasnā€™tā€¦ I thought I knew what abuse looked like, but Iā€™d get these moments of panic and anger any time sheā€™d ask me to help with the kids and I just thought it was the stress andā€¦ā€

[The cold, clinical veneer shatters and you watch this incredibly wealthy, well-established man break down sobbing]

[Pauseā€¦]

ā€œI do want to be a good husband and father! With everything in me, I want my wife back!ā€

[He hides his face in his hands and just sobs as you slide him the tissue box]

[SFX: The tissue box being used/the clock ticking]

[Pauseā€¦]

ā€œ...Pleaseā€¦ How do I get her to sit down with me and talk?? Iā€™m terrified, she has a history ofā€¦ ahem, apologies, I didnā€™t ask her if it was OK to share her details, so Iā€™ll refrain. Point isā€¦despite all of that, my wife is one of the most kind, selfless people on the planet, and I will do anything to make her smile again!ā€

[Pause]

[He listens, still sobbing silently as you try and give him a path]

ā€œYesā€¦ Yes, thatā€™s brilliant! Offer to take the kids more or even parenting classes so I can build her way back up to school, of courseā€¦ā€

[Pause?]

ā€œHow do I feel about itā€¦? Terrifiedā€¦ but hopefulā€¦ Sheā€™s such an incredible mother that I worry Iā€™ll mess our poor boys up with my admittedly beginner skillsā€¦ But Iā€™ve made her wait long enough and itā€™s gone too far, now. I needed this reality check before it was too late and I lost her.ā€

[SFX: His phone buzzing]

ā€œPardon, one moment.ā€

[He takes his phone out and glances at it. The annoyance in his expression slowly turns to pale dread]

[Pauseā€¦?]

ā€œ...s-sheā€™s in the hospitalā€¦ā€

[...?]

[He breathlessly stands, almost zombie-like as he gathers his things]

ā€œ...Self-inflicted woundsā€¦. She tried to kill herself.ā€

[...]

ā€œ...I have to go, now.ā€

[You assure him you understand as he hurries from your office, out to his car, and then quickly speeds off. You feel yourself go numb as the uncertainty sets inā€¦ The not knowing. You wonder if the poor woman hearing her husbandā€™s words might have made a difference. You wish, somehow, she could haveā€¦]

[SFX: Fade out on him hurrying out of your office/racing off in his car]

[To be continued]

ā€”----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Note: This is why you don't challenge me to write slice-of-life angst.

Second note: I'm going to drop this, not elaborate, and go to bed, lol <3

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